11/28/2004 c8 Tinydancerholdme
Bueno! Bueno! Next chapter! This is going on my faves and alerts! Keep it coming.
However, I have seen a few errors you might want to double check. (Press F7 on word)
to-meaning to, as in to gramma, from me
too-meaning also, as in, me too!
two-is the number 2. I've seen this one messed up a bit.
Bueno! Bueno! Next chapter! This is going on my faves and alerts! Keep it coming.
However, I have seen a few errors you might want to double check. (Press F7 on word)
to-meaning to, as in to gramma, from me
too-meaning also, as in, me too!
two-is the number 2. I've seen this one messed up a bit.
11/28/2004 c8 25StunGun Millie
hey that was fast. I know it takes a while sometimes when ur trying 2 make a good chapter like this one. keep it up!
hey that was fast. I know it takes a while sometimes when ur trying 2 make a good chapter like this one. keep it up!
11/28/2004 c8 5Hamato Inya
Great Story! I can't wait for the next instalment! Poor Sadie... that would be horrible knowing your family was slaughtered...
and now to the ppl at VIZ who will not be reading this:
WHAT DID YOU DO TO HEIJI'S NAME? COULDN'T YOU HAVE FOUND A BETTER NAME THAN HARLEY?
sorry to ppl who like it
once again great story and i will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter
Great Story! I can't wait for the next instalment! Poor Sadie... that would be horrible knowing your family was slaughtered...
and now to the ppl at VIZ who will not be reading this:
WHAT DID YOU DO TO HEIJI'S NAME? COULDN'T YOU HAVE FOUND A BETTER NAME THAN HARLEY?
sorry to ppl who like it
once again great story and i will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter
11/25/2004 c7 25StunGun Millie
Thank u 4 updateing so fast. Hopefully u can update just as fast as this time. Keep writing ur very good.
Thank u 4 updateing so fast. Hopefully u can update just as fast as this time. Keep writing ur very good.
11/24/2004 c6 gloomysummer
Hehe... I'm still famous! Right now Im in front of the pc typing this review...
I dont get how Rachel fogives Jimy that quickly... oh well :)
Hehe... I'm still famous! Right now Im in front of the pc typing this review...
I dont get how Rachel fogives Jimy that quickly... oh well :)
11/23/2004 c1 6Sango Yukijorou
This is very good! I can't wait to see what happens next! Bloody Mary is one rude bitch ^^
This is very good! I can't wait to see what happens next! Bloody Mary is one rude bitch ^^
11/23/2004 c6 HotPinkPenguin
hey, i liked the story so far. its awesome! LOL im so weird... but i cant wait for you to up date it!
hey, i liked the story so far. its awesome! LOL im so weird... but i cant wait for you to up date it!
11/23/2004 c6 25StunGun Millie
Yes i love this story. Keep going but please please please update sooner! And of course I agree Jimmy is hot but only in his real body.
Yes i love this story. Keep going but please please please update sooner! And of course I agree Jimmy is hot but only in his real body.
11/20/2004 c5 StunGun Millie
Update please! Jimmy is hot and he's mine so keep ur paws off him! and please review my story.
Update please! Jimmy is hot and he's mine so keep ur paws off him! and please review my story.
11/18/2004 c4 gloomysummer
wow.. famous... YAY! I got called famous!
hehehe... need more reviews? here's one!
one question i dont get... dont rachel and jimmy remember ai?
wow.. famous... YAY! I got called famous!
hehehe... need more reviews? here's one!
one question i dont get... dont rachel and jimmy remember ai?
11/17/2004 c3 gloomysummer
dont ever stop writing! cannot give up... i love the ending of the secong chapter! concna was so sweet...
dont ever stop writing! cannot give up... i love the ending of the secong chapter! concna was so sweet...
11/16/2004 c3 2Colonel Azure
You EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON! You meanie *sobs* you're just like all thoese other people who make cliffhangers... o wellz hope you update soon*
You EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON! You meanie *sobs* you're just like all thoese other people who make cliffhangers... o wellz hope you update soon*
11/11/2004 c1 eclipseofgoldenlight
I agree, Jimmy is the total HOTNESS! Anyways, This is good, and cute, so update soon!
I agree, Jimmy is the total HOTNESS! Anyways, This is good, and cute, so update soon!