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3/21/2013 c6 kkgye4sgbkljgui
another thing I don't think serenity is the time to curse. That's kind of out of character for her. but great chapter. it was funny and seto was so mad.
another thing I don't think serenity is the time to curse. That's kind of out of character for her. but great chapter. it was funny and seto was so mad.
3/20/2013 c5 kkgye4sgbkljgui
this was kind of funny especially the part where seto was accusing serenity and mokuba of being together or kissing or whatnot. I just ran into another problem. Serenity is a little too feisty. She's usually kind, sweet and a little timid. If she were to be caught in a situation like that with mokuba then she would probable stutter.
this was kind of funny especially the part where seto was accusing serenity and mokuba of being together or kissing or whatnot. I just ran into another problem. Serenity is a little too feisty. She's usually kind, sweet and a little timid. If she were to be caught in a situation like that with mokuba then she would probable stutter.
3/20/2013 c4 kkgye4sgbkljgui
this is getting interesting now. I wonder what seto is going to do when he finds out about serenity tutoring mokaba.
this is getting interesting now. I wonder what seto is going to do when he finds out about serenity tutoring mokaba.
3/20/2013 c2 kkgye4sgbkljgui
wow that was interesting. I'm a little be shock at mokuba's personality. He's usually the opposite of his brother seto. He's nice and little be mischievousness. But you made him rude. But nonetheless I'll continue reading this.
wow that was interesting. I'm a little be shock at mokuba's personality. He's usually the opposite of his brother seto. He's nice and little be mischievousness. But you made him rude. But nonetheless I'll continue reading this.
3/20/2013 c1 kkgye4sgbkljgui
this is a good start! I'll read the next chapter and see if Iike it. No offense I'm just trying to feel this story out.
This chapter was simple but it was not boring but it is a start.
this is a good start! I'll read the next chapter and see if Iike it. No offense I'm just trying to feel this story out.
This chapter was simple but it was not boring but it is a start.
3/16/2013 c12 
3Liwliwa-Janoah
The title gave it all away! I feel for Joey! I can hear him now “My sister is dating my enemy”…WHY?
Serenity is feisty!
Work was getting boring and Serenity was getting interesting.
Hag? LMAO! So what he assumes all women are witches now?
I wasn’t done talking to you! BAM! Serenity disconnected the call! Things just got interesting!
Kaiba lifted her chin. "I have never met a girl with your determination. And I have never met a girl with a better chance. I am the lucky one here, you are too good for me Serenity." He leaned down and his lips met with hers. Kaiba's other hand slipped around her back and pulled her close. Serenity's hands rested against Kaiba's chest. He began to kiss her deeply and Serenity let him. She began to melt against him. AWWWW! Things are heating up! Kaiba admits that he loves Serenity! And she admits that she loves him too!
Tea saw them! Crap! I knew it wouldn’t be long before Tea said Kaiba, instead of Mr. Kaiba.
I’m glad that Serenity is trying to stick up for herself and sort of explain and Kaiba threatening Tea with losing her job so that she’d keep quiet about him and Serenity, but her friends mean more, Typical Tea.
LMAO! Mokuba’s spreading rumors! He was playing match maker all along! The maids stood in the hall and watched the love story unfold!
"Good, this Tea chick has a couple of issues." Mokuba laughed. BOL! LMAO!
Oh Flip it! She just promised Serenity yet still she’s running off to Joey’s? Tea just can’t keep her trap shut!
"No, what have I done! He will kill both of them." She said to herself a little too late. You just started a whole world of trouble because you couldn’t keep your trap shut! That’s what you did!
"She was here? A message eh? Yeah, can you tell her that when she gets down here, I am ganna kill her!" Joey yelled into the mansion. OMG!
"Okay then, so I will see you tomorrow?" Kaiba asked hopefully.
"You betcha!" Serenity answered. I can’t help but feel sorry! Tea ruined everything!
The whole way home Mokuba was smiling. huh? I thought Mokuba was asleep! Trickster! He was never sleeping! He knows about the kiss!
He slapped her? OMG! Now I really feel sorry for her! But all he’s gonna do is make her run to Kaiba, and that’s not what he wants for his sister.
He’s even saying she’s not his sister? OMG! Tea I hate you right now. I don’t even see her reason for doing this!
