for The Old and New8/31/2007 c11 Ren Zordic
ang ganda ng story! binasa ko yung friends tapos nakita ko toh..hehe! ang swerte ko dahil ngayon ko lang ito binasa..which means, di ko na kailangan maghintay ng update! nyahahahahahaha! anyways, your story was really great! keep up the good work!
ang ganda ng story! binasa ko yung friends tapos nakita ko toh..hehe! ang swerte ko dahil ngayon ko lang ito binasa..which means, di ko na kailangan maghintay ng update! nyahahahahahaha! anyways, your story was really great! keep up the good work!
9/24/2006 c3 Minamoto Shiko
Whoa.The Ice Prince Rukawa is no longer himself, but is possessed! That is more talking than he has ever done in probably his entire life!
Whoa.The Ice Prince Rukawa is no longer himself, but is possessed! That is more talking than he has ever done in probably his entire life!
8/6/2005 c11 a certain reader
oh...the story is super kawaii! good job on the story, miss hachigatsu kuroi! i like it so much! as i was reading this it made me smile a lot, especially the revised ending ^^
oh...the story is super kawaii! good job on the story, miss hachigatsu kuroi! i like it so much! as i was reading this it made me smile a lot, especially the revised ending ^^
4/24/2005 c10 Asukachan
Ok... I must make a confession... this is the first Slam Dunk (or any other anime) fanfic I've ever read and... it was good :D :D :D :D
Now that's why I hate f* chat rooms... it took me half an hour to decipher that thing! :P
Anyway now that I'm finished reading it all I can tell you, yes your writing needs improvement, mostly because you go too fast and are too schematic about the change of scenes, however I have to conbgratulate you for writing Rukawa/OC stuff I really can't stand seing him with one of the characters of the series XD and also you know what they say practice makes masters so... the more you write the better you'll get.
One last little thing, you might want to consider finding a betareader so u can have the stuff corrected, at least grammatically.
I believe I've said enough alredy...
GOOD LUCK AND KEEP GOING!
Ok... I must make a confession... this is the first Slam Dunk (or any other anime) fanfic I've ever read and... it was good :D :D :D :D
Now that's why I hate f* chat rooms... it took me half an hour to decipher that thing! :P
Anyway now that I'm finished reading it all I can tell you, yes your writing needs improvement, mostly because you go too fast and are too schematic about the change of scenes, however I have to conbgratulate you for writing Rukawa/OC stuff I really can't stand seing him with one of the characters of the series XD and also you know what they say practice makes masters so... the more you write the better you'll get.
One last little thing, you might want to consider finding a betareader so u can have the stuff corrected, at least grammatically.
I believe I've said enough alredy...
GOOD LUCK AND KEEP GOING!
4/21/2005 c10 SD avid Fan
oh my goshie! you finished the story already? I was beginning to think this will end up till chappie no. 15 or something.. oh well, it was nice though.. and i'm so sorry that I didn't review the previous chppies.. i was enjoying my vacation.. wehehehehe.. will you pls allow me to post the oneshot i've made? pls.. pls.. pls.. oh, i've got a new fic don't forget to check it out.. more power in your writing..
oh my goshie! you finished the story already? I was beginning to think this will end up till chappie no. 15 or something.. oh well, it was nice though.. and i'm so sorry that I didn't review the previous chppies.. i was enjoying my vacation.. wehehehehe.. will you pls allow me to post the oneshot i've made? pls.. pls.. pls.. oh, i've got a new fic don't forget to check it out.. more power in your writing..
4/3/2005 c10 
4do you feel like killing me
araheta...i'm hungry...see? i sacrificed eating just 2 review ur last chappy? gnyan aq k-loyal sau :) NiCe oNe :) don't tell me dis has a sequel again? ay tama ba? sequel pa rin ba tawag if it's d 3rd one already? Baka desu
neways, kuya q c micchy is 1 of my idols...becoz if it wasn't for her i wouldn't have been publishing my fics here...actually she introduced me 2 dis site :) so ur sort of like my senior... so i think i should start calling u sempai!
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
NIYAHAHAHAHAH gud luck...i'm gonna go play neopets now...and eat something...ARAHETA!
4do you feel like killing mearaheta...i'm hungry...see? i sacrificed eating just 2 review ur last chappy? gnyan aq k-loyal sau :) NiCe oNe :) don't tell me dis has a sequel again? ay tama ba? sequel pa rin ba tawag if it's d 3rd one already? Baka desu
neways, kuya q c micchy is 1 of my idols...becoz if it wasn't for her i wouldn't have been publishing my fics here...actually she introduced me 2 dis site :) so ur sort of like my senior... so i think i should start calling u sempai!
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
SEMPAI
NIYAHAHAHAHAH gud luck...i'm gonna go play neopets now...and eat something...ARAHETA!
4/3/2005 c9 do you feel like killing me
hoi ate magai! ur so MASHADO ha! ngaun ko lng kc nbasa 2ng chapter na to...ang tgal mo n pla me inookraysa A/N mo hah! MEAN GIRL... ur such a sucker for happy endings! don't worry, d aq kokontra :) sige na, i'm gonna go read the nxt chappy na! gambatte, kuya q c micchy!
hoi ate magai! ur so MASHADO ha! ngaun ko lng kc nbasa 2ng chapter na to...ang tgal mo n pla me inookraysa A/N mo hah! MEAN GIRL... ur such a sucker for happy endings! don't worry, d aq kokontra :) sige na, i'm gonna go read the nxt chappy na! gambatte, kuya q c micchy!
