for Jack and Jill8/8/2007 c1 rockinaviators9
I'm really interested in this story, the way you write kind of drags me in.
Be a little clearer on your transitions though...I got confused when we started listening to Jack/Gibbs convo, I thought they were on the same boat as Jill for a moment.
But otherwise really good!
:)
I'm really interested in this story, the way you write kind of drags me in.
Be a little clearer on your transitions though...I got confused when we started listening to Jack/Gibbs convo, I thought they were on the same boat as Jill for a moment.
But otherwise really good!
:)
2/17/2006 c1 irena
i luv ur story! it's so sad...poor grl...will jack fall 4 er? hope so...:)anyways keep up da good work! plz continue ur goin great !
luv rena
i luv ur story! it's so sad...poor grl...will jack fall 4 er? hope so...:)anyways keep up da good work! plz continue ur goin great !
luv rena
5/16/2005 c1 
2danzin mushrooms
I LOVE this story, its wicked good. No spelling errors that I can see, but what in the world does "gel" mean? sozzy, i ish a bit slow today. PLEASEE update soon or i will be forced to annoy you relentlessly.
2danzin mushroomsI LOVE this story, its wicked good. No spelling errors that I can see, but what in the world does "gel" mean? sozzy, i ish a bit slow today. PLEASEE update soon or i will be forced to annoy you relentlessly.
2/15/2005 c1 1Pin-ups and Paper-clips
Gillian, It's Gillian, it's my sister's name. Spelled with a G not a J to be correct, but Jill is spelled with a J. It's Irish you know
1Pin-ups and Paper-clipsGillian, It's Gillian, it's my sister's name. Spelled with a G not a J to be correct, but Jill is spelled with a J. It's Irish you know
2/5/2005 c1 1Sparrow's Someone
Very interesting... please update! also, i like how tastefully you did the rape scene. update, update, update!
sparrows someone
1Sparrow's SomeoneVery interesting... please update! also, i like how tastefully you did the rape scene. update, update, update!
sparrows someone
2/1/2005 c1 SpectralLady
Hey. I know you haven't updated this story in a while but please do! I like the start to it. Hope you'll write more! Ta ta, SpectralLady
Hey. I know you haven't updated this story in a while but please do! I like the start to it. Hope you'll write more! Ta ta, SpectralLady
12/6/2004 c1 Casey
Please write more...
Please write more...
11/23/2004 c1 kaiho
fun shit
fun shit
9/1/2004 c1 1SarahGreen1458
hi! Awsome, Awsome story! Im hooked already please hurry and add more chapters fast!
1SarahGreen1458hi! Awsome, Awsome story! Im hooked already please hurry and add more chapters fast!
9/1/2004 c1 lain
quite good.
very real description of the life of a girl on a pirates ship...
but is it possible a spanish pirate attacks an english boat *near* the english border. i wouldnt think so.
quite good.
very real description of the life of a girl on a pirates ship...
but is it possible a spanish pirate attacks an english boat *near* the english border. i wouldnt think so.
8/31/2004 c1 spanisheyes20
wow i wonder what jack is interested in. lolz
great start cant wait 4 more update so0o0on.
lotz a luv alena xoxo
wow i wonder what jack is interested in. lolz
great start cant wait 4 more update so0o0on.
lotz a luv alena xoxo