
3/2/2011 c16
4Ankaa Morningstar
HOLY ****. TAKUYA/HUNTER'S SISTER IS TAKAKO! YOU MEAN THE ONE THAT HELPED CREATE THE CATACLYSM! This'll be very interesting when Takuya faces of against his/her own sister. . .

HOLY ****. TAKUYA/HUNTER'S SISTER IS TAKAKO! YOU MEAN THE ONE THAT HELPED CREATE THE CATACLYSM! This'll be very interesting when Takuya faces of against his/her own sister. . .
3/2/2011 c12 Ankaa Morningstar
This is the greatest Twisted Metal fic I have ever read. I love Lost One's story.
This is the greatest Twisted Metal fic I have ever read. I love Lost One's story.
4/23/2006 c2
2Rocky Samson
Interesting...interesting...but, will are the contestants all working for the same goal or...hm...

Interesting...interesting...but, will are the contestants all working for the same goal or...hm...
4/23/2006 c1 Rocky Samson
Damien...this is great! I'm loving this storyline already! I swear, it's like if this were an actual Twisted Metal game from the people at Incog Inc. (or whatever they're called.) Anticipated to read more!
Damien...this is great! I'm loving this storyline already! I swear, it's like if this were an actual Twisted Metal game from the people at Incog Inc. (or whatever they're called.) Anticipated to read more!
11/1/2005 c3 Cody Greene
I was enjoying it untill i relixed almosted everybody had the same motive. Kinda Boring, couldnt read farther than Chapter 3.
I was enjoying it untill i relixed almosted everybody had the same motive. Kinda Boring, couldnt read farther than Chapter 3.
10/30/2005 c11
4Erentei Lord of Insanity
I must say, your ability to write has deteriorated. This is an excellent concept, but it loses something in execution. Please try and rethink this. Work on some other stories for a while.

I must say, your ability to write has deteriorated. This is an excellent concept, but it loses something in execution. Please try and rethink this. Work on some other stories for a while.
8/31/2005 c16 Spike Riley
Glad to see you're back. Hunter's looking better. Keep it up, and ignore that Joe guy.
Glad to see you're back. Hunter's looking better. Keep it up, and ignore that Joe guy.
8/13/2005 c5 Joe
THIS IS FUKING GAY
THIS IS FUKING GAY
7/27/2005 c1 Stacie S
Great story! Really exciting! Keep it up!
Great story! Really exciting! Keep it up!