Just In
for You Can't Escape

3/23/2011 c1 48Zuvios Gemini
Even though it was really short, Gravitation is still one of my favorite yaoi anime. :) You personified Shuichi beautifully. Nice work. :)
6/30/2005 c1 Ob53zt

hey Heather!


i found your FFN account...

[hehe...i know..i'm psychic..XD]

and if i forgot to say..

tis Tangertine...

or Tangie..

or whatever you'd like to call me these days...



i love the poem, Heather!


i think it's very Shuichi..

and the format makes it flow really well and seem energetic and upbeat..

kinda like Shuichi...


now that i've finally read some of your writing...

you're a great writer!

[as if you didn't know that was coming...XP]

and no..

it doesn't scare me that you're empathetic with them..

you're still my best friend, no matter what...


well, loved the poem, darling..

keep up the great work!

5/26/2005 c1 8yo wuz up
Wow I luve your fic It was well done and no grammer mistake (unlike myn)
10/25/2004 c1 142The Fellow Marauder
I am in math right now and not paying attention. But you know very well you are more important to me than math! Even if my mother does not see it that way, I love you.

Not much of a review, huh? ^^; gomen!

I like this, Smitty. This is well-written and has a nice poetic format to it. It shows Shuu-chan's real feelings. He is so in love with Eiri and it is obvious that Eiri loves Shuu. WHY WON'T HE ADMIT IT!

Well, nicely done. Eek! Have to pay attention!



10/3/2004 c1 4Prince Toki
You really do show a connection with the characters Shindo-sensai! That's why I love this poem! You can really feel how Shuichi is feeling! Well write more! *v sign*
10/2/2004 c1 yaoihime
This is good. It's almost like you're writing a new song for shuichi to sing to Eiri. It's good but try not to use bold writing so much in your fics ok. Otherwise, great job on the format and try to write more Gravitaion fics.

Keep up the good work sis!

9/22/2004 c1 1clari chan
I really liked this...when i get the chance i will go check out your Fake fanfics since Fake is another of my favorite mangas...You should continue writing gravi fics...your good at it :D
9/21/2004 c1 33Ildreen Love
I liked the format. And it was a very good fic, you captured the way Shu feels very well.

I just wonder if you have to put everything in bold, because I'm not very fond of it...

Anyway. Keep on writing!

Ja ne!
9/21/2004 c1 Exile-the-Magnificent
This is WONDERFUL! I'm a huge fan of Gravitation so I really enjoyed this! Thumbs up totally!
9/21/2004 c1 3Chrissy430
This is good! I liked it a lot! It seems like some stuff that Shuichi would want to say to Yuki too. I liked your format!
9/21/2004 c1 20Profiterole
This is so romantic and poetic! I think that's what Shuichi feels, even if Yuki sometimes rejects him. But we all know he does that in order to protect Shuichi.

I like the format too. It's relevant, since Shuichi writes lyrics.

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service