for The Point of Being Young6/11/2005 c49 Marva
Keep up the good work please update soon
Keep up the good work please update soon
6/8/2005 c49 iheartPA
please update soon! reading your story the last two days has been a great diversion from my job. hahaha. if you don't update i'll actually have to do work.
please update soon! reading your story the last two days has been a great diversion from my job. hahaha. if you don't update i'll actually have to do work.
6/7/2005 c49 
41Andrea Sinisterra
Holy Jets, it's taken me three days to read this... Of course I enjoy doing things the hard way and couldn't keep from sitting for hours on end reading chapter after chapter until my eyes blurried out and I could no longer form a single coherent thought.
So, to cut this rambling short, I just had to hit review. Esren, I love this story. I love your characterization of every single cast member- Rory, Logan, Luke, Lorelai, Emily, Richard and ESPECIALLY Finn. One has got to love that guy. Your portrayal of everyone is so clever and facetious, completely in-character with the originals. I particuarly enjoyed the literary and musical references, proud that I recognized most of the quotes cited.
The plot is bewilderingly breathtaking; I like how you've still managed to create your own story while still following certain situations in the series.
Your writing style is magnificent; at times you're so straight-forward and blunt, yet other times, like during the love scene, your style acquires this sort of poetic tilt, a kind of aesthetic passion that makes words and actions slurr with the sheer beauty (even if it sounds redundant) of it.
Of course I will admit I'm just trying to NOT bite my nails as I'm trembling with the overpowering force of not crying and screaming at the mean cliffhanger. I'm very anxious to know what happens once Logan and Rory hit Stars Hollow and how will the Huntzberger clan react to the news. Also, I'm not-so-patiently waiting for the all-important-catastrophic meeting with The Parents.
Anyway, kudos on such well-rounded, clever and beautiful originality; I've added this story to the Author's Alert, so I can keep track of the updates.
Much hugs,
Andrea
PS.: Pardon any mispellings or errors in grammar and/or syntax, it's 4:18 a.m. -_-"
41Andrea SinisterraHoly Jets, it's taken me three days to read this... Of course I enjoy doing things the hard way and couldn't keep from sitting for hours on end reading chapter after chapter until my eyes blurried out and I could no longer form a single coherent thought.
So, to cut this rambling short, I just had to hit review. Esren, I love this story. I love your characterization of every single cast member- Rory, Logan, Luke, Lorelai, Emily, Richard and ESPECIALLY Finn. One has got to love that guy. Your portrayal of everyone is so clever and facetious, completely in-character with the originals. I particuarly enjoyed the literary and musical references, proud that I recognized most of the quotes cited.
The plot is bewilderingly breathtaking; I like how you've still managed to create your own story while still following certain situations in the series.
Your writing style is magnificent; at times you're so straight-forward and blunt, yet other times, like during the love scene, your style acquires this sort of poetic tilt, a kind of aesthetic passion that makes words and actions slurr with the sheer beauty (even if it sounds redundant) of it.
Of course I will admit I'm just trying to NOT bite my nails as I'm trembling with the overpowering force of not crying and screaming at the mean cliffhanger. I'm very anxious to know what happens once Logan and Rory hit Stars Hollow and how will the Huntzberger clan react to the news. Also, I'm not-so-patiently waiting for the all-important-catastrophic meeting with The Parents.
Anyway, kudos on such well-rounded, clever and beautiful originality; I've added this story to the Author's Alert, so I can keep track of the updates.
Much hugs,
Andrea
PS.: Pardon any mispellings or errors in grammar and/or syntax, it's 4:18 a.m. -_-"
6/4/2005 c49 Laura Christie
Just gotta love your work. It's amazing. Thank you so much for that lovely, wonderful, warm and fuzzy update. Can't wait for the next chapter...
Cheers!
Just gotta love your work. It's amazing. Thank you so much for that lovely, wonderful, warm and fuzzy update. Can't wait for the next chapter...
Cheers!
6/4/2005 c49 42Problem Child1
You have such a way with words and discription. I feel honored just to be able to read your works. They're marvelous, and I wished every single story was like this, but alas it isn't. Here's to you, arguably the best writer on this little site.
42Problem Child1You have such a way with words and discription. I feel honored just to be able to read your works. They're marvelous, and I wished every single story was like this, but alas it isn't. Here's to you, arguably the best writer on this little site.
6/4/2005 c49 31r'n'rb
i envy your gift with words and your knack for capturing characters and emitions perfectly
Love the story
-Ani
( Rock and Roll Bitch )
31r'n'rbi envy your gift with words and your knack for capturing characters and emitions perfectly
Love the story
-Ani
( Rock and Roll Bitch )
6/4/2005 c49 riotgirllina
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Love your story
its so cute
i can't believe he didn't respond, but he does love her. he has to say it soon.
o i hope him going to stars hollow doesnot cause problems
update Soon!
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Love your story
its so cute
i can't believe he didn't respond, but he does love her. he has to say it soon.
o i hope him going to stars hollow doesnot cause problems
update Soon!
6/4/2005 c49 199Kavi Leighanna
Sweet! I really adored this one and I'm glad there was an update, no matter how long. Snow is always the best for fluffy chapters!
199Kavi LeighannaSweet! I really adored this one and I'm glad there was an update, no matter how long. Snow is always the best for fluffy chapters!
6/4/2005 c49 1mochaddicted79
uh-oh, will Logan try to keep Rory from his family? Because then Rory might get the wrong idea. Or if he does bring her or tell his family about her, will they be vulturistic and go along with the show's storyline and say Rory's not good enough for him?
1mochaddicted79uh-oh, will Logan try to keep Rory from his family? Because then Rory might get the wrong idea. Or if he does bring her or tell his family about her, will they be vulturistic and go along with the show's storyline and say Rory's not good enough for him?
5/27/2005 c48 Marva
Great story . Keep up the good work . Please update soon.
Great story . Keep up the good work . Please update soon.