for All Of My Feelings6/4/2008 c1 
73kawaiichiisaikitsune
Please, please, please, please, one major peeve: Japanese in English stories. I could not, for the life of me, understand a word they were saying to each. I'm totally a n00b when it comes to Japanese, and I don't feel like going all the way down to the bottom to know what they're saying at the top.
I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but this would've been a much better fanfiction if it had been written in all Japanese. Honorifics and such are okay, but something where it's "JapaneseJapaneseJapanese English Japanese" is confusing.
Either way, I still liked it. :)
Who knew the ever stoic Touya would run out like and be so afraid of rejection. And wow, now I wanna see Touya drunk just so I can get all his dirty, little secrests.
Haha. Nice one.
-Dana.
73kawaiichiisaikitsunePlease, please, please, please, one major peeve: Japanese in English stories. I could not, for the life of me, understand a word they were saying to each. I'm totally a n00b when it comes to Japanese, and I don't feel like going all the way down to the bottom to know what they're saying at the top.
I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but this would've been a much better fanfiction if it had been written in all Japanese. Honorifics and such are okay, but something where it's "JapaneseJapaneseJapanese English Japanese" is confusing.
Either way, I still liked it. :)
Who knew the ever stoic Touya would run out like and be so afraid of rejection. And wow, now I wanna see Touya drunk just so I can get all his dirty, little secrests.
Haha. Nice one.
-Dana.
6/7/2006 c1 22bloodytwistedangel
'The moment I saw you'... (makes mental note)
OKAYSIES! The bar scene struck a chord. It's life and life is unfair. You portrayed bar-life wonderfully and very realistically. But then it ended with fluff so I have nothing negative to say to you! You pass the, 'ultra-cool-yoia/shounen-ai-loving-exam!' Give yourself a pat on the back!\
~B.T.A. Ria-Chan loves Envy!
22bloodytwistedangel'The moment I saw you'... (makes mental note)
OKAYSIES! The bar scene struck a chord. It's life and life is unfair. You portrayed bar-life wonderfully and very realistically. But then it ended with fluff so I have nothing negative to say to you! You pass the, 'ultra-cool-yoia/shounen-ai-loving-exam!' Give yourself a pat on the back!\
~B.T.A. Ria-Chan loves Envy!
7/27/2005 c1 21JJ CJ
KYAYA! ::squees:: I love your fics, do you know that? kekekek:
X: I love you...
Y: Really? :sparkly eyes:
X: But only for your fics...
::deis laughing:: ::ahem:: meanwhile, this is a levely lovely lovely lovely fic! I go back to your author page and look around some more!
-J (said what s/he was doing already)
21JJ CJKYAYA! ::squees:: I love your fics, do you know that? kekekek:
X: I love you...
Y: Really? :sparkly eyes:
X: But only for your fics...
::deis laughing:: ::ahem:: meanwhile, this is a levely lovely lovely lovely fic! I go back to your author page and look around some more!
-J (said what s/he was doing already)
1/18/2005 c1 dizzy-otaku
Hi again!^_^
I liked this one also,so sweet!
Oh,and I was having some trouble e-mailing u so I though I could respond like this instead.
I've read FAKE and Gravitation and would really like it if u could e-mail me back.Also,I really like ur fanfics.There really good and I'm glad to see some fanfic with Yuki&Toya.I've tryed looking for more but no luck.:(
Hi again!^_^
I liked this one also,so sweet!
Oh,and I was having some trouble e-mailing u so I though I could respond like this instead.
I've read FAKE and Gravitation and would really like it if u could e-mail me back.Also,I really like ur fanfics.There really good and I'm glad to see some fanfic with Yuki&Toya.I've tryed looking for more but no luck.:(
1/10/2005 c1 The Shadow Scribe
Fun. Yes, that's it.
Fun. Yes, that's it.
12/18/2004 c1 yaoihime
Hey what's up yaoishoujo. It's a great story! I love the drama and surge of emotion coming from both characters.I've always liked those situations where the magnitude of emotion and feelings of a character are too intence for them to control.*thinking naughty thoughts* ^_^
*slaps myself to snap out of the daze* Anyway, good work, keep it up!
Hey what's up yaoishoujo. It's a great story! I love the drama and surge of emotion coming from both characters.I've always liked those situations where the magnitude of emotion and feelings of a character are too intence for them to control.*thinking naughty thoughts* ^_^
*slaps myself to snap out of the daze* Anyway, good work, keep it up!
12/16/2004 c1 36Leoanda Taylor
Hey! I just read this ikkle fic and I am telling you it is so cute! Yes I do like this coupling, and I think that the way those two got together is great! Just as great as 'The Moment I Saw You'.
