for What is Love?3/21/2005 c5 Mez
˚o˚... jesus, I SO want to know what's going to happen next 0.0 Uptade soon plz
˚o˚... jesus, I SO want to know what's going to happen next 0.0 Uptade soon plz
3/21/2005 c5 
1Malitia
haha i'm so stupid, when u said 'slamming into naruto's body" i thought u meant like.. punching him or i donno.. slammin him into something lol! well don't i feel stupid.. i read it again and realized that i was way off. anyways, it was an awesome chap and i loved it! i hope theres more to come sooN!
1Malitiahaha i'm so stupid, when u said 'slamming into naruto's body" i thought u meant like.. punching him or i donno.. slammin him into something lol! well don't i feel stupid.. i read it again and realized that i was way off. anyways, it was an awesome chap and i loved it! i hope theres more to come sooN!
3/2/2005 c5 1RaitenKitsune
ACK! Kage is an a** and so i Miyu! Oh my poor little naruto! sasuke save him soon plz! well it was good, cant wait to read more
1RaitenKitsuneACK! Kage is an a** and so i Miyu! Oh my poor little naruto! sasuke save him soon plz! well it was good, cant wait to read more
3/1/2005 c5 16TheInflictedFinger
Wonderful update!*mentally beat Kage down with hammer*
I love love love this story oh so much, I can't wait for your next update!And thankyou for the reviews!^_^Im fourteen right now and wont be fifteen for quite a while-.-;, I do need to update my profile some.
And your stories are not bad at ALL. I love them! On only your FOURTH chapter you've gotten 61 reviews!Obviously many many people agree with me^^ Keep it up!
16TheInflictedFingerWonderful update!*mentally beat Kage down with hammer*
I love love love this story oh so much, I can't wait for your next update!And thankyou for the reviews!^_^Im fourteen right now and wont be fifteen for quite a while-.-;, I do need to update my profile some.
And your stories are not bad at ALL. I love them! On only your FOURTH chapter you've gotten 61 reviews!Obviously many many people agree with me^^ Keep it up!
3/1/2005 c5 Rutile
I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU'RE CONTINUING! Your story has a lot of potential, and it would be a shame to give up!
Also, I went through your reviews, and that one was pretty harsh, although it was meant to help you. You should feel lucky that so many people even bothered to write out such long reviews to help you; I don't think that anyone would give a fuck if I discontinued my own story (not that I plan on doing that, since I enjoy writing).
I have read the prequel, though, and it cleared up quite a few questions I had in mind, although not all. The major problem I'm having now is about Kakahsi and Iruka. Naruto tried to blackmail them, but actually I don't think that it is enough of a reason for them to be mean to him. They just aren't that type, and in most fics they would catch him, smash the camera AND THEN forget about it, and continue treating him like normal. That's why I think that you need another, deeper reason other than that, and in one of your reviews there was a very good idea, about how Naruto's parents tell him that Naruto is always involved in street fights and so on. It can give them a better reason to be mean to him, because they think that he is a bad influence on the other kids.
well, that pretty much clears up everything, and I hope that you update soon! And if you ever get any more flames, just remember, don't let them get you down, because the number of positive reviews you get can overcome the negative ones any day! ^^
I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU'RE CONTINUING! Your story has a lot of potential, and it would be a shame to give up!
Also, I went through your reviews, and that one was pretty harsh, although it was meant to help you. You should feel lucky that so many people even bothered to write out such long reviews to help you; I don't think that anyone would give a fuck if I discontinued my own story (not that I plan on doing that, since I enjoy writing).
I have read the prequel, though, and it cleared up quite a few questions I had in mind, although not all. The major problem I'm having now is about Kakahsi and Iruka. Naruto tried to blackmail them, but actually I don't think that it is enough of a reason for them to be mean to him. They just aren't that type, and in most fics they would catch him, smash the camera AND THEN forget about it, and continue treating him like normal. That's why I think that you need another, deeper reason other than that, and in one of your reviews there was a very good idea, about how Naruto's parents tell him that Naruto is always involved in street fights and so on. It can give them a better reason to be mean to him, because they think that he is a bad influence on the other kids.
well, that pretty much clears up everything, and I hope that you update soon! And if you ever get any more flames, just remember, don't let them get you down, because the number of positive reviews you get can overcome the negative ones any day! ^^
3/1/2005 c5 1Puchu-chan
OMG, the CLIFFY~~!(well, to me it is, anyway.. ^^; ) *dies*
please, continue soon! please, please, please! *gets down on knees and begs*
Great chapter, I love it. Keep up the good work! *huggle*
1Puchu-chanOMG, the CLIFFY~~!(well, to me it is, anyway.. ^^; ) *dies*
please, continue soon! please, please, please! *gets down on knees and begs*
Great chapter, I love it. Keep up the good work! *huggle*
2/28/2005 c5 Malitia
awe its ok! as long as ur gonna keep going its al god
awe its ok! as long as ur gonna keep going its al god
2/27/2005 c4 4WildfiresVirtue
I hope your Grandmother is okay. I'm offering if you still need a beta reader. Can't say much about constructive criticsim but if you need encouragement that i can do.
4WildfiresVirtueI hope your Grandmother is okay. I'm offering if you still need a beta reader. Can't say much about constructive criticsim but if you need encouragement that i can do.
2/16/2005 c4 kakisensei
Hey, don't worry about the reviews, though what they said didn't mean what you thought.
If I didn't like the first 2 chapters I wouldn't have tried helping. The third chapter didn't sound as well thought out as the first two, but that doesn't mean it's bad, I still like it. If it was I wouldn't have bothered writing a review. The only thing I don't like is that it's so short of a chapter. ^^' Good luck with the rest, and good luck with what you said in 4's A/N.
Hey, don't worry about the reviews, though what they said didn't mean what you thought.
If I didn't like the first 2 chapters I wouldn't have tried helping. The third chapter didn't sound as well thought out as the first two, but that doesn't mean it's bad, I still like it. If it was I wouldn't have bothered writing a review. The only thing I don't like is that it's so short of a chapter. ^^' Good luck with the rest, and good luck with what you said in 4's A/N.
2/10/2005 c4 Liz
I think your story is super awsome! But, I wish you would update it sooner. Please update, okay? It's just so good. T-T
I think your story is super awsome! But, I wish you would update it sooner. Please update, okay? It's just so good. T-T
1/22/2005 c4 16TheInflictedFinger
This story is so awesome..;-;*clings to story desperately* Please update soon, I'll be watching..waitingO_o
I hope your grandma gets better^^
16TheInflictedFingerThis story is so awesome..;-;*clings to story desperately* Please update soon, I'll be watching..waitingO_o
I hope your grandma gets better^^