
12/18/2006 c1
36violent darlings
Oh, this little scene could have so much potential. I love your descriptiveness, particuarly at the end, but Norrington seems a little too out of character to be believable. Your spelling requires some attention, but other than that, an interesting first chapter.

Oh, this little scene could have so much potential. I love your descriptiveness, particuarly at the end, but Norrington seems a little too out of character to be believable. Your spelling requires some attention, but other than that, an interesting first chapter.
2/28/2005 c5 unsgined
Wow, you're a great writer. I love the story! I hope you finish it so we (by "we" i mean fans and I) can finish reading it.
Wow, you're a great writer. I love the story! I hope you finish it so we (by "we" i mean fans and I) can finish reading it.
1/26/2005 c5
29Snowy Winter Tales
Lovely story, really. Though I am not a Warrington fan. And not a crying Will fan either. *pokes* You better make him marry Elizabeth, or no more bread for you!

Lovely story, really. Though I am not a Warrington fan. And not a crying Will fan either. *pokes* You better make him marry Elizabeth, or no more bread for you!
12/30/2004 c5
3GDAC
o i wonder who the shadow was? and when is jack going to appear. i hope norrington gets what he deserves. and i bet thats going to be a hoot when will wakes up with that girl! haha

o i wonder who the shadow was? and when is jack going to appear. i hope norrington gets what he deserves. and i bet thats going to be a hoot when will wakes up with that girl! haha
12/30/2004 c4
15Cowpie Surprise
GAH its not fair Norrington gets everything! X(
I like the plot so much and I love your descriptions!

GAH its not fair Norrington gets everything! X(
I like the plot so much and I love your descriptions!
12/25/2004 c1 xo-Quill
Hey, Misty! This story is excellent, I really can't bash you for anything! Keep it up, dude! You're the best!
Love ya!
Liz
Hey, Misty! This story is excellent, I really can't bash you for anything! Keep it up, dude! You're the best!
Love ya!
Liz
12/24/2004 c4
3GDAC
gee whiz this place is twisted! poor elizabeth...wow i love your description...its so beautiful.

gee whiz this place is twisted! poor elizabeth...wow i love your description...its so beautiful.
12/24/2004 c3 GDAC
i did not know what Norrington was up to until i got halfway through this chapter. that is terrible...she cannot be happily married to norry. and what is will thinking? i am very curious. does he love her or not?
i did not know what Norrington was up to until i got halfway through this chapter. that is terrible...she cannot be happily married to norry. and what is will thinking? i am very curious. does he love her or not?
12/23/2004 c5
4Whitney Rose
NORRINGTON IS EVIL! *hisses* He can't kill Will! Poor Elizabeth... Loverly chapter as always, Misty. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter! I want to know what happens! *bounces excitedly* Well, I'm being forced to turn the computer off because it's nearly 1 a.m. here, so this will be a short review. (I'm notorious for leaving uber long reviews... at least I was. =P)

NORRINGTON IS EVIL! *hisses* He can't kill Will! Poor Elizabeth... Loverly chapter as always, Misty. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter! I want to know what happens! *bounces excitedly* Well, I'm being forced to turn the computer off because it's nearly 1 a.m. here, so this will be a short review. (I'm notorious for leaving uber long reviews... at least I was. =P)
12/10/2004 c4
2meggumscat
Ebil Norrington! *glares at Norrington*
Tsk tsk... Will shouldn't have been drinking... bad Will!
Super dooper chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^^

Ebil Norrington! *glares at Norrington*
Tsk tsk... Will shouldn't have been drinking... bad Will!
Super dooper chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^^
12/8/2004 c4
4Whitney Rose
I don't think I reviewed for this... GAH! Why do I keep doing this? I did this to Erica, too. I'll review whenever you put up your next chapter. I have to go to stupid school, even though I feel horrible right now.

I don't think I reviewed for this... GAH! Why do I keep doing this? I did this to Erica, too. I'll review whenever you put up your next chapter. I have to go to stupid school, even though I feel horrible right now.