for Harry Potter and The Power Within7/21/2024 c14 
3WhiteElfElder
I wonder how many creatures and people will be pushed out by those wards and the area the cover? Imagine if Harry could run that spell through Hadrian's Wall and Antonine's Wall, and have the dome form between the two?
3WhiteElfElderI wonder how many creatures and people will be pushed out by those wards and the area the cover? Imagine if Harry could run that spell through Hadrian's Wall and Antonine's Wall, and have the dome form between the two?
7/21/2024 c10 WhiteElfElder
Snape just can't remember how to keep his delusion of power and control to himself.
Snape just can't remember how to keep his delusion of power and control to himself.
7/16/2024 c2 WhiteElfElder
Vernon is an idiot because any investigation is going to see the torture and the self-mutilation...they are way different on how inflicted. Not to mention the signs of being chained up.
Vernon is an idiot because any investigation is going to see the torture and the self-mutilation...they are way different on how inflicted. Not to mention the signs of being chained up.
9/6/2016 c9 yoda says
Rushed it is feels like the work of darksiders preventing you from wrighting complete full depth story humm. It seem like people are just talking on answering machines and responding to the messages in a detached sort of way humm very quick
back n forth. Like watching a tennis match it is. Each player is a person and the ball is the conversation. very tiring to watch is in it humm.
Rushed it is feels like the work of darksiders preventing you from wrighting complete full depth story humm. It seem like people are just talking on answering machines and responding to the messages in a detached sort of way humm very quick
back n forth. Like watching a tennis match it is. Each player is a person and the ball is the conversation. very tiring to watch is in it humm.
6/23/2015 c10 11reinforced hell
I LOVE these types of stories! I Hope that you have not discontinued the story.
11reinforced hellI LOVE these types of stories! I Hope that you have not discontinued the story.
6/23/2015 c1 reinforced hell
This is the second time reading this, and I'm still enjoying it!
Although the earlier chapters make me a bit squeamish, the rest of the chapters definitely make up for it. I do hope that you continue on with the story, as it has given me many hours of entertainment with what is already here.
This is the second time reading this, and I'm still enjoying it!
Although the earlier chapters make me a bit squeamish, the rest of the chapters definitely make up for it. I do hope that you continue on with the story, as it has given me many hours of entertainment with what is already here.
6/15/2015 c5 reinforced hell
I find this quite comical, I thank you for your time in writing this. It is quite good.
Oh the warm fuzzy feelings when good things happen to the protagonist!
I find this quite comical, I thank you for your time in writing this. It is quite good.
Oh the warm fuzzy feelings when good things happen to the protagonist!