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10/29/2004 c1 47Tathrin
That was cool. I think I'd have liked it more if I'd have had just a teensy bit of exposition so I would have known what was going on, but I was really caught by the raw emotions; they were expertly done. Nice song fic! I think if the lines that pop up throughout the story were in italics or something instead of quotes it would be a little easier to understand; I had to read the part with Harry twice before I figured it out. Aside from the minor technical nitpickings, though, it was a really nice fic! Great emotion, I said that before, but I really mean it. The spots where the lyrics were interspersed were perfectly placed (although confusing in that one part, yeah). It was like the song was running through Draco's head and we were hearing it mingling with his thoughts. Very cool!
10/29/2004 c1 21Katatonia
So sweet and sad. I kinda liked it - although I suspect I would have liked it more if I knew the song. I don't really go much for songfics, but this one was one of the best. Loadsa love, hugs and plot bunnies, Zira

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