Great Chapter! I can't believe Joey kicked her out. If anything, I thought she was gonna run to Kaiba, but Mai and Yami are there instead.
Who is George? Mai's Butler or something?
I noticed that the last time you girls updated the story was 2005, it's not 2013 where's the rest of it? Have you abandoned it? I WANT MORE! I have to know what happens next! PLEASE update!
3Liwliwa-JanoahThe title gave it all away! I feel for Joey! I can hear him now “My sister is dating my enemy”…WHY?
Serenity is feisty!
Work was getting boring and Serenity was getting interesting.
Hag? LMAO! So what he assumes all women are witches now?
I wasn’t done talking to you! BAM! Serenity disconnected the call! Things just got interesting!
Kaiba lifted her chin. "I have never met a girl with your determination. And I have never met a girl with a better chance. I am the lucky one here, you are too good for me Serenity." He leaned down and his lips met with hers. Kaiba's other hand slipped around her back and pulled her close. Serenity's hands rested against Kaiba's chest. He began to kiss her deeply and Serenity let him. She began to melt against him. AWWWW! Things are heating up! Kaiba admits that he loves Serenity! And she admits that she loves him too!
Tea saw them! Crap! I knew it wouldn’t be long before Tea said Kaiba, instead of Mr. Kaiba.
I’m glad that Serenity is trying to stick up for herself and sort of explain and Kaiba threatening Tea with losing her job so that she’d keep quiet about him and Serenity, but her friends mean more, Typical Tea.
LMAO! Mokuba’s spreading rumors! He was playing match maker all along! The maids stood in the hall and watched the love story unfold!
"Good, this Tea chick has a couple of issues." Mokuba laughed. BOL! LMAO!
Oh Flip it! She just promised Serenity yet still she’s running off to Joey’s? Tea just can’t keep her trap shut!
"No, what have I done! He will kill both of them." She said to herself a little too late. You just started a whole world of trouble because you couldn’t keep your trap shut! That’s what you did!
"She was here? A message eh? Yeah, can you tell her that when she gets down here, I am ganna kill her!" Joey yelled into the mansion. OMG!
"Okay then, so I will see you tomorrow?" Kaiba asked hopefully.
"You betcha!" Serenity answered. I can’t help but feel sorry! Tea ruined everything!
The whole way home Mokuba was smiling. huh? I thought Mokuba was asleep! Trickster! He was never sleeping! He knows about the kiss!
He slapped her? OMG! Now I really feel sorry for her! But all he’s gonna do is make her run to Kaiba, and that’s not what he wants for his sister.
He’s even saying she’s not his sister? OMG! Tea I hate you right now. I don’t even see her reason for doing this!
Great Chapter! I can't believe Joey kicked her out. If anything, I thought she was gonna run to Kaiba, but Mai and Yami are there instead.
Who is George? Mai's Butler or something?
I noticed that the last time you girls updated the story was 2005, it's not 2013 where's the rest of it? Have you abandoned it? I WANT MORE! I have to know what happens next! PLEASE update!
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What kinda lunch time is this, that they’re gone and her and Tea are still there? And that she has 15 mins until her next class. I thought when the bell rang, everyone leaves for class not have breaks in between. Is this like free periods and stuff?
but Serenity had hastily made her escape before Tea could go into another friendship speech. Doesn’t anyone like those forsaken speeches? LMAO!
Good for Tea, that she got a job, but working for Kaiba? Doesn’t she hate him?
Why is he always commanding people and not asking them?
"I've been switched to working at the Kaiba mansion as Seto Kaiba's personal secretary!" She said happily. Tea’s now working at the mansion? Serenity is SCREWED!
Tea continued. "And even though I hate Kaiba, I'll give him one thing. He sure is hot. And he might like me." Tea said, laughing. Tell us how Tea really feels (wink wink).
Tea said, stepping in. "Friends shouldn't fight!" she said.
"SHUT UP TEA!" Tristan glared at her. LMAO! Ha ha ha ha! That was hilarious!
Joey was so close to figuring it out and then...food!
Where is Yugi, in this? And Bakura? But mostly Yugi.
Winston is grinning. Winston knows!
