5/27/2006 c2 5Victoria Humblydum
oh, i really like this story so far. it's a good start. i just checked the date for the last time you updated and realized that apparently you are no longer writing this story. oops, oh well, i'll send the review anyway.
oh, i really like this story so far. it's a good start. i just checked the date for the last time you updated and realized that apparently you are no longer writing this story. oops, oh well, i'll send the review anyway.
5/8/2005 c2 21Tears-Of-Love-Tears-Of-Hate
I can't wait to find out what her secret is. This is a kewl story, update soon.
I can't wait to find out what her secret is. This is a kewl story, update soon.
5/8/2005 c1 Tears-Of-Love-Tears-Of-Hate
This is very interesting. I like Tonk's line about her name, had me laughing.
This is very interesting. I like Tonk's line about her name, had me laughing.
11/23/2004 c3 2Dragon Rider22
yey, fialy, lots of junk going on, school and such, so I understand why it is late, I havent even begun on my next chapter. ok, good chapter, even if it is short, so keep on keepin on, and I just have to say it, "Mini Cooper, Now I'm Super!"
yey, fialy, lots of junk going on, school and such, so I understand why it is late, I havent even begun on my next chapter. ok, good chapter, even if it is short, so keep on keepin on, and I just have to say it, "Mini Cooper, Now I'm Super!"
11/18/2004 c3 4Padfoot's Sidekick
Hey people! Did you know that you could write reviews to yourself? Cool, huh?
Hey people! Did you know that you could write reviews to yourself? Cool, huh?
10/26/2004 c2 dragon Rider22
very good for it not being a chapter.
very good for it not being a chapter.
9/20/2004 c1 Mrs. Riddle233
This is a graet read...actually its great to read it over and over again to get the whole effect...anylize the symbolizim... One thing though...more usage of varied words enriches the chapter... i like to feel the words melt in... other than that I commend you for such enthusiastic creativity!
This is a graet read...actually its great to read it over and over again to get the whole effect...anylize the symbolizim... One thing though...more usage of varied words enriches the chapter... i like to feel the words melt in... other than that I commend you for such enthusiastic creativity!
9/6/2004 c1 Dragon Rider22
ten reviews, I said that once, no one reviewd, but I updated anyway. please update, this is good stuff.
ten reviews, I said that once, no one reviewd, but I updated anyway. please update, this is good stuff.
9/2/2004 c1 gnomemagnet
You if u made it just a bit longer it would of been awesome.All around i thought it was good and i realy think you should keep adding on to it.Keep uip the good work.
-Caroline(ziggy)
You if u made it just a bit longer it would of been awesome.All around i thought it was good and i realy think you should keep adding on to it.Keep uip the good work.
-Caroline(ziggy)
8/29/2004 c1 Master OmegaOmni
Great story! I wanna read some more! -Clings to her/him, and begs for him/her to write more storehs.- I like your stories!
Great story! I wanna read some more! -Clings to her/him, and begs for him/her to write more storehs.- I like your stories!