for The Warrior10/25/2004 c1 
1SashaBatTzion
Kiddo, you've got yourself the beginnings of a great original fiction. Honestly. A little polishing up, a little length, and you could publish it maybe. But right now, it is not DBZ. Nope. If the kid was Yamcha, it would be an awesome fanfiction, but it's not, it's Mike, so go put this up on and fix the summary.
1SashaBatTzionKiddo, you've got yourself the beginnings of a great original fiction. Honestly. A little polishing up, a little length, and you could publish it maybe. But right now, it is not DBZ. Nope. If the kid was Yamcha, it would be an awesome fanfiction, but it's not, it's Mike, so go put this up on and fix the summary.