Falling in a closet on something soft (Kaiba’s face), sitting in his lap, absently stroking her hair...can we say RELATIONSHIP!
"Just laugh." Serenity said, shaking her head. "Or you'll explode." ‘ He can’t even laugh like a normal person, are you kidding me?
OMG! She forgot all about Tea working as the secretary.
"I can't work. That monster is still lurking, trying to find me." He said seriously. LMAO! Why is he calling Tea a monster?
Tristan and now Tea, who else is gonna see her on the back of that bike?
YES! Defend Joey! And Speak up for yourself! Put Kaiba in his place! For Calling Joey a Mutt!
GREAT CHAPTER!
What kinda lunch time is this, that they’re gone and her and Tea are still there? And that she has 15 mins until her next class. I thought when the bell rang, everyone leaves for class not have breaks in between. Is this like free periods and stuff?
but Serenity had hastily made her escape before Tea could go into another friendship speech. Doesn’t anyone like those forsaken speeches? LMAO!
Good for Tea, that she got a job, but working for Kaiba? Doesn’t she hate him?
Why is he always commanding people and not asking them?
"I've been switched to working at the Kaiba mansion as Seto Kaiba's personal secretary!" She said happily. Tea’s now working at the mansion? Serenity is SCREWED!
Tea continued. "And even though I hate Kaiba, I'll give him one thing. He sure is hot. And he might like me." Tea said, laughing. Tell us how Tea really feels (wink wink).
Tea said, stepping in. "Friends shouldn't fight!" she said.
"SHUT UP TEA!" Tristan glared at her. LMAO! Ha ha ha ha! That was hilarious!
Joey was so close to figuring it out and then...food!
Where is Yugi, in this? And Bakura? But mostly Yugi.
Winston is grinning. Winston knows!
Falling in a closet on something soft (Kaiba’s face), sitting in his lap, absently stroking her hair...can we say RELATIONSHIP!
"Just laugh." Serenity said, shaking her head. "Or you'll explode." ‘ He can’t even laugh like a normal person, are you kidding me?
OMG! She forgot all about Tea working as the secretary.
"I can't work. That monster is still lurking, trying to find me." He said seriously. LMAO! Why is he calling Tea a monster?
Tristan and now Tea, who else is gonna see her on the back of that bike?
YES! Defend Joey! And Speak up for yourself! Put Kaiba in his place! For Calling Joey a Mutt!
GREAT CHAPTER!
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She didn’t even bathe before leaving home…SMH! Kaiba’s asking about Serenity? _ (Wink wink)
Her and her alibi’s…I mean lies. And Joey buys all of them!
I get that Joey’s from Brooklyn but where is she from? Because I remember they go separated as kids when their parents divorced.
"She so wants me." Duke you’re delusional! Serenity wants Kaiba.
She bumped into Tristan? I think Tristan is gonna tell Joey what he knows after he plays detective and finds out.
A doorbell in the shape of a blue eyes? Kaiba is more than obsessed now! And security robotic statues in the shape of Blue Eyes as well….
What’s a wife-beater? (Kaiba’s attire) and what’s a vet? (Duke’s car).
A wife beater seems to be a tank top and when you say Vet do you mean Corvette?
"Yeah Serenity, Kaiba is going to help us today. He never ever calls his brother Kaiba (their last name), he always says Seto. (I mentioned this in a previous review).
Kaiba couldn't pull his gaze away. Serenity in that dress was breathtaking. Kaiba’s got the hots for Serenity! _ (Wink wink).
He wasn't sure if this was just an attraction or he really did like her. Then again if he did like her, why did he? Was it because she was a wonderful person that was helping his brother and beautiful. Or was it because she was off limits, Kaiba was not use to not being able to have something. I don’t get why she’s off limits..Joey hasn’t found out and told him to stay away or is he just saying that because he doesn’t want to get involved with his Nemesis’ best friend sister?
He slowly leaned down. Cupping her chin in one hand he lifted her face up to meet his. He planted his lips on hers, giving her a soft kiss. He kissed her! OMG! ) (smiley face).
But Serenity Wheeler had just kissed her brother's worst enemy. Guilt piled onto her. Oh the guilt has only just begun.
The driver saw! Winston you sneak!
GREAT CHAPTER!
