for Pretty Boy5/28/2006 c1 
2Katrina Anna Marie Hescott
I like this fic ^^ Its really good I hope you finish it!
Im gonna add it to my favorites!
2Katrina Anna Marie HescottI like this fic ^^ Its really good I hope you finish it!
Im gonna add it to my favorites!
2/16/2006 c1 27The Wicked Witch of Dingl
Interesting... Next chapter: The one that's going through a 'stage' right?
Update!
27The Wicked Witch of DinglInteresting... Next chapter: The one that's going through a 'stage' right?
Update!
12/12/2005 c1 3Brooklyn'sGurl
I know you haven't updated for a long, long time, but could you please think about it? I'm dying to know how this story goes!
3Brooklyn'sGurlI know you haven't updated for a long, long time, but could you please think about it? I'm dying to know how this story goes!
12/11/2005 c1 kitty
i really like this story so far it's original and i can't wait for your next update.
i really like this story so far it's original and i can't wait for your next update.
10/26/2005 c1 28Babybluekitten
When are you going to update?Oh I hope it soon, please please update soon!It's really good ^^
28BabybluekittenWhen are you going to update?Oh I hope it soon, please please update soon!It's really good ^^
9/10/2005 c1 5Wolfchilde
This looks like it's going to get interesting, very cool beginning! I love the way you write, there's almost a subtle poetic feeling about it. Anywayz, please update soon!
-Wolfchilde-
5WolfchildeThis looks like it's going to get interesting, very cool beginning! I love the way you write, there's almost a subtle poetic feeling about it. Anywayz, please update soon!
-Wolfchilde-
5/22/2005 c1 19lessa4
Ah, but the odd insanities make for the more interesting bits, yes? Very interested in seeing the rest of this.
19lessa4Ah, but the odd insanities make for the more interesting bits, yes? Very interested in seeing the rest of this.
4/19/2005 c1 15SolitaireAikanaro
Oh. My. Bloody.Darn. God. That was one of the best things I've ever read! You're now one of my main Beyblade authors! The only other one is Kerrie-chan. Please update! I adore the way you made Brooklyn and Tala! But I always though Brooklyn's last name was Kingston...
Love this! Update!
15SolitaireAikanaroOh. My. Bloody.Darn. God. That was one of the best things I've ever read! You're now one of my main Beyblade authors! The only other one is Kerrie-chan. Please update! I adore the way you made Brooklyn and Tala! But I always though Brooklyn's last name was Kingston...
Love this! Update!
4/14/2005 c1 Nephra
Luffs dis! Your fics so great! Ya gotta update it soon, would ya? :x
See ya!
Luffs dis! Your fics so great! Ya gotta update it soon, would ya? :x
See ya!
3/25/2005 c1 1Nazen
Wai! *tackles* x3
I LOVE how you portrayed their personalities. Especially Brooklyn - he seemed so...well...Brooklyn-ish. xD
Excellent story - but I just have one question. Is Brooklyn's last name really Hart? They never mention it in the dubbed version, but I don't know about in the Japanese. o.o
Hart...*snorts with laughter*
1NazenWai! *tackles* x3
I LOVE how you portrayed their personalities. Especially Brooklyn - he seemed so...well...Brooklyn-ish. xD
Excellent story - but I just have one question. Is Brooklyn's last name really Hart? They never mention it in the dubbed version, but I don't know about in the Japanese. o.o
Hart...*snorts with laughter*
12/28/2004 c1 3Ramen II
brilliant! that what i think of this story so far, i'm really not kidding when i say i was giggiling throughout this ^^
you made all the character sound so sexy! i mean even though max is damn fine its not often you get to see the 'obviously-not-innocent' side of him ^^ and am i detecting a bit of max/kai here? yay
go brooklyn/tala - they are so cute together
i think its good you've made this story realistic with all the insanity and that cool 'points' system because it gets annoying when time after time the characters are written as perfect and wonderfull (I happen to do that tho -.-) insanity rules .
so keeping an eyes on this story - update soon!
russle
3Ramen IIbrilliant! that what i think of this story so far, i'm really not kidding when i say i was giggiling throughout this ^^
you made all the character sound so sexy! i mean even though max is damn fine its not often you get to see the 'obviously-not-innocent' side of him ^^ and am i detecting a bit of max/kai here? yay
go brooklyn/tala - they are so cute together
i think its good you've made this story realistic with all the insanity and that cool 'points' system because it gets annoying when time after time the characters are written as perfect and wonderfull (I happen to do that tho -.-) insanity rules .
so keeping an eyes on this story - update soon!
russle
12/27/2004 c1 19Jade Cyclone
Oh my GAWD. I love you. This is such a great story, and you have amazing talant as a writer! Great job! You keep everyone on there toes, and you have just the right amounts of dramatic moments, and the fact that you can keep it realistic is such a great achievement. This isn't corny or cliche at all, and that is something that is going to take this story to an entirely new level. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this! Brilliant job, dear ^^
Angelgirl
19Jade CycloneOh my GAWD. I love you. This is such a great story, and you have amazing talant as a writer! Great job! You keep everyone on there toes, and you have just the right amounts of dramatic moments, and the fact that you can keep it realistic is such a great achievement. This isn't corny or cliche at all, and that is something that is going to take this story to an entirely new level. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this! Brilliant job, dear ^^
Angelgirl