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7/4/2007 c12 9Poseidon's Chickadee
Ray. She makes me think of Kira a bit, but a mix of Kira and the very first seer of the source.

Wicked but with some emotions seeping in. And it seems that Phoebe is the reason, like with Kira (Well ONE of them for Kira). I like that you had the Seer to Seer connection there.

And I am glad that Patty had a talk with Pru, girl needed it.

Phoebe is working hard (go Huffle!) and Paige is taking chances :-D

And the Seer, Ray, has a crush on Sirius?

Of all the things ... lol
7/3/2007 c12 1mallratrebel
love the chapter.please update
6/28/2007 c11 charmedgirl-alyssaphoebe
geat story go on here, update soon please
2/6/2007 c11 9Poseidon's Chickadee
Oh!

She WAS so close!

Please update, pretty please.

This is so good and it's getting better :-)
2/6/2007 c7 Poseidon's Chickadee
I knew he would want Pheobe.

She has it in her to change him or at least make him tolerable 'cause she has it in her to change herself. You've shown glimpses of that.

Still gonna do a Piper/Leo bit? :-D
2/6/2007 c6 Poseidon's Chickadee
Support SPEW? lmao!

Oh my goodness You totally did it different from what I expected, Piper is the only one who was in the house I thought she would be.

But I see how you did it and I think it's genious. You fit them into how they could be, not how they are now. Sure Pheobe is the cruel one but empath, future Pheobe is caring and forgiving and understanding and not to mention loyal. Yes Prue is the older more kick ass one, not to mention bossy but she was always ambitious and a tad cunning and she has her pride, and because she can temper all that she can handle Slytheran. And timid little Paige, who brings the Charmed ones back together (in canon) who is the one always there determined not to let go of magic. And in your fic, she quickly and surely accepted magic wholeheartedly and Paige always did have a mischevious side ... timid or no *grins* And Piper no matter how ass-kicking she got on the show, she was always questing and curious and cooking lol

Excellent. Just excellent.

Brava
2/6/2007 c5 Poseidon's Chickadee
Leo Wyatt? lmao

Good chapter again and quite enjoyable
2/6/2007 c3 Poseidon's Chickadee
YIPPIE!

Go Paige, finally a good fic that has her as a major character and not just background :-D
2/6/2007 c2 Poseidon's Chickadee
lol

Dumbledore, Dumbledore, Dumbledore.

Somethings never change
2/6/2007 c1 Poseidon'sChickadee
Very good chapter.

Except you had some inconsistancies.

The ages? How old are all of them?
6/18/2006 c10 danielle503
i like the story
3/23/2006 c10 2ShadowCree
Cool. No offense but I don't really like the whole Phoebe hating Paige. I hope in later chapters she'll like preferably love her.Update soon.
2/20/2006 c10 WHOCARESWHATMYNAMEIS
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2/5/2006 c9 Harry-Pottercharmed-4-ever
MUST...HAVE...MORE...NOW!WILL...DIE...WITH...OUT...STORY!

p.s. This is for Ch. 10 not 9
2/5/2006 c10 Harry-Pottercharmed-4-ever
MUST...HAVE...MORE...NOW!WILL...DIE...WITH...OUT...STORY!
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