She didn’t even bathe before leaving home…SMH! Kaiba’s asking about Serenity? _ (Wink wink)
Her and her alibi’s…I mean lies. And Joey buys all of them!
I get that Joey’s from Brooklyn but where is she from? Because I remember they go separated as kids when their parents divorced.
"She so wants me." Duke you’re delusional! Serenity wants Kaiba.
She bumped into Tristan? I think Tristan is gonna tell Joey what he knows after he plays detective and finds out.
A doorbell in the shape of a blue eyes? Kaiba is more than obsessed now! And security robotic statues in the shape of Blue Eyes as well….
What’s a wife-beater? (Kaiba’s attire) and what’s a vet? (Duke’s car).
A wife beater seems to be a tank top and when you say Vet do you mean Corvette?
"Yeah Serenity, Kaiba is going to help us today. He never ever calls his brother Kaiba (their last name), he always says Seto. (I mentioned this in a previous review).
Kaiba couldn't pull his gaze away. Serenity in that dress was breathtaking. Kaiba’s got the hots for Serenity! _ (Wink wink).
He wasn't sure if this was just an attraction or he really did like her. Then again if he did like her, why did he? Was it because she was a wonderful person that was helping his brother and beautiful. Or was it because she was off limits, Kaiba was not use to not being able to have something. I don’t get why she’s off limits..Joey hasn’t found out and told him to stay away or is he just saying that because he doesn’t want to get involved with his Nemesis’ best friend sister?
He slowly leaned down. Cupping her chin in one hand he lifted her face up to meet his. He planted his lips on hers, giving her a soft kiss. He kissed her! OMG! ) (smiley face).
But Serenity Wheeler had just kissed her brother's worst enemy. Guilt piled onto her. Oh the guilt has only just begun.
The driver saw! Winston you sneak!
GREAT CHAPTER!
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I love how she’s stalling! Joey’s pounding his fists!
Serenity giggled as she remembered the look on Kaiba's face when she had told him about the fourth blue eyes. If only I had a camera then… LMAO!
Poor Tristan! Pouring his feelings and she’s thinking about Kaiba..his abs, his hair, the motorcycle ride. Serenity is GUILTY! Of a crush! At least she said they needed to remain friends.
I think I'll just lye down for a little while." She said, and gave a weak smile. Wrong lye. It’s suppose to be lie. But I think I’ll stop proofing.
Serenity heard what he was saying and started to panic. Talk to Joey! She's gonna blow my cover! I can't believe Mai would do something like that! I have to talk to her before then! Serenity is turning into one sneaky chick! Lying, sneaking around.
He means well…only an idiot like Kaiba could not like Joey. I personally think Kaiba hates Joey because he sees something in Joey that he doesn’t have…I just don’t know what it is.
She settled into a fitful sleep where she dreamt of a topless Kaiba who turned from an angel to a devil and rode away on a shiny cloud that resembled a motorcycle. LMAO!
I like how she went into the closet for her private phone call, talk about being sneaky!
Kaiba said, folding his arms across his bare chest. (A/N: drool ) LMAO! Why doesn’t he have on a shirt yet?
Why is he pounding the desk? Serenity is brilliant unlike Joey…
WOW! Their thinking and dreaming about one another
GREAT CHAPTER!
I love how she’s stalling! Joey’s pounding his fists!
Serenity giggled as she remembered the look on Kaiba's face when she had told him about the fourth blue eyes. If only I had a camera then… LMAO!
Poor Tristan! Pouring his feelings and she’s thinking about Kaiba..his abs, his hair, the motorcycle ride. Serenity is GUILTY! Of a crush! At least she said they needed to remain friends.
I think I'll just lye down for a little while." She said, and gave a weak smile. Wrong lye. It’s suppose to be lie. But I think I’ll stop proofing.
Serenity heard what he was saying and started to panic. Talk to Joey! She's gonna blow my cover! I can't believe Mai would do something like that! I have to talk to her before then! Serenity is turning into one sneaky chick! Lying, sneaking around.
He means well…only an idiot like Kaiba could not like Joey. I personally think Kaiba hates Joey because he sees something in Joey that he doesn’t have…I just don’t know what it is.
