for Raven in the Polar Express2/3/2010 c1 
3Skai Breeze
wow i love it when raven gets angry *smirk* good story i love eventfics just one problem i think when one person speaks write the next persons line on the line below. thats confusing isnt it?
like this
Raven tilted her head in curiosity, “You read?” Beast Boy shrugged again, and answered, “As a matter of fact, yes, I do read, well, mainly joke books and Christmas stories, but that’s not the point! The point is, try reading something, Christmassy! I’ll even borrow you one of my books if you promise not to wreck it,” he asked nicely.
3Skai Breezewow i love it when raven gets angry *smirk* good story i love eventfics just one problem i think when one person speaks write the next persons line on the line below. thats confusing isnt it?
like this
Raven tilted her head in curiosity, “You read?” Beast Boy shrugged again, and answered, “As a matter of fact, yes, I do read, well, mainly joke books and Christmas stories, but that’s not the point! The point is, try reading something, Christmassy! I’ll even borrow you one of my books if you promise not to wreck it,” he asked nicely.
12/17/2006 c5 59Bittersweet Romanticide
"As rich and sweet as melted chocolate bars" -The Polar Express I don't really know if that question abotu what it tastes like was rhetorical or not, it probably was sorry...i like it! Creative idea! It's now on my story alert list.
59Bittersweet Romanticide"As rich and sweet as melted chocolate bars" -The Polar Express I don't really know if that question abotu what it tastes like was rhetorical or not, it probably was sorry...i like it! Creative idea! It's now on my story alert list.
1/3/2006 c5 MortalRemedy
i know the lyrics, incase you'd like to change the lyrics in tour story that is.
Hot! Hot!
Ooh, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Hey, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Say, we got it!
Hot chocolate!
Hot! Hot!
Oh, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
So, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Yo, we got it!
Hot chocolate!
Here, we've only got one rule:
Never ever let it cool!
Keep it cookin in the pot,
You've got-
Hot choc-o-lat!
Here, we only got one rule:
(Here, we only got one rule:)
Never ever let it cool!
(Never ever let it cool!)
Keep it cookin in the pot,
Soon, ya got hot choc-o-lat!
Here, we only got one rule:
(Here, we only got one rule:)
Never ever let it cool!
(Never ever let it cool!)
Keep it cookin in the pot,
Soon, ya got hot choc-o-lat!
Hot! Hot!
Hey, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Whoa, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Yeah, we got it!
Hot chocolate!
ps, your stories awsome! please wright more!
i know the lyrics, incase you'd like to change the lyrics in tour story that is.
Hot! Hot!
Ooh, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Hey, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Say, we got it!
Hot chocolate!
Hot! Hot!
Oh, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
So, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Yo, we got it!
Hot chocolate!
Here, we've only got one rule:
Never ever let it cool!
Keep it cookin in the pot,
You've got-
Hot choc-o-lat!
Here, we only got one rule:
(Here, we only got one rule:)
Never ever let it cool!
(Never ever let it cool!)
Keep it cookin in the pot,
Soon, ya got hot choc-o-lat!
Here, we only got one rule:
(Here, we only got one rule:)
Never ever let it cool!
(Never ever let it cool!)
Keep it cookin in the pot,
Soon, ya got hot choc-o-lat!
Hot! Hot!
Hey, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Whoa, we got it!
Hot! Hot!
Yeah, we got it!
Hot chocolate!
ps, your stories awsome! please wright more!
5/18/2005 c1 Travis Hicks
When are you going to update? I hope you update soon as Posible. I like Raven she is The Coolest Charecter. So please update soon.
When are you going to update? I hope you update soon as Posible. I like Raven she is The Coolest Charecter. So please update soon.
2/11/2005 c3 Travis Hicks
Please Update soon Raven is The Coolest