2/16/2008 c6 8Brie92
that was a really good story but it seems like you started to rush it towards the end.
that was a really good story but it seems like you started to rush it towards the end.
11/20/2007 c6 2sasunaruroxs9300
that was really good i HATE parents that abuse there kids i wish the would all burn in the pits of hell were they would be torchered for all eternity muahahahahaha *hell flames in the background* ILL SEE YOU ALL IN HELL BITCHES (NOTE:i am talking to the parents) *whole family goes to emo corner due to sasunarurox9300 has gone insane*
that was really good i HATE parents that abuse there kids i wish the would all burn in the pits of hell were they would be torchered for all eternity muahahahahaha *hell flames in the background* ILL SEE YOU ALL IN HELL BITCHES (NOTE:i am talking to the parents) *whole family goes to emo corner due to sasunarurox9300 has gone insane*
11/20/2007 c4 sasunaruroxs9300
omg iruka and kakashi are so mean. is iruka really a pervert? well i like the story
omg iruka and kakashi are so mean. is iruka really a pervert? well i like the story
8/11/2007 c6 Totoro-chan
I really liked the concept of the story, and most of what you wrote, but there are some things that threw me off. For instance, I don't think that Naruto would spend all of his clothing money on spiky bracelets and things, (as those things are damn expensive) but I do see where you were coming from with that. I also don't see how this was really Kaka/Iru.
But otherwise good!
I really liked the concept of the story, and most of what you wrote, but there are some things that threw me off. For instance, I don't think that Naruto would spend all of his clothing money on spiky bracelets and things, (as those things are damn expensive) but I do see where you were coming from with that. I also don't see how this was really Kaka/Iru.
But otherwise good!
6/19/2007 c6 noname00
i was just starting to get into the fic but then this last chap just rushed everything though i still enjoyed it but that still put a damper in my enjoyment... i guess all in all it was a nice fic
i was just starting to get into the fic but then this last chap just rushed everything though i still enjoyed it but that still put a damper in my enjoyment... i guess all in all it was a nice fic
3/20/2007 c6 7Besieged Infection
pretty sad but cute story. I almost cried near the end, where the cops showed up at Naruto's house.
pretty sad but cute story. I almost cried near the end, where the cops showed up at Naruto's house.
12/13/2006 c6 3savelove
the ending was fast ...to fast it was like
born
married
died
wheres the sex in that?
but the idea was good you could have soo made it like 20 chapters! long ones! sasuke seemed like a girl..
wow it would have been soo good it you took some more time on it!
but at least you finshed some people dont even do that and that is the worst thing that they can do so thanks for finishing it!
thanks!
the ending was fast ...to fast it was like
born
married
died
wheres the sex in that?
but the idea was good you could have soo made it like 20 chapters! long ones! sasuke seemed like a girl..
wow it would have been soo good it you took some more time on it!
but at least you finshed some people dont even do that and that is the worst thing that they can do so thanks for finishing it!
thanks!
11/13/2006 c6 Lady Chou101
hi i noticed you have 99 reviews so i said what the heck you deserv another review just so you can reach 100 tripple diggets congrats!
i havent read your story yet but i did save it and i'm planning on reading it i like anything that has rape -drools-
i love drama anyway good luck with you future storys if your writing some more!
hi i noticed you have 99 reviews so i said what the heck you deserv another review just so you can reach 100 tripple diggets congrats!
i havent read your story yet but i did save it and i'm planning on reading it i like anything that has rape -drools-
i love drama anyway good luck with you future storys if your writing some more!
10/28/2006 c6 mathip
um...what? xD it was great until the last chapter. i mean really, it was as if naruto snapped his fingers and he fell in love. and if narutos last name is uzumaki, then why are his parents Mr. and Mrs. Wood?
um...what? xD it was great until the last chapter. i mean really, it was as if naruto snapped his fingers and he fell in love. and if narutos last name is uzumaki, then why are his parents Mr. and Mrs. Wood?