She settled into a fitful sleep where she dreamt of a topless Kaiba who turned from an angel to a devil and rode away on a shiny cloud that resembled a motorcycle. LMAO!
I like how she went into the closet for her private phone call, talk about being sneaky!
Kaiba said, folding his arms across his bare chest. (A/N: drool ) LMAO! Why doesn’t he have on a shirt yet?
Why is he pounding the desk? Serenity is brilliant unlike Joey…
WOW! Their thinking and dreaming about one another
GREAT CHAPTER!
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Why is she talking so loudly? Now everyone is looking at her strangely.
"Don't be so negative Serenity! You can pull this out and I will hang at the arcade! It will be jelly beans for everybody!" I think you mean pull this off right?
I think, small tiny lie is a bit repetitive…
"It's Serenity!" She hissed into the phone. "I am here, the stupid gate is shut! Open it." She is feisty!
You knock and I promise Kaiba will answer huh? He never calls his brother Kaiba. Who calls their brother by their last name?
OMG! He doesn’t have his shirt on. He has a six pack, since when? Ya’ll are being rather descriptive.
"Don't just sit there. Let's get moving! You know where it is right?" Kaiba ordered. OMG!
He can drive? I thought the only think he knew how to drive where aircrafts. Not motor vehicles as well, seeing that he’s always in a limo.
I honestly think she’s gonna get caught in this lie, when she reaches to the other side of town, what else is there for her to say?
There should be a break between the bike scene and Tristan. And I think Tristan is going to ruin everything because he’s gonna tell Joey what he saw.
Mokuba is a brat! But I found it hilarious that he couldn’t stop laughing when they rode off.
Duke? Tristan, you got it wrong!
LMAO! His hair fell perfectly back into place after he took off the helmet? He doesn’t suffer from helmet hair at all.
Time to come up with yet another lie? LOL! I love the little argument between Serenity and Kaiba and her defending Joey!
It was hard for him to match his brother's gaze. But eventually he did. Kaiba looked pissed; there was no nice way to but it. That’s suppose to be put.
Why does everybody keep assuming she’s with Duke? Wait did Duke and Tristan have a crush on her when they first saw her? I think that’s what I remember.
"Mai... Please don't tell him. I know he wouldn't understand." Mai just nodded then drove off. Mai not knowing what awaited her, stepped into the house and called, Typo, Serenity is the one that stepped into the house.
Tristan is a rat head! I do understand that he’s just concerned but…and Joey’s actually upset and being a good big brother!
GREAT CHAPTER! Can’t wait to read what happens next! Here I go
Why is she talking so loudly? Now everyone is looking at her strangely.
"Don't be so negative Serenity! You can pull this out and I will hang at the arcade! It will be jelly beans for everybody!" I think you mean pull this off right?
I think, small tiny lie is a bit repetitive…
"It's Serenity!" She hissed into the phone. "I am here, the stupid gate is shut! Open it." She is feisty!
You knock and I promise Kaiba will answer huh? He never calls his brother Kaiba. Who calls their brother by their last name?
OMG! He doesn’t have his shirt on. He has a six pack, since when? Ya’ll are being rather descriptive.
"Don't just sit there. Let's get moving! You know where it is right?" Kaiba ordered. OMG!
He can drive? I thought the only think he knew how to drive where aircrafts. Not motor vehicles as well, seeing that he’s always in a limo.
I honestly think she’s gonna get caught in this lie, when she reaches to the other side of town, what else is there for her to say?
There should be a break between the bike scene and Tristan. And I think Tristan is going to ruin everything because he’s gonna tell Joey what he saw.
Mokuba is a brat! But I found it hilarious that he couldn’t stop laughing when they rode off.
Duke? Tristan, you got it wrong!
LMAO! His hair fell perfectly back into place after he took off the helmet? He doesn’t suffer from helmet hair at all.
Time to come up with yet another lie? LOL! I love the little argument between Serenity and Kaiba and her defending Joey!
It was hard for him to match his brother's gaze. But eventually he did. Kaiba looked pissed; there was no nice way to but it. That’s suppose to be put.
Why does everybody keep assuming she’s with Duke? Wait did Duke and Tristan have a crush on her when they first saw her? I think that’s what I remember.