3/30/2005 c10 3Setsuna Eleison
Aww.. the story is finished... heheh... anyway, I'm soo glad Rukawa is back to his old cold and icy self! anyway, that's why I like Rukawa's character in the first place.. Heheh... Well, I have to say I was surprised with the Basketball Chat thingy... I just didn't expect something like that to appear in a Slam Dunk fic.. heheh... Gomen.. ^_^ Hmm.. With regards to the confession thing... I think it was a bit rushed... After Rukawa spilled his secret, Shinobi then reveled her identity and confessed herself... And the ending is too quick... But I'm glad even though Rukawa is back from his real self, he still like Shinobi... ^_^ That's why I like the latter part... Heheh...
Overall review of the chapters:
you came up with a very interesting and unique idea... It's not like your ordinary amnesia kind of thing... I like your story... Hope to see some new stories from you... Take care! :)
3Setsuna EleisonAww.. the story is finished... heheh... anyway, I'm soo glad Rukawa is back to his old cold and icy self! anyway, that's why I like Rukawa's character in the first place.. Heheh... Well, I have to say I was surprised with the Basketball Chat thingy... I just didn't expect something like that to appear in a Slam Dunk fic.. heheh... Gomen.. ^_^ Hmm.. With regards to the confession thing... I think it was a bit rushed... After Rukawa spilled his secret, Shinobi then reveled her identity and confessed herself... And the ending is too quick... But I'm glad even though Rukawa is back from his real self, he still like Shinobi... ^_^ That's why I like the latter part... Heheh...
Overall review of the chapters:
you came up with a very interesting and unique idea... It's not like your ordinary amnesia kind of thing... I like your story... Hope to see some new stories from you... Take care! :)
3/29/2005 c1 aMp
nice.c:
nice.c:
3/29/2005 c10 K
sa wakas...
nag-update ka na rin...
last chapter din ng story mo noh...
salamat sa iyong salamat ...
o nag-rerevyu na ako...
sa wakas na sabi na ni rukawa at shinobi ang tunay na damdamin sa isa't - isa...
mabuti happy ending ang ginawa mo...
andito nga si CURLY VERY MUCH sa tabi ko...
Questions:
1. ano ba ang asl?
2.(tanong ni CURLY VERY MUCH)kung gagawa ka pa ng kwento?
3.(tanong ulit ni CURLY VERY MUCH)gagawa ka ba ng kwentong tagalog?
yun lang...
bye...
and...
GOD BLESS!
kita kits!
sa wakas...
nag-update ka na rin...
last chapter din ng story mo noh...
salamat sa iyong salamat ...
o nag-rerevyu na ako...
sa wakas na sabi na ni rukawa at shinobi ang tunay na damdamin sa isa't - isa...
mabuti happy ending ang ginawa mo...
andito nga si CURLY VERY MUCH sa tabi ko...
Questions:
1. ano ba ang asl?
2.(tanong ni CURLY VERY MUCH)kung gagawa ka pa ng kwento?
3.(tanong ulit ni CURLY VERY MUCH)gagawa ka ba ng kwentong tagalog?
yun lang...
bye...
and...
GOD BLESS!
kita kits!
3/1/2005 c9 K
okey, UPDATE ka na... GOD BLESS!
okey, UPDATE ka na... GOD BLESS!
2/12/2005 c9 K
yehey! nagbalik na ang tunay na Rukawa! sayang maganda sana dahil naging mabait na siya... pero masaya pa rin ako :
yehey! nagbalik na ang tunay na Rukawa! sayang maganda sana dahil naging mabait na siya... pero masaya pa rin ako :
2/12/2005 c7 K
Ha! Ha! Ha! Old and New... you still remember that poem? I like reading your story. I'm sorry... reviewing a story is not my style... too scared.
Ha! Ha! Ha! Old and New... you still remember that poem? I like reading your story. I'm sorry... reviewing a story is not my style... too scared.
2/11/2005 c9 Setsuna Eleison
ei... I really like your work... I like the old rukawa too since he's the rukawa that Shinobi likes... ^_^ I'm glad the Ice prince is back.. I'm not a big fan of Rukawa but I like the Ice Prince Rukawa better... Update please... Sure you can review when you feel like it.. Thanks for liking my fic too... Micchy is your brother, ne? hehehe... I hope you'll like the girl I paired up with him... hehehe.. =D TC! and please update soon.. TC!
ei... I really like your work... I like the old rukawa too since he's the rukawa that Shinobi likes... ^_^ I'm glad the Ice prince is back.. I'm not a big fan of Rukawa but I like the Ice Prince Rukawa better... Update please... Sure you can review when you feel like it.. Thanks for liking my fic too... Micchy is your brother, ne? hehehe... I hope you'll like the girl I paired up with him... hehehe.. =D TC! and please update soon.. TC!
2/10/2005 c9 meitsiwong cannot login
Ei... Yipee..!
Rukawa is back to his same old cold self again,
I don't know whether i'd be happie or... somewhat sad because... I don't know..\
but all in all... I like how the story is going.. yey..
Ei... Yipee..!
Rukawa is back to his same old cold self again,
I don't know whether i'd be happie or... somewhat sad because... I don't know..\
but all in all... I like how the story is going.. yey..