11/14/2004 c1 mangaqueen13
wow! that was amazing. seriously, that was really good. to me, the cleverest part was when you said, "i waited five seconds. one for him to see me..." and so on. very nice! i await an update.

11/13/2004 c1 1Lil Kayke
O.O Oh wow, this is really good; beautifully writen. I hope that others will find this so you can continue!