"Mai... Please don't tell him. I know he wouldn't understand." Mai just nodded then drove off. Mai not knowing what awaited her, stepped into the house and called, Typo, Serenity is the one that stepped into the house.
Tristan is a rat head! I do understand that he’s just concerned but…and Joey’s actually upset and being a good big brother!
GREAT CHAPTER! Can’t wait to read what happens next! Here I go
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Saturday morning Jog, not job.
You’ll have to sneak in to get it? Jeez she is dumb! Doesn’t she think it’s easier to ask and see what happens instead of acting so brash?
In My Opinion, why didn’t she just ask Mokuba to bring it? That would’ve been a hell of a lot easier!
Blue eyes white dragon statues? Boy is he obsessed! And the ultimate blue eyes in the middle.
She jumped over the statues? Why didn’t she just walk around them?
OMG! Are the dragons moving?
Trespasser! LMAO! OMG! She got caught!
Serenity scrambled to grab hold of the windowsill. As she was climbing over, the ultimate blue eyes grabbed hold of her pants and was thrown into the room when Serenity swung her leg over. It fell on its head and squirmed to right itself. huh! Squirmed to right itself? What does that mean?
Great Chapter! Tristan's moving in on his best friend's sister...classic. Mokuba black mailed Serenity...
I knew it! See if she had just asked Mokuba to help, instead of going on SWAT agent...but it was still intresting to read.
Saturday morning Jog, not job.
You’ll have to sneak in to get it? Jeez she is dumb! Doesn’t she think it’s easier to ask and see what happens instead of acting so brash?
In My Opinion, why didn’t she just ask Mokuba to bring it? That would’ve been a hell of a lot easier!
Blue eyes white dragon statues? Boy is he obsessed! And the ultimate blue eyes in the middle.
She jumped over the statues? Why didn’t she just walk around them?
OMG! Are the dragons moving?
Trespasser! LMAO! OMG! She got caught!
Serenity scrambled to grab hold of the windowsill. As she was climbing over, the ultimate blue eyes grabbed hold of her pants and was thrown into the room when Serenity swung her leg over. It fell on its head and squirmed to right itself. huh! Squirmed to right itself? What does that mean?
Great Chapter! Tristan's moving in on his best friend's sister...classic. Mokuba black mailed Serenity...
I knew it! See if she had just asked Mokuba to help, instead of going on SWAT agent...but it was still intresting to read.
3/16/2013 c6 Liwliwa-Janoah
I didn't even realise that I got signed out! 0.0 I'm so sorry that I posted and unsigned review...her it is...again (Signed this time).
If her conscious caught up with her, why is she still searching through his things? Is it because of her said refreshed anger that she kept on snooping?
Kaiba has had many many women.
1:30AM, I think that’s a typo, why would she be there 1:30AM in the morning? I think it’s safe to assume you meant PM.
Oh shit! I mean shoot, LMAO!
It took her twenty minutes to find some stairs, and they weren't even the same stairs she had climbed at the beginning of the evening. LMAO! She honestly needs to ask for help! She’s completely lost!
You should’ve used a change of scene to show the transition from Serenity to Kaiba.
0.0She’s been wondering around for hours? Are you kidding me? LMAO!
Kaiba’s analogy is so off! SerenityXMokubaNOT! Why can’t he just believe she’s his tutor?
"Because he doesn't deserve to be used by women-"
"Like you were?"
"What did you say?" Kaiba glared at her. She got caught! Why did she say that?
LMAO! I thought Serenity was smart, but she’s as dumb as Joey! Why did she start giving names? Now how the hell is she suppose to find the exit?
You never walk across the lawn of rich people, doesn’t she know that? You get soaked!
Flip it! Flip it! Flip it! She spilled the beans about all the girls!
She’ll tell Joey the truth when the time comes? Hmph! That time will never come.
Community Service at an orphanage? Is she for real?
LMAO! She left the back pack at the mansion..silly silly girl.
AMAZING Chapter! Can't wait to read the rest! It's Muah! That's how I see people spell it.
I didn't even realise that I got signed out! 0.0 I'm so sorry that I posted and unsigned review...her it is...again (Signed this time).
If her conscious caught up with her, why is she still searching through his things? Is it because of her said refreshed anger that she kept on snooping?
Kaiba has had many many women.
