for What is Love?4/19/2005 c6 
9M-python-girl
THAT WAS A KICK ASS DIS! go you. though i would like you to finish the plot. (if it only takes 2 chappies, that is fine.) and i do enjoy your writeing. so please please PLEASE update soon? please? i love you.
9M-python-girlTHAT WAS A KICK ASS DIS! go you. though i would like you to finish the plot. (if it only takes 2 chappies, that is fine.) and i do enjoy your writeing. so please please PLEASE update soon? please? i love you.
4/19/2005 c6 Malitia
Yay for nejidragon! i'm sorry you don't like this story anymore.. but u know. it really is a good one.. i thought anyways.. *blush* hahaha.
Yay for nejidragon! i'm sorry you don't like this story anymore.. but u know. it really is a good one.. i thought anyways.. *blush* hahaha.
4/16/2005 c6 1Malitia
NO00O0O0OO0O00O0O! you just got to a VERY important part and now ur discontinuing it! no0o0)O)OO)!O)1O)1! i LOVE this story! pls continue!@! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI AND ALL THAT IS HOLY... and my unborn child!@! just kidding about that one kukuku! SErIUOSYL! continue! i'm so flustered i can't even type! PLS!
1MalitiaNO00O0O0OO0O00O0O! you just got to a VERY important part and now ur discontinuing it! no0o0)O)OO)!O)1O)1! i LOVE this story! pls continue!@! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI AND ALL THAT IS HOLY... and my unborn child!@! just kidding about that one kukuku! SErIUOSYL! continue! i'm so flustered i can't even type! PLS!
4/16/2005 c6 Rutile
This is going to be pretty long, and harsh too, so if you can't take it, then I suggest you don't read it at all.
Discontinuing? For the second time? Most have forgiven you for the first time when you decided to discontinue, but for the second time? That is really too much. Good authors DO NOT write a fic, discontinue it, then change their minds and continue it, then discontinue it again! FOR GOD'S SAKE MAKE UP YOUR FUCKING MIND! Lost inspiration? That is one of the most pathetic excuses I heard. I have seen people who discontinue fics because of some personal problems, and those who discontinue because they simply do not have any more time to write. If you don't have any inspiration, then go find some! You don't just sit there and wait for it to come to you! Read some more fanfictions to get ideas! Read through your reviews again and see if there is anything worth using! Heck, even pictures can work!
However, I think that in this case, it's not inspiration that you have lost, but motivation. You don't feel motivated enough to continue this fic, which explains your discontinuing it both times. I'm not accusing you of anything; I'm simply stating my opinion. And to be frank, In doubt that many will be able to forgive you this time, even if you do decide to continue it again. I personally do not think that I will ever be able to forgive you. It is completely irresponsible for you to leave people hanging, and suddenly announce that you're discontinuing the fic. No offense, but this is the truth.
If you really plan on discontinuing, then please remove this fic off the site ASAP. I know a lot of people who hate discontnued fics, and anyway they aren't worth reading once they're not being continued anymore, no matter how good the fic is. I;m not sure, perhaps I already saw it coming, especially when you said that you were 'not so into it anymore'. However that doesn't stop me from being disappointed.
I do hope that you think this through again. It's a pity to discontnue fics. And if the above offended you in any way, I sincerely apologize. Feel free to ignore all that crap if you are offended.
~*currently very angry* kawaii kitsune-kun
This is going to be pretty long, and harsh too, so if you can't take it, then I suggest you don't read it at all.
Discontinuing? For the second time? Most have forgiven you for the first time when you decided to discontinue, but for the second time? That is really too much. Good authors DO NOT write a fic, discontinue it, then change their minds and continue it, then discontinue it again! FOR GOD'S SAKE MAKE UP YOUR FUCKING MIND! Lost inspiration? That is one of the most pathetic excuses I heard. I have seen people who discontinue fics because of some personal problems, and those who discontinue because they simply do not have any more time to write. If you don't have any inspiration, then go find some! You don't just sit there and wait for it to come to you! Read some more fanfictions to get ideas! Read through your reviews again and see if there is anything worth using! Heck, even pictures can work!
