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11/17/2004 c3 85HiKari Mokuba's Guardian
Pretty kool

Kari
11/12/2004 c2 1surfnsport
Hey there! i finally joined up! I love the story so far! Oh and sorry i made chapter two so short but I didn't want to much to happen at once... or I really stink at writing, you take you pick. Otaku you are the best!
11/9/2004 c2 31nkitty29
I like the way mokuba acts. i loved it! please update soon.
11/9/2004 c2 Kikoken
Interesting, that's all I can say. If Kaiba does find out...we better get our helmets ready. Because kaiba definitely has a short fuse...lol. Update soon!
11/8/2004 c2 painsys
good but I have always thought of Mokuba as like a really nice boy kinda like Seren but a boy oh and thanks for updating I was feeling so down today and I only got 30 mins. computer time but you brought my happieness all up update soon and see you on the guild boards! ^-^ oh and one of your fav mangas is Princess Ai I like it as well and I just love the outfits but #2 does not come out for awhile they take a whole year just to write well draw one so unfair have a nice day good byz!
11/8/2004 c2 painsys
good but I have always thought of Mokuba as like a really nice boy kinda like Seren but a boy oh and thanks for updating I was feeling so down today and I only got 30 mins. computer time but you brought my happieness all up update soon and see you on the guild boards! ^-^
11/8/2004 c2 4Krissy119
Tee hee! Yay, I get pats! @_@ Ohohohohoo, you don't have to nag me to review...but I can bug I sure can nag you to make your chapters longer! Mwhahaha! And I'm quite sure that the other reader/reviews agree with me.

Ahh! Mokuba is SO CUTE! He wants to be just like his big bwother! (Malik and Bakura are better!) Eh he he-don't mind me. Just please please please please PLEASE update again soon and Please Please PLEASE make the chapter just a tid-bit longer, 'kay? Awesome chappy.

Keep 'Em Comin'!

Krissy119
11/8/2004 c2 chii-chan
wow that was a fast update! yay i love it
11/7/2004 c1 chii-chan
hope u updatee soon ;) i'll be looking forward to it
11/5/2004 c1 Krissy119
Oh my gosh, I want more! More I say, MORE! *cough* I'm okay. Please update sooner, I really want to know what happens!

Krissy119
11/3/2004 c1 painsys
Well done sunsport and otaku sounds intresting can not wait for the next chap. please tell me when you upload the new one oh and is 96.7 a real GPA I thought it was out of 4? Well have a nice night and write more soon! ^-^
11/3/2004 c1 31nkitty29
nice i liked it! please update soon
11/3/2004 c1 Priscilla M. Jimenez
11/3/04

Dear mangafreak2273,

So far, you fanfic seems very interesting. I hope that you update very soon. If you don't, then I'll understand, since it's the school year and all. I was reading your author info, and I just hope that this fic won't have any yaoi in it, please. But besides that, I'm sure that this fic will surely be very good to read.

Sincerely, Priscilla M. J. :)

P.S. If possible, please update A.S.A.P.
11/27/2004 c4 nkitty29
i loved it! i can't wait for kaiba's reaction. please update soon.
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