for A Viper's Poison1/18/2018 c15 Guest
Love it
Love it
1/18/2018 c6 Guest
In a previous chapter you called kina cobra now she copperhead
In a previous chapter you called kina cobra now she copperhead
11/18/2016 c15 
3IrishMoonPrincess91
this was amazing! love! can't wait to read the sequel! this story was beautifully written! a few typos here and there, but easily overlooked. keep up the great work!
3IrishMoonPrincess91this was amazing! love! can't wait to read the sequel! this story was beautifully written! a few typos here and there, but easily overlooked. keep up the great work!
3/25/2010 c7 dekita
Come on it has to be Raye! Raye is the flame arrow shooter! I just know it. And Serena is Darien's bodyguard? WOOHOO!
Come on it has to be Raye! Raye is the flame arrow shooter! I just know it. And Serena is Darien's bodyguard? WOOHOO!
3/25/2010 c6 dekita
I think the undercover snake is Raye, who's Darien's sister. This mission is definitely bigger than what it seems
I think the undercover snake is Raye, who's Darien's sister. This mission is definitely bigger than what it seems
3/25/2010 c5 dekita
Man we all know Serena is NOT gonna kill Darien, but I'm worried on how he'll find out and his reaction. Will he hate her? Please let my favorite couple be together! This was another great chapter
Man we all know Serena is NOT gonna kill Darien, but I'm worried on how he'll find out and his reaction. Will he hate her? Please let my favorite couple be together! This was another great chapter
3/25/2010 c4 dekita
God so sad for Lita. She was only briefly in the story but I feel so sad for her. I hope there's no more deaths... but that'd be wishing for a lot, right?
Btw, I LOVE that Mina's weapon was the chained spike ball! Lol that weapon TOTALLY fits Mina LOL. Reminded me of Chiaki Kuriyama from Kill Bill.
God so sad for Lita. She was only briefly in the story but I feel so sad for her. I hope there's no more deaths... but that'd be wishing for a lot, right?
Btw, I LOVE that Mina's weapon was the chained spike ball! Lol that weapon TOTALLY fits Mina LOL. Reminded me of Chiaki Kuriyama from Kill Bill.
3/25/2010 c3 dekita
Wait did I read wrong, I thought Seiya had black hair? How is his hair silver? Unless it's silvery-black (like jet-black)... Hm. So sad that Serena's gone through so much trauma, I hope Darien will unleash that and make her happy.
Wait did I read wrong, I thought Seiya had black hair? How is his hair silver? Unless it's silvery-black (like jet-black)... Hm. So sad that Serena's gone through so much trauma, I hope Darien will unleash that and make her happy.
3/25/2010 c2 dekita
Wow emo Serena... well she's been through a lot but man... I'm so used to her having a happy family :(
Wow emo Serena... well she's been through a lot but man... I'm so used to her having a happy family :(
1/18/2010 c15 Mish
wow what a crazy turn of events and loved this story
wow what a crazy turn of events and loved this story
7/30/2009 c15 31Loveless Paradox
Fabulous! Amazing! That's all I've got to say. I can't think of anything else. Thanks for writing it. XD
31Loveless ParadoxFabulous! Amazing! That's all I've got to say. I can't think of anything else. Thanks for writing it. XD