for Jimmy's Truth Finally Prevails12/7/2004 c10 
21Billie Jukes
Answer: He's cute, but I like Kaito better
Muses: but aren't Kaito and Jimmy practically identical?
Me: Shaddup!
Okay,I like the story, but I wish you hand't killed Alex and sadie, I liked them. At least they both died together.
21Billie JukesAnswer: He's cute, but I like Kaito better
Muses: but aren't Kaito and Jimmy practically identical?
Me: Shaddup!
Okay,I like the story, but I wish you hand't killed Alex and sadie, I liked them. At least they both died together.
12/7/2004 c10 gloomysummer
Aie! My pc isnt working that well again...
Of COURSE he's HOT! I choose the first one!
Wow... I think that this is gonna be the best chapter for me! ;)
Aie! My pc isnt working that well again...
Of COURSE he's HOT! I choose the first one!
Wow... I think that this is gonna be the best chapter for me! ;)
12/5/2004 c9 Tinydancerholdme
Sweetsweetsweetswet! That was ubercool! *plays 'let the bodies hit the floor'*
One error you might want to look at though is this:
Harley’s body was still paralyzed by the blue liquid and he could barley talk. He managed to say, “What’s happening in a week voice,” in a weak voice.
Besides that, this was unpredictable and overall enjoyable
Sweetsweetsweetswet! That was ubercool! *plays 'let the bodies hit the floor'*
One error you might want to look at though is this:
Harley’s body was still paralyzed by the blue liquid and he could barley talk. He managed to say, “What’s happening in a week voice,” in a weak voice.
Besides that, this was unpredictable and overall enjoyable
12/4/2004 c9 bluestar detective
hey i just got sighned into fanfic but i have been reading this case closed story sence u started writing it and i love it keep writting!
hey i just got sighned into fanfic but i have been reading this case closed story sence u started writing it and i love it keep writting!
12/3/2004 c9 2Teh Jingle-Laydeh
This is gonna be a long review. Yay the bitch is dead! Whuts gonna happen next? I liked your funny!^_^ Sometimes I type to fast and/or wwrite to fast for my brain to keep up to (as you can tell) so dont feel bad. P S FMA DOES ROCK! (*sighs a dreamy sigh* Ed...) GREAT STORY, keeo it up! ^_^
2Teh Jingle-LaydehThis is gonna be a long review. Yay the bitch is dead! Whuts gonna happen next? I liked your funny!^_^ Sometimes I type to fast and/or wwrite to fast for my brain to keep up to (as you can tell) so dont feel bad. P S FMA DOES ROCK! (*sighs a dreamy sigh* Ed...) GREAT STORY, keeo it up! ^_^
12/3/2004 c9 5KraftySimmer
YAH! JIMMY X RACHEL ALL THE WAY! Same with Heiji X Kazuha and "Kaito Kid" X Aoko! See? I am not the only one who thinks Heiji desevers a better name. and who names their kid Harley anymore? Even in Japan? U, me and Hamati Inya need to make a protision and send it to FUNImations! LOL. I read that Case Closed was soposse to come back June 7th but I dont know how old that article was. Was that when they first aired it? I hope not. I only need to wait 6 months now
Oh, by the way...good funny. LOL I am having too much fun. I think I am hyper again...*goofy smile*
5KraftySimmerYAH! JIMMY X RACHEL ALL THE WAY! Same with Heiji X Kazuha and "Kaito Kid" X Aoko! See? I am not the only one who thinks Heiji desevers a better name. and who names their kid Harley anymore? Even in Japan? U, me and Hamati Inya need to make a protision and send it to FUNImations! LOL. I read that Case Closed was soposse to come back June 7th but I dont know how old that article was. Was that when they first aired it? I hope not. I only need to wait 6 months now
Oh, by the way...good funny. LOL I am having too much fun. I think I am hyper again...*goofy smile*
12/3/2004 c9 gloomysummer
yay! my pc is fixed.. but i cant log in in th review part... whatever...
YAY! B.M. is dead! And Jimmy and co arent dead! I hope Jimmy doesnt die... you cant let him die...
I wish that Rans lover was mine...
yay! my pc is fixed.. but i cant log in in th review part... whatever...
YAY! B.M. is dead! And Jimmy and co arent dead! I hope Jimmy doesnt die... you cant let him die...
I wish that Rans lover was mine...
11/29/2004 c8 gloomysummer
Gomen... I couldnt review! Dad was erasing the pc...
EEK! Conan you Baka! You've just told the eployee of the Black Org.!
Oh My Gosh! I love this peice of work from you! But one thing I hate are cliffhangers... makes me so nerbous!
Gomen... I couldnt review! Dad was erasing the pc...
EEK! Conan you Baka! You've just told the eployee of the Black Org.!
Oh My Gosh! I love this peice of work from you! But one thing I hate are cliffhangers... makes me so nerbous!
11/29/2004 c7 gloomysummer
Gomen nasai I didnt review! I coul;dnt review coz there was that server overload thing...
ooh,... i hae oread the next hapter now to find out about harley...
Gomen nasai I didnt review! I coul;dnt review coz there was that server overload thing...
ooh,... i hae oread the next hapter now to find out about harley...