for Shadow Walkers4/8/2005 c1 
32LunarianPrincess
FACINATING! this is a fantastic story, great characterization and language. i cant wait to read more! ^_-
32LunarianPrincessFACINATING! this is a fantastic story, great characterization and language. i cant wait to read more! ^_-
3/21/2005 c9 earthsnake
This has got to be the best ginny/draco fanfic I have read so far, I love the way u have portrayed the characters, and the story line kicks ass! Hope Ron comes to his senses, and that Johansson gets in deep shit, that ass deserves it.
Anywho, keep updating the chappies, since I have now become addicted 2 ur story, and will suffer if deprived of my weakly dose! ;D
This has got to be the best ginny/draco fanfic I have read so far, I love the way u have portrayed the characters, and the story line kicks ass! Hope Ron comes to his senses, and that Johansson gets in deep shit, that ass deserves it.
Anywho, keep updating the chappies, since I have now become addicted 2 ur story, and will suffer if deprived of my weakly dose! ;D
3/19/2005 c1 2Lithui
Why can't you spell? I mean, the story has potential, but all the grammatical errors are really off-putting. Think about it.
2LithuiWhy can't you spell? I mean, the story has potential, but all the grammatical errors are really off-putting. Think about it.
2/21/2005 c8 20WellRedPenguin
this is pretty good for your first fic
there are some grammer mistakes but they don't bother me much so keep going
20WellRedPenguinthis is pretty good for your first fic
there are some grammer mistakes but they don't bother me much so keep going
2/15/2005 c7 16Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's
Yay! I personally wore tan and orange yesterday :)
I think you're doing a wonderful job with the fic, especially if you use mainly french. This is very good. I don't know what you mean about descriptions, I don't see a problem with them.
Write more soon.
- Damia -
16Damia - Queen of the Gypsi'sYay! I personally wore tan and orange yesterday :)
I think you're doing a wonderful job with the fic, especially if you use mainly french. This is very good. I don't know what you mean about descriptions, I don't see a problem with them.
Write more soon.
- Damia -
1/2/2005 c5 Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's
Is that poem for someone you knew? I've had freinds die ... it's not pleasant. Yeah.
I like the whole Idea of December. The end of the year, the winter solstice, longest night of the year, christmas, kwanza, hannakuh (i so spelled that wrong) and so many other things. I like the idea of ash and ice. Fire and ice, complete opposites, signaling completion and order and unity. You know? Write more soon.
- Damia -
Is that poem for someone you knew? I've had freinds die ... it's not pleasant. Yeah.
I like the whole Idea of December. The end of the year, the winter solstice, longest night of the year, christmas, kwanza, hannakuh (i so spelled that wrong) and so many other things. I like the idea of ash and ice. Fire and ice, complete opposites, signaling completion and order and unity. You know? Write more soon.
- Damia -
10/28/2004 c3 7sculptedangel
Great job! This is really long, and I love it. Amazing job, and post really soon. BTW, the initiation was totally awesome. Post sooN!
7sculptedangelGreat job! This is really long, and I love it. Amazing job, and post really soon. BTW, the initiation was totally awesome. Post sooN!
10/27/2004 c3 16Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's
Very nice! I like it very much. WRite more soon.
- Damia -
16Damia - Queen of the Gypsi'sVery nice! I like it very much. WRite more soon.
- Damia -
10/20/2004 c1 Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's
HAven't finished reading this chapter, but it looks awesome. Write more soon.
- Damia -
HAven't finished reading this chapter, but it looks awesome. Write more soon.
- Damia -
10/19/2004 c2 7sculptedangel
This is amazing! You have major spelling probs, but other than that I think you have a pretty good plot. Just work on the spelling, and a little grammer, but other than that this is really good! Post soon! Oh, and I like longer chappies
7sculptedangelThis is amazing! You have major spelling probs, but other than that I think you have a pretty good plot. Just work on the spelling, and a little grammer, but other than that this is really good! Post soon! Oh, and I like longer chappies
10/19/2004 c1 13midnightdusk
Ok. For your first fan fic i must say it's pretty good. But the main problem i saw with it was -
*Making it WAY too long. Have a maximum of 60 words in a chapter. Because personally i just couldn't finish that chapter.
*And, unless the character you introduce is a very strong character personality wise don't make up a character straight away. It just usually doesn't work.
* Focus predominently on Ginny/Draco if it is that type of fic.
*You need to not shove too much into a chapter.
13midnightduskOk. For your first fan fic i must say it's pretty good. But the main problem i saw with it was -
*Making it WAY too long. Have a maximum of 60 words in a chapter. Because personally i just couldn't finish that chapter.
*And, unless the character you introduce is a very strong character personality wise don't make up a character straight away. It just usually doesn't work.
* Focus predominently on Ginny/Draco if it is that type of fic.
*You need to not shove too much into a chapter.