for Threads of Fate3/10/2024 c14 Zeke Hooper
interesting story.
interesting story.
11/1/2016 c14 sultryvoice
BeautifulStruggle,
It has been some 8 years since you last updated this story. I am wondering if you have lost your interest in Naruto fanfic.
However, your readers would appreciate it, if you would finish this story as it is to good a read for you to leave unfinished and incomplete like this. We understand that sometimes family and live in general can and will get in the way.
If I should hear nothing from you, then I am understanding that you are no longer on .
Thanks for everything.
BeautifulStruggle,
It has been some 8 years since you last updated this story. I am wondering if you have lost your interest in Naruto fanfic.
However, your readers would appreciate it, if you would finish this story as it is to good a read for you to leave unfinished and incomplete like this. We understand that sometimes family and live in general can and will get in the way.
If I should hear nothing from you, then I am understanding that you are no longer on .
Thanks for everything.
7/4/2013 c6 
23Lerris
Orochimaru wants Sasuke as his next body. He would likely kill Kabuto if he let his next body get killed and Kabuto knows this...
23LerrisOrochimaru wants Sasuke as his next body. He would likely kill Kabuto if he let his next body get killed and Kabuto knows this...
7/4/2013 c5 Lerris
A couple of things stuck out here. First, why would Kakashi train him harder, when he has shown he can't control his temper? That's just putting a bigger gun in the hand of someone with an itchy trigger finger. Second, why would Naruto scar? He certainly doesn't in canon. Still, I suppose it could be just slightly AU...
A couple of things stuck out here. First, why would Kakashi train him harder, when he has shown he can't control his temper? That's just putting a bigger gun in the hand of someone with an itchy trigger finger. Second, why would Naruto scar? He certainly doesn't in canon. Still, I suppose it could be just slightly AU...
12/29/2012 c14 ranbo neal
Super duper story! I just finished the part that is done and am just upset that the ending is not here. Please...please finish! Your fans want to know what happens with hinata...she is in the hospital. In the last chapter you hinted that Sakura might make a move on Naruto...will Hinata die and he end up with Sakura...PLEASE do not let that happen! Oh, well...maybe we will never know.
Super duper story! I just finished the part that is done and am just upset that the ending is not here. Please...please finish! Your fans want to know what happens with hinata...she is in the hospital. In the last chapter you hinted that Sakura might make a move on Naruto...will Hinata die and he end up with Sakura...PLEASE do not let that happen! Oh, well...maybe we will never know.
12/29/2012 c14 Amer Leon
soooo sad...this is such a wonderful and well-thought-out story...and it is left hanging...as so many are on this site. so we do not get to find out what happened to hinata..who is in the hospital and just confessed her love to naruto...or all of the other loose ends. I will keep this on story alert. for all of the fans of this story...please finish it...there must be more on your computer just waiting to be typed out?
soooo sad...this is such a wonderful and well-thought-out story...and it is left hanging...as so many are on this site. so we do not get to find out what happened to hinata..who is in the hospital and just confessed her love to naruto...or all of the other loose ends. I will keep this on story alert. for all of the fans of this story...please finish it...there must be more on your computer just waiting to be typed out?
12/29/2012 c13 Amer Leon
good coverage of the aftermath of the big battle...and the way you work through the soul-searching that naruto is doing. this is a wonderful chap...and story. I just wish that i was not so close to the end now.
good coverage of the aftermath of the big battle...and the way you work through the soul-searching that naruto is doing. this is a wonderful chap...and story. I just wish that i was not so close to the end now.
12/29/2012 c12 Amer Leon
another great fight...and this one with hinata involved...this was powerful and good writing. the scene between naruto and hinata right after her and naruto had fought itachi...was just so sad and sweet. gosh..good job.
another great fight...and this one with hinata involved...this was powerful and good writing. the scene between naruto and hinata right after her and naruto had fought itachi...was just so sad and sweet. gosh..good job.
12/29/2012 c11 Amer Leon
great fight...neji is looking grim...kind of reminds me of his death in ch #614...i still wonder if hinata comes back into the story.
great fight...neji is looking grim...kind of reminds me of his death in ch #614...i still wonder if hinata comes back into the story.
12/28/2012 c10 Amer Leon
another sasuke skim chapter...and no mention of hinata again...what happened to her?...she and naruto were getting pretty close in a chapter long ago.
another sasuke skim chapter...and no mention of hinata again...what happened to her?...she and naruto were getting pretty close in a chapter long ago.
12/28/2012 c9 Amer Leon
ok..in your A/N you state that most readers like the sasuke chaps the best...we i like the ones with naruto and another dark haired one...but the one called hinata. she has not been around for a couple of chapters now...i hope you did not write her out of your story.
ok..in your A/N you state that most readers like the sasuke chaps the best...we i like the ones with naruto and another dark haired one...but the one called hinata. she has not been around for a couple of chapters now...i hope you did not write her out of your story.
12/28/2012 c7 Amer Leon
that was a SWEET chapter...the extra time you put into it sure paid off, big time! what hinata does is sooo cool. those two have always been meant to be together...by Kishi...and that was born out when I read what has happened between them in chapters 613-615...
that was a SWEET chapter...the extra time you put into it sure paid off, big time! what hinata does is sooo cool. those two have always been meant to be together...by Kishi...and that was born out when I read what has happened between them in chapters 613-615...
12/28/2012 c6 Amer Leon
i did skip this chap but now will get back to the characters that i actually love to read about. this guy has been a naruto hinata fan since i saw the first anime and the way hinata looked at him. i love the action...but without a little romance a story is boring after a while.
i did skip this chap but now will get back to the characters that i actually love to read about. this guy has been a naruto hinata fan since i saw the first anime and the way hinata looked at him. i love the action...but without a little romance a story is boring after a while.