However, I think that in this case, it's not inspiration that you have lost, but motivation. You don't feel motivated enough to continue this fic, which explains your discontinuing it both times. I'm not accusing you of anything; I'm simply stating my opinion. And to be frank, In doubt that many will be able to forgive you this time, even if you do decide to continue it again. I personally do not think that I will ever be able to forgive you. It is completely irresponsible for you to leave people hanging, and suddenly announce that you're discontinuing the fic. No offense, but this is the truth.
If you really plan on discontinuing, then please remove this fic off the site ASAP. I know a lot of people who hate discontnued fics, and anyway they aren't worth reading once they're not being continued anymore, no matter how good the fic is. I;m not sure, perhaps I already saw it coming, especially when you said that you were 'not so into it anymore'. However that doesn't stop me from being disappointed.
I do hope that you think this through again. It's a pity to discontnue fics. And if the above offended you in any way, I sincerely apologize. Feel free to ignore all that crap if you are offended.
~*currently very angry* kawaii kitsune-kun
3/25/2005 c1 3host
Nice idea, i will just suggest to read it outloud to yourself before posting it, helps with the grammar. very good, keep going!
3hostNice idea, i will just suggest to read it outloud to yourself before posting it, helps with the grammar. very good, keep going!
3/24/2005 c5 hogo-chan
finally you updated! how could you make me wait so long? but thats okay! good chapter! please please please update faster!
finally you updated! how could you make me wait so long? but thats okay! good chapter! please please please update faster!
3/23/2005 c5 10Kali Swifteye
KILL HIM, SASUKE! RIP OUT HIS GUTS! I HOPE THE COPS SHOOT THE HELL OUT OF HIM! GIVE HIM TWICE HIS WEIGHT IN BULLETS, SLICING HIS BODY INTO RIBBONS! I can't believe Iruka was so mean...I hope that he sees how horrible he was and adopts Naruto! That would be good.
10Kali SwifteyeKILL HIM, SASUKE! RIP OUT HIS GUTS! I HOPE THE COPS SHOOT THE HELL OUT OF HIM! GIVE HIM TWICE HIS WEIGHT IN BULLETS, SLICING HIS BODY INTO RIBBONS! I can't believe Iruka was so mean...I hope that he sees how horrible he was and adopts Naruto! That would be good.
3/22/2005 c5 2Tunazap
;-; Poor Naruto-chan! Sasuke will save him though D as the good little seme that he is!
2Tunazap;-; Poor Naruto-chan! Sasuke will save him though D as the good little seme that he is!
3/22/2005 c5 5Nejidragon
*blink* well, that was a bit rushed at the end...not enough tourture...;; *cough* anyway, I guess I could live with it O.O
5Nejidragon*blink* well, that was a bit rushed at the end...not enough tourture...;; *cough* anyway, I guess I could live with it O.O
3/21/2005 c5 MAB LuvR
MAB: WHAT THE FACKING HECK HAPPENS? HOW CAN U LEAVE US HANING LIKE THAT? *goes on rampage cuz of what will happen*
Izzy: she'll be alright...
Lars: i'm with her! wtf happens huh? *joins MAB*
Izzy: those 2 have lost *slaps hand to forehead*
J-Ray: r u lovebirds done?
MAB: 1) Lars has a gf 2) i don't like him like that 3)HAVE U LOST UR MIND?
J-Ray:just shuttin u up
MAB: UPDATE!
MAB: WHAT THE FACKING HECK HAPPENS? HOW CAN U LEAVE US HANING LIKE THAT? *goes on rampage cuz of what will happen*
Izzy: she'll be alright...
Lars: i'm with her! wtf happens huh? *joins MAB*
Izzy: those 2 have lost *slaps hand to forehead*
J-Ray: r u lovebirds done?
MAB: 1) Lars has a gf 2) i don't like him like that 3)HAVE U LOST UR MIND?
J-Ray:just shuttin u up
MAB: UPDATE!