for A Viper's Poison6/8/2005 c8 moongirlz
OK, THAT CHAPTER WAS SLIGHTLY MORE BORING THEN THE OTHERS, YOU HAD SEVERAL MISTAKES IN THIS CHAPTER BUT I AM TO LAZY TO LIST THEM ALL. KEEP WRITING AND DOING A GREAT JOB! =^.^=
OK, THAT CHAPTER WAS SLIGHTLY MORE BORING THEN THE OTHERS, YOU HAD SEVERAL MISTAKES IN THIS CHAPTER BUT I AM TO LAZY TO LIST THEM ALL. KEEP WRITING AND DOING A GREAT JOB! =^.^=
6/8/2005 c7 moongirlz
ok! wow that was an awesome chapter! i have a question, is the silent one darien? or is it seiya? its my theory, its either darien or seiya right?
ok! wow that was an awesome chapter! i have a question, is the silent one darien? or is it seiya? its my theory, its either darien or seiya right?
6/8/2005 c7 moongirlz
ok! wow that was an awesome chapter! i have a question, is the silent one darien? or is it seiya? its my theory, its either darien or seiya right?
ok! wow that was an awesome chapter! i have a question, is the silent one darien? or is it seiya? its my theory, its either darien or seiya right?
6/8/2005 c6 moongirlz
ok, i liked it quite a lot but i found a mistake. wasnt it mina who was the cobra? nvm. well i like the part where seiya kisses serena... in my minds image of him, he looks like a cutie! well, anyways. so does darien. it would be awesome of they were real. ok, on to the rest. is serena gonna form a relationship w/ darien?
ok, i liked it quite a lot but i found a mistake. wasnt it mina who was the cobra? nvm. well i like the part where seiya kisses serena... in my minds image of him, he looks like a cutie! well, anyways. so does darien. it would be awesome of they were real. ok, on to the rest. is serena gonna form a relationship w/ darien?
6/7/2005 c5 MOONGIRLZ
OK, WHO TOLD YOU THAT YOU CAN WRITE THAT WELL? WELL, I LOVE THIS STORY, ITS AWESOME, I KNOW THAT IM TOO YOUNG TO BE READING THIS STORY BUT I READ IT ANY WAY CAUSE ITS COOL.
OK, WHO TOLD YOU THAT YOU CAN WRITE THAT WELL? WELL, I LOVE THIS STORY, ITS AWESOME, I KNOW THAT IM TOO YOUNG TO BE READING THIS STORY BUT I READ IT ANY WAY CAUSE ITS COOL.
6/7/2005 c4 moongirlz
NICE STORY ONCE AGAIN! I MEAN CHAPTER... THIS IS GREAT, I CANT SAY HOW GOOD THIS IS NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE IT.
NICE STORY ONCE AGAIN! I MEAN CHAPTER... THIS IS GREAT, I CANT SAY HOW GOOD THIS IS NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE IT.
6/3/2005 c3 moongirlz
okay, i cant stop complimenting you on your story, does this have a sequel? or a prequel? i really hope it does, i really enjoy this story. it is really quite good. =^.^=
okay, i cant stop complimenting you on your story, does this have a sequel? or a prequel? i really hope it does, i really enjoy this story. it is really quite good. =^.^=
6/3/2005 c2 moongirlz
wow, that was a great chapter, as isaid before, keep writing, maybe you'll publish this one day.
have you ever thought of having someone check your chaoters? i like the plot, but you have several repeats and some grammatical errors. have someone check your work and it will turn out great.
wow, that was a great chapter, as isaid before, keep writing, maybe you'll publish this one day.
have you ever thought of having someone check your chaoters? i like the plot, but you have several repeats and some grammatical errors. have someone check your work and it will turn out great.
6/3/2005 c1 moongirlz
nice beginning... i like this story quite a lot... keep writing, you might be able to publish this as a book one day
nice beginning... i like this story quite a lot... keep writing, you might be able to publish this as a book one day
22/24/2005 c15 sailorserena141
absolutely amazing, well done, i read your story straight through and have stayed up to read untill 1.30 in the morning. The suspense was great. PLEASE do a sequel cause its an amazing story!
absolutely amazing, well done, i read your story straight through and have stayed up to read untill 1.30 in the morning. The suspense was great. PLEASE do a sequel cause its an amazing story!
2/9/2005 c15 Angel of Serenity88
Oh please tell me you are going to have a sequel! This story was amazing. I just loved how it action packed and full of suspense! PLEASE SAY YES!Email me please when you do decide to!
Oh please tell me you are going to have a sequel! This story was amazing. I just loved how it action packed and full of suspense! PLEASE SAY YES!Email me please when you do decide to!
1/28/2005 c15 SweetSerenity21
That was a great fic. It was a great combination of action, adventure, and romance. The plot line was awesome. Well, i hope you do a sequel soon. i would definitley read it! Keep writing!
That was a great fic. It was a great combination of action, adventure, and romance. The plot line was awesome. Well, i hope you do a sequel soon. i would definitley read it! Keep writing!