
10/12/2004 c1 icantfigureouthowtodeletethis
Hey Song wonderful story, it might prove to be more interesting than your other ones.
Hey Song wonderful story, it might prove to be more interesting than your other ones.
10/11/2004 c1 Bright1
Great job so far. I think you made the write choice for the name of your people now that I know what they mean! ^_^ This looks to be a very interesting story, so I can’t wait to see where you take it! I really like that your people have wings, also! ^_~
Keep up the great work,
Dawn
Great job so far. I think you made the write choice for the name of your people now that I know what they mean! ^_^ This looks to be a very interesting story, so I can’t wait to see where you take it! I really like that your people have wings, also! ^_~
Keep up the great work,
Dawn
10/11/2004 c1 firezone12
It's great so far. Please I can''t wait until u update with this story. Emerald eyes. cute. Hurry please
It's great so far. Please I can''t wait until u update with this story. Emerald eyes. cute. Hurry please
10/11/2004 c1 Larail
like it, keep going
like it, keep going
10/11/2004 c1
6CuriousDreamWeaver
Nice start. I quite like it. It's interesting. Please write more.
^_~
DreamWeaver

Nice start. I quite like it. It's interesting. Please write more.
^_~
DreamWeaver
10/10/2004 c1 bri
Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Hopefully, it'll be longer?
Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Hopefully, it'll be longer?
10/10/2004 c1 Dragon123456789
Hey, it's me again! Yay, i found it! sry, im a bit suga high right now, so don't mind me..anyway, where was I? oh, yea, awesome work! i can't wait to read more. plz write the first chappie really soon! i luv this story, it's soo cool. well, i g2g sry this is short but i g2g to this concert and we're like leaving right now, but i'll leave a long ass review next time..and i mean really long that it'll seem like an essay paper, maybe even longer than that ^-^lol. well g2g ttyl bye.
*~*Chelsea*~*
Hey, it's me again! Yay, i found it! sry, im a bit suga high right now, so don't mind me..anyway, where was I? oh, yea, awesome work! i can't wait to read more. plz write the first chappie really soon! i luv this story, it's soo cool. well, i g2g sry this is short but i g2g to this concert and we're like leaving right now, but i'll leave a long ass review next time..and i mean really long that it'll seem like an essay paper, maybe even longer than that ^-^lol. well g2g ttyl bye.
*~*Chelsea*~*