for Three Rivers4/9/2021 c47 Zara1017
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON PRETTY PLEASE.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON PRETTY PLEASE.
4/7/2017 c47 Guest
Awe man. I was hoping for more. I want to see what Tekoa will do. Will he kill Piccolo? Or even Gohan? Will he torture Piccolo cause he wants revenge? Or will he go after Sabrina to get to Piccolo? Please tell me.
Awe man. I was hoping for more. I want to see what Tekoa will do. Will he kill Piccolo? Or even Gohan? Will he torture Piccolo cause he wants revenge? Or will he go after Sabrina to get to Piccolo? Please tell me.
3/11/2016 c31 BionicFemme
SO SAD! I was almost brought to tears! AND THAT'S PRETTY CLOSE! And I was listening to Jon Bellion's Woke the F*ck Up (Acoustic Version) and that made it more emotional.
SO SAD! I was almost brought to tears! AND THAT'S PRETTY CLOSE! And I was listening to Jon Bellion's Woke the F*ck Up (Acoustic Version) and that made it more emotional.
12/29/2014 c47 Kakurosu
this was a marvelous fic
but i am a little:
"AAAAAARGRGHH WHY NO OW OUCH MY HEART!"
because there is no sequel
apparently
this was a marvelous fic
but i am a little:
"AAAAAARGRGHH WHY NO OW OUCH MY HEART!"
because there is no sequel
apparently
12/28/2014 c8 Kakurosu
this is going well so far
in fact, this story seems BRILLIANT so far
this is going well so far
in fact, this story seems BRILLIANT so far
11/20/2010 c47 BrokenScouter
To me this entire story was amazingly and beautifully written.
I did cry a lot and laugh a lot, so you did an amazing job in writing it!^^
To me this entire story was amazingly and beautifully written.
I did cry a lot and laugh a lot, so you did an amazing job in writing it!^^
10/4/2010 c47 atasfan16
Where to begin? I loved this story so much. I wasn't actually looking for this kind of story but ended up loving it. I cried when Rhyne died. I also cried for some reason when Piccolo was talking Rikola. It was so sad and sweet and perfect. Again, I just love it so much. If you do ever make a sequal I will be there to read it. Thank you for making this story, I was truly sad when it ended.
Where to begin? I loved this story so much. I wasn't actually looking for this kind of story but ended up loving it. I cried when Rhyne died. I also cried for some reason when Piccolo was talking Rikola. It was so sad and sweet and perfect. Again, I just love it so much. If you do ever make a sequal I will be there to read it. Thank you for making this story, I was truly sad when it ended.
7/19/2010 c47 derpstein
Hehe...I think Sabrina is really me in an alternate universe. Including the astronomy aspect.
Hehe...I think Sabrina is really me in an alternate universe. Including the astronomy aspect.
7/19/2010 c27 derpstein
Holy shit! I laughed so hard at Kami's speech that my collar bone hurts! "If you so much as make googoo eyes..." Dear Kami, I'm still having critical giggle fits, and I'm crying. Nice job on the last 25 chapters as well. Very fun and exciting read. :)
Holy shit! I laughed so hard at Kami's speech that my collar bone hurts! "If you so much as make googoo eyes..." Dear Kami, I'm still having critical giggle fits, and I'm crying. Nice job on the last 25 chapters as well. Very fun and exciting read. :)
7/18/2010 c2 derpstein
Wow! Normally I don't like romance fanfictions, but this is turning out to be a very interesting work. I've only read to chapter two and I'm already hooked. High five!
Wow! Normally I don't like romance fanfictions, but this is turning out to be a very interesting work. I've only read to chapter two and I'm already hooked. High five!
8/22/2009 c47 khuang94
hi. i have read this story over so many times and i never get bored of it. great job on it. i want to know if u can write the ending that u had planned for thsi story. i want to read it. thx.
hi. i have read this story over so many times and i never get bored of it. great job on it. i want to know if u can write the ending that u had planned for thsi story. i want to read it. thx.
8/6/2009 c22 
14nequam-tenshi
I'm wondering why you didn't put the second part as a separate story as the sequal?
14nequam-tenshiI'm wondering why you didn't put the second part as a separate story as the sequal?
12/14/2008 c47 skywingz
loved it! i read it all in done sitting. hope you finish the sequel as well
loved it! i read it all in done sitting. hope you finish the sequel as well
12/11/2008 c47 hinatalover445
OMG! This is the BEST Piccolo Fanfic that I'V EVER READ! You have to put up to put up the sequel to this, DON'T KEEP US WAITING!
OMG! This is the BEST Piccolo Fanfic that I'V EVER READ! You have to put up to put up the sequel to this, DON'T KEEP US WAITING!