12/18/2007 c1 BlackBerge
This is the first story of yours that I ever read. I've been thinking about it latly and think that it would be better if you changed the boys name to Hugo(Hermione's real son.) Just a tip.
This is the first story of yours that I ever read. I've been thinking about it latly and think that it would be better if you changed the boys name to Hugo(Hermione's real son.) Just a tip.
3/24/2005 c1 10IWasBornToTellYouILoveYou
I love the rain trilogy. all 3 are so cute. i love doing things like that in the rain. usually my friends act like josh and stare at me through the window. then i throw mud at the window and they scream like it might touch them. i think you should make another rainy day story.
p.s. where was ron in this story?
I love the rain trilogy. all 3 are so cute. i love doing things like that in the rain. usually my friends act like josh and stare at me through the window. then i throw mud at the window and they scream like it might touch them. i think you should make another rainy day story.
p.s. where was ron in this story?
2/15/2005 c1 19Rubber-duckiesofdoom
Oh so cute. Loved it - also love the rain and squishing my toes in the mud. It's the most romantic thing ever when you're by yourself. Don't ask.
Oh so cute. Loved it - also love the rain and squishing my toes in the mud. It's the most romantic thing ever when you're by yourself. Don't ask.
1/18/2005 c1 8never-again8642
hmm very sweet.. but i think you might want to put something in there about why ron isn't with them, assuming of course that josh IS ron's son.
just a thought.
cute otherwise, though! :)
hmm very sweet.. but i think you might want to put something in there about why ron isn't with them, assuming of course that josh IS ron's son.
just a thought.
cute otherwise, though! :)
9/7/2004 c1 monkeys-r-us
Oh, how cute! Good one Abbs.
(cough, cough)
No more R-H!
:+} lol, love ya, and your cutie wootie little ficky wicky!
Oh, how cute! Good one Abbs.
(cough, cough)
No more R-H!
:+} lol, love ya, and your cutie wootie little ficky wicky!
9/5/2004 c1 6chubby redburn
Following your advice, I read your "rainy" trilogy in order. Wonderful snapshots of a Hermione and Ron learning to relax and enjoy life. They are a rather uptight pair in the books, are they not? You have a ready gift of capturing moments effectively and doing so with very few words. I hope that you will continue to write and hope also that you consider writing works with your own original characters.
Following your advice, I read your "rainy" trilogy in order. Wonderful snapshots of a Hermione and Ron learning to relax and enjoy life. They are a rather uptight pair in the books, are they not? You have a ready gift of capturing moments effectively and doing so with very few words. I hope that you will continue to write and hope also that you consider writing works with your own original characters.
8/29/2004 c1 the Palindrome
Aw! How sweet! I love it! I really like how it ties in your other stories. Keep up the good work. If you want to give me a sneak peek of your H/D story, you're welcome to... lol.
~you-know-who
Aw! How sweet! I love it! I really like how it ties in your other stories. Keep up the good work. If you want to give me a sneak peek of your H/D story, you're welcome to... lol.
~you-know-who
8/28/2004 c1 11MyOwnLittleWorld
Aww, I'm so glad to see you have this up. I noticed I missed one "mum", sorry 'bout that. (o; Lol, hard for me to stray from my American ways. Well, keep giving us more wonderful one-shots!
HAnnah
Aww, I'm so glad to see you have this up. I noticed I missed one "mum", sorry 'bout that. (o; Lol, hard for me to stray from my American ways. Well, keep giving us more wonderful one-shots!
HAnnah
8/28/2004 c1 39Amelia L. Mendal
Aw, that was cute! I'm sending the link to my friend right now.
ME
P.S. Adorable! Love it! lol
Aw, that was cute! I'm sending the link to my friend right now.
ME
P.S. Adorable! Love it! lol