Anywaz, late!
36Leoanda TaylorHey! I just read this ikkle fic and I am telling you it is so cute! Yes I do like this coupling, and I think that the way those two got together is great! Just as great as 'The Moment I Saw You'.
Anywaz, late!
12/15/2004 c1 142The Fellow Marauder
ARIGATOU GOZAIMASU! You finally did a glossary! Your hikari is not too bringht in the head, my wittle pharaoh-chan. ^^ Haha. ANYWAY... I liked the story.
Smitty: *excited* Did you read the whole thing, hikari-chan? Even the fight?
Hitomi: *nervous laugh* Uh... no. I kinda skipped that part...
Smitty: *pouts* doushite?
Haha. Well... if you want my real review, I have to be brutally honest and say that it went all too fast, Smitty. You shoulda dragged out the angst a bit. Ever kiss someone and regret it immediately like Touya did? If you haven't, then watch a soap and get a good idea. the story needed more angstyness. *evil laugh* But that's my opinion. I wish it was longer; drawn out more. You can thwack me if you want to for being honest.
Smitty: Okay. *shrugs and smacks her hikari*
Hitomi: Ei-ya! Ite, Smitty-chan!
Smitty: Urusai, baka hikari-chan!
Okay. I wrote too much. But it's you, so it's okay, ne? GOOD STORY, SMITTY! Place mine online soon, okay? ~_~ AISHITERU! *hugs*
Love forever and a day,
Hitomi-chan
142The Fellow MarauderARIGATOU GOZAIMASU! You finally did a glossary! Your hikari is not too bringht in the head, my wittle pharaoh-chan. ^^ Haha. ANYWAY... I liked the story.
Smitty: *excited* Did you read the whole thing, hikari-chan? Even the fight?
Hitomi: *nervous laugh* Uh... no. I kinda skipped that part...
Smitty: *pouts* doushite?
Haha. Well... if you want my real review, I have to be brutally honest and say that it went all too fast, Smitty. You shoulda dragged out the angst a bit. Ever kiss someone and regret it immediately like Touya did? If you haven't, then watch a soap and get a good idea. the story needed more angstyness. *evil laugh* But that's my opinion. I wish it was longer; drawn out more. You can thwack me if you want to for being honest.
Smitty: Okay. *shrugs and smacks her hikari*
Hitomi: Ei-ya! Ite, Smitty-chan!
Smitty: Urusai, baka hikari-chan!
Okay. I wrote too much. But it's you, so it's okay, ne? GOOD STORY, SMITTY! Place mine online soon, okay? ~_~ AISHITERU! *hugs*
Love forever and a day,
Hitomi-chan
12/12/2004 c1 6Alice Caiello
It was a great fanfiction, i really enjoy ficcies about Yuki and Touya, also thanks for reveiwing my fanfic!
i can only answer a little about the questions you gave me-
1) Sakura, Tomoyo are 16-17 Yukito is 17 too and Touya is about 34
2) I can't tell you Touya's secret unless i spoil the story ^^ gomen ne
3) I am sort of using the clasic clamp forbidden love but it may change but it is in the same catagory!
ja mata ne!
6Alice CaielloIt was a great fanfiction, i really enjoy ficcies about Yuki and Touya, also thanks for reveiwing my fanfic!
i can only answer a little about the questions you gave me-
1) Sakura, Tomoyo are 16-17 Yukito is 17 too and Touya is about 34
2) I can't tell you Touya's secret unless i spoil the story ^^ gomen ne
3) I am sort of using the clasic clamp forbidden love but it may change but it is in the same catagory!
ja mata ne!
12/10/2004 c1 tears of a mermaid
Hey Heather, i loved the story! it was so kawaii! well not the part where Touya got beaten up but the rest was damn right brilliant!
anyone i have one point to make. while i was reading through i found the japanese a little hard to understand and so may many others. i think it would be a bit easier if you placed the english translations next to the phrase in brackets. Gomen if i sounded like i right old bitch, but i swear this is a good review cause the story was a great story. ttyl
liz
Hey Heather, i loved the story! it was so kawaii! well not the part where Touya got beaten up but the rest was damn right brilliant!
anyone i have one point to make. while i was reading through i found the japanese a little hard to understand and so may many others. i think it would be a bit easier if you placed the english translations next to the phrase in brackets. Gomen if i sounded like i right old bitch, but i swear this is a good review cause the story was a great story. ttyl
liz
12/7/2004 c1 kirara goddess
it cute, hope toya is okay, ja ne
it cute, hope toya is okay, ja ne