for Harry Potter and A PotterBlack's Role in Life9/9/2022 c12 
1blcoachmac
So Padma, Blaise, Fleur and Luna? That is an abundance of riches. I mean witches!
1blcoachmacSo Padma, Blaise, Fleur and Luna? That is an abundance of riches. I mean witches!
9/9/2022 c11 blcoachmac
Not sure how the Harrington's will play into the story or if they are just an outlier for Harry to bounce things off of?
Not sure how the Harrington's will play into the story or if they are just an outlier for Harry to bounce things off of?
9/9/2022 c10 blcoachmac
The bond with Luna is ssssssssllllllllllooooooooowwwwwwwww! That is a match I have always liked as they seem to fit together after the trauma that both have suffered. They balance each other out and always seemed to know what the other needed at any given time!
The bond with Luna is ssssssssllllllllllooooooooowwwwwwwww! That is a match I have always liked as they seem to fit together after the trauma that both have suffered. They balance each other out and always seemed to know what the other needed at any given time!
9/9/2022 c8 blcoachmac
So many girls, so little time, but they will make it work? Harry will have help from so many angles tom and Dumbles will get dizzy before they get obliterated!
So many girls, so little time, but they will make it work? Harry will have help from so many angles tom and Dumbles will get dizzy before they get obliterated!
9/8/2022 c1 blcoachmac
Oh this could be great! He needs a clever witch to help him navigate the complexities of creatures, semi-humans, and idiots! Wonder who would be best for that!
Oh this could be great! He needs a clever witch to help him navigate the complexities of creatures, semi-humans, and idiots! Wonder who would be best for that!
8/11/2022 c10 wg
hope he's not with buck tooth bush bitch
hope he's not with buck tooth bush bitch
4/14/2022 c12 Astramilitarum01
The idea was there but the execution was lackluster, the story reads like a disjointed dream with so many logic errors and plothooks that where never explained or even mentioned that it makes no sense what so ever to implement them so soon.
Examples would be the room, the elves , the rings, rituals, the trunk ( super expensive but very small in comparison to modys trunk or a simpel tent) and the whole contact thing.
Nothing made much sense, the setup for the Harem was nonexistent and the interaction with the girls was downright cringe.
As it is now it's basically a raw draft for a story but lacks structure and editing
The idea was there but the execution was lackluster, the story reads like a disjointed dream with so many logic errors and plothooks that where never explained or even mentioned that it makes no sense what so ever to implement them so soon.
Examples would be the room, the elves , the rings, rituals, the trunk ( super expensive but very small in comparison to modys trunk or a simpel tent) and the whole contact thing.
Nothing made much sense, the setup for the Harem was nonexistent and the interaction with the girls was downright cringe.
As it is now it's basically a raw draft for a story but lacks structure and editing
3/30/2022 c12 Tim Randall
I would like to read more. But you have not route more so right more than think you !
I would like to read more. But you have not route more so right more than think you !
3/29/2022 c1 Tim Randall
That was buftul
That was buftul
3/20/2022 c12 Flamin' FiddleStiX
I hope you continue your story, it was a nice read!
Love the goblin societal dynamic, it’s always neat when writers grab the side cultures and create fascinating what ifs.
I hope you continue your story, it was a nice read!
Love the goblin societal dynamic, it’s always neat when writers grab the side cultures and create fascinating what ifs.
6/27/2021 c1 Chris
Thanks for your story! Writing is brutally difficult, plus there are too many idiot critics. Never quit, never surrender! Again, appreciate your efforts. I enjoyed the story.
Thanks for your story! Writing is brutally difficult, plus there are too many idiot critics. Never quit, never surrender! Again, appreciate your efforts. I enjoyed the story.
5/23/2021 c1 Guest
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4/17/2021 c12 5aalens
I am greatly enjoying this fic and am eager to find out what happens next...particularly what is ailing the house elves, the progress of Harry and Luna’s relationship, why Harry is having periods do sweating etc, and who the fourth wife will be. Many tanks for what you have written so far.
5aalensI am greatly enjoying this fic and am eager to find out what happens next...particularly what is ailing the house elves, the progress of Harry and Luna’s relationship, why Harry is having periods do sweating etc, and who the fourth wife will be. Many tanks for what you have written so far.