for I Do10/23/2019 c2 Guest
This is interesting. I hope you’ll continue writing this. :)
This is interesting. I hope you’ll continue writing this. :)
12/16/2018 c2 Guest
14 yrs...no update...just when it was at d best part.
I wanted to know sasuke's reaction.
14 yrs...no update...just when it was at d best part.
I wanted to know sasuke's reaction.
9/5/2014 c2 cloud
update please! :))))
update please! :))))
7/4/2014 c2 
1Kawaii-Neko1246
Oh my, its been awhile since I read this.. Im not sure if I left you a review before but even now im still eager to know what happens next.. So is there going to be another chapter? Please? I would love to read it!
1Kawaii-Neko1246Oh my, its been awhile since I read this.. Im not sure if I left you a review before but even now im still eager to know what happens next.. So is there going to be another chapter? Please? I would love to read it!
4/19/2013 c2 TopazDove
IMAIMASHII! CLIFFHANGERRRRR! GAH!
Naruto: o.O *turns to parents* is he ok?
Parents: ...we will never know...
Sasuke: hn... *looks at Itachi* u should get with him. Maybe then u wont be so uptight
Itachi: *vein pops. Lunges at Sasuke*
Sasuke: *dodges, goes behind Itachi and pushes him into the boy*
Itachi: *falls into the boy*
Me: ITAI! *falls to ground with itachi on top and our lips locked together. Eyes grow wide. Shrieks, knees Itachi in crotch, kicks Itachi off, and hides behind Naruto's father*
Itachi: ITAI! *falls to knees covering crotch*
Naruto's&Sasuke'sFathers: ohhhhh ouch! Thats gotta hurt! *winces at the thought of how much pain Itachi is in*
Sasuke: *busts up laughing*
Me: *feels guilty. Kneels down next to Itachi* ne, r u ok? *eyes wide and childishly filled with concern and curiousity*
Itachi: *hearts form in eyes. Gets down on one knee, takes boy's hand* i am fine now that i am seeing how beautiful u truly r
Others: *sweatdrop*
Me: *shrieks in shock* ITAI! *freaks out and kicks Itachi in the face, sending him flying*
Uchihas: *jaws drop in utter shock at the small boy's strength*
IMAIMASHII! CLIFFHANGERRRRR! GAH!
Naruto: o.O *turns to parents* is he ok?
Parents: ...we will never know...
Sasuke: hn... *looks at Itachi* u should get with him. Maybe then u wont be so uptight
Itachi: *vein pops. Lunges at Sasuke*
Sasuke: *dodges, goes behind Itachi and pushes him into the boy*
Itachi: *falls into the boy*
Me: ITAI! *falls to ground with itachi on top and our lips locked together. Eyes grow wide. Shrieks, knees Itachi in crotch, kicks Itachi off, and hides behind Naruto's father*
Itachi: ITAI! *falls to knees covering crotch*
Naruto's&Sasuke'sFathers: ohhhhh ouch! Thats gotta hurt! *winces at the thought of how much pain Itachi is in*
Sasuke: *busts up laughing*
Me: *feels guilty. Kneels down next to Itachi* ne, r u ok? *eyes wide and childishly filled with concern and curiousity*
Itachi: *hearts form in eyes. Gets down on one knee, takes boy's hand* i am fine now that i am seeing how beautiful u truly r
Others: *sweatdrop*
Me: *shrieks in shock* ITAI! *freaks out and kicks Itachi in the face, sending him flying*
Uchihas: *jaws drop in utter shock at the small boy's strength*
5/8/2010 c2 wakinyan
i hope that there will be a chapter 3 soon
i hope that there will be a chapter 3 soon
6/26/2008 c2 justine johnston
why or when are you going to finish this
why or when are you going to finish this