for A River in Egypt11/24/2004 c1 velvetmorning
I love DK stories and there really aren't enough of them around. This is one of the best ones I've read. Will there be more?
I love DK stories and there really aren't enough of them around. This is one of the best ones I've read. Will there be more?
10/13/2004 c1 
106Eledhwen
I read this before you revised it - did I review? Anyway, I still love it. So effective, and DK's voice is great.
106EledhwenI read this before you revised it - did I review? Anyway, I still love it. So effective, and DK's voice is great.
10/11/2004 c1 19MaidM
That's a beautiful story. You've really done a wonderfull job showing how it must be for the people John left on Earth, and the thought that DK dreams about his adventures is true brilliance. Keep up the good work,
MaidM
19MaidMThat's a beautiful story. You've really done a wonderfull job showing how it must be for the people John left on Earth, and the thought that DK dreams about his adventures is true brilliance. Keep up the good work,
MaidM
9/18/2004 c1 32The Sithspawn
Nice original idea. Is this a one shot or will there be other chapters? Also how is DK receiving these visions?
Keep up the good work.
Please update soon.
32The SithspawnNice original idea. Is this a one shot or will there be other chapters? Also how is DK receiving these visions?
Keep up the good work.
Please update soon.