for Dawn of the Dead: After Effects1/18/2005 c1 
1CultOfOwls
Excellent story all-around. Good setting, good mood, perfect setting for this story. Can't wait for your next Dawn of The Dead story
1CultOfOwlsExcellent story all-around. Good setting, good mood, perfect setting for this story. Can't wait for your next Dawn of The Dead story
12/16/2004 c2 3LordCthulhu
The story reads much better now. Congratulations! I look forward to reading more of your stories.
3LordCthulhuThe story reads much better now. Congratulations! I look forward to reading more of your stories.
11/11/2004 c1 3LordCthulhu
The story is good, but the delivery makes it difficult to really get into it. More proofreading and paragraphing are definitely needed.
3LordCthulhuThe story is good, but the delivery makes it difficult to really get into it. More proofreading and paragraphing are definitely needed.
9/12/2004 c1 1Nightfyre
Good Work, 1 thing she's pregnant? Man, I'm going to have to change my story a bit. Coincidence that your story was originally called Dawn of the Dead: Aftermath, which is my title lol...
1NightfyreGood Work, 1 thing she's pregnant? Man, I'm going to have to change my story a bit. Coincidence that your story was originally called Dawn of the Dead: Aftermath, which is my title lol...
8/25/2004 c1 16Crow T R0bot
This story was a bit too fast, and there were places where paragraphs should have been seperated, though I do hope this isn't the only chapter and look forward to seeing more Dawn '78 stories on this site
16Crow T R0botThis story was a bit too fast, and there were places where paragraphs should have been seperated, though I do hope this isn't the only chapter and look forward to seeing more Dawn '78 stories on this site