
3/29/2009 c1
1Scorpion1985
HAHAHA crying cause he wouldn't see his parents.
My Mom and dad got divorced and my dad married an insane bitch who killed him and herself and my mom married an abusive (To her) Husband and he was very verbal abusive to me and my brothers.

HAHAHA crying cause he wouldn't see his parents.
My Mom and dad got divorced and my dad married an insane bitch who killed him and herself and my mom married an abusive (To her) Husband and he was very verbal abusive to me and my brothers.
12/9/2004 c1
1Motosuwa-Hideki
I's liked to tell you many people don't like bad words in nice stories. And the message you sent me...hard to read cause you never stop.

I's liked to tell you many people don't like bad words in nice stories. And the message you sent me...hard to read cause you never stop.
12/6/2004 c1
13Mega-Melfina
You know, typing is important. Use capitals and puncuation correctly, and more people will want to read.

You know, typing is important. Use capitals and puncuation correctly, and more people will want to read.
10/6/2004 c1 hikosama-wintermoon
umm...ok... is this going to be ongoing or not? and if not...why is it rated R?
umm...ok... is this going to be ongoing or not? and if not...why is it rated R?
9/28/2004 c1 Daswitxxher
Um i think its pretty good... iike the idea of an america with poor japanese replacing keitaro. but i dont quite get the ending... didnt seem to fit the story.
Later much,
Um i think its pretty good... iike the idea of an america with poor japanese replacing keitaro. but i dont quite get the ending... didnt seem to fit the story.
Later much,
9/26/2004 c1 The Eromancer
hahahaha.. weakling... hehehehehe
This guy's pathetic! if its you... I'm sorry. *caugh*not*caugh*
hahahaha.. weakling... hehehehehe
This guy's pathetic! if its you... I'm sorry. *caugh*not*caugh*
9/26/2004 c1 lhfan978
aww darn...there is no keitaro...im sure this is probably gonna be a good fic...but i dont really read chracter replacement stories...hope u continue to write more stories though!
aww darn...there is no keitaro...im sure this is probably gonna be a good fic...but i dont really read chracter replacement stories...hope u continue to write more stories though!
9/26/2004 c1
1Hanku Royiaki
Not bad! Not bad! A few typos, but everything's going in the right direction.
UPDATE SOON DAMMIT!
Hanku

Not bad! Not bad! A few typos, but everything's going in the right direction.
UPDATE SOON DAMMIT!
Hanku