1:30AM, I think that’s a typo, why would she be there 1:30AM in the morning? I think it’s safe to assume you meant PM.
Oh shit! I mean shoot, LMAO!
It took her twenty minutes to find some stairs, and they weren't even the same stairs she had climbed at the beginning of the evening. LMAO! She honestly needs to ask for help! She’s completely lost!
You should’ve used a change of scene to show the transition from Serenity to Kaiba.
0.0She’s been wondering around for hours? Are you kidding me? LMAO!
Kaiba’s analogy is so off! SerenityXMokubaNOT! Why can’t he just believe she’s his tutor?
"Because he doesn't deserve to be used by women-"
"Like you were?"
"What did you say?" Kaiba glared at her. She got caught! Why did she say that?
LMAO! I thought Serenity was smart, but she’s as dumb as Joey! Why did she start giving names? Now how the hell is she suppose to find the exit?
You never walk across the lawn of rich people, doesn’t she know that? You get soaked!
Flip it! Flip it! Flip it! She spilled the beans about all the girls!
She’ll tell Joey the truth when the time comes? Hmph! That time will never come.
Community Service at an orphanage? Is she for real?
LMAO! She left the back pack at the mansion..silly silly girl.
AMAZING Chapter! Can't wait to read the rest! It's Muah! That's how I see people spell it.
3/16/2013 c6 Guest
If her conscious caught up with her, why is she still searching through his things? Is it because of her said refreshed anger that she kept on snooping?
Kaiba has had many many women.
1:30AM, I think that’s a typo, why would she be there 1:30AM in the morning? I think it’s safe to assume you meant PM.
Oh shit! I mean shoot, LMAO!
It took her twenty minutes to find some stairs, and they weren't even the same stairs she had climbed at the beginning of the evening. LMAO! She honestly needs to ask for help! She’s completely lost!
You should’ve used a change of scene to show the transition from Serenity to Kaiba.
0.0She’s been wondering around for hours? Are you kidding me? LMAO!
Kaiba’s analogy is so off! SerenityXMokubaNOT! Why can’t he just believe she’s his tutor?
"Because he doesn't deserve to be used by women-"
"Like you were?"
"What did you say?" Kaiba glared at her. She got caught! Why did she say that?
LMAO! I thought Serenity was smart, but she’s as dumb as Joey! Why did she start giving names? Now how the hell is she suppose to find the exit?
You never walk across the lawn of rich people, doesn’t she know that? You get soaked!
Flip it! Flip it! Flip it! She spilled the beans about all the girls!
She’ll tell Joey the truth when the time comes? Hmph! That time will never come.
Community Service at an orphanage? Is she for real?
LMAO! She left the back pack at the mansion..silly silly girl.
AMAZING Chapter! Can't wait to read the rest! It's Muah! That's how I see people spell it.
If her conscious caught up with her, why is she still searching through his things? Is it because of her said refreshed anger that she kept on snooping?
Kaiba has had many many women.
1:30AM, I think that’s a typo, why would she be there 1:30AM in the morning? I think it’s safe to assume you meant PM.
Oh shit! I mean shoot, LMAO!
It took her twenty minutes to find some stairs, and they weren't even the same stairs she had climbed at the beginning of the evening. LMAO! She honestly needs to ask for help! She’s completely lost!
You should’ve used a change of scene to show the transition from Serenity to Kaiba.
0.0She’s been wondering around for hours? Are you kidding me? LMAO!
Kaiba’s analogy is so off! SerenityXMokubaNOT! Why can’t he just believe she’s his tutor?
"Because he doesn't deserve to be used by women-"
"Like you were?"
"What did you say?" Kaiba glared at her. She got caught! Why did she say that?
LMAO! I thought Serenity was smart, but she’s as dumb as Joey! Why did she start giving names? Now how the hell is she suppose to find the exit?
You never walk across the lawn of rich people, doesn’t she know that? You get soaked!
Flip it! Flip it! Flip it! She spilled the beans about all the girls!
She’ll tell Joey the truth when the time comes? Hmph! That time will never come.
Community Service at an orphanage? Is she for real?
LMAO! She left the back pack at the mansion..silly silly girl.
AMAZING Chapter! Can't wait to read the rest! It's Muah! That's how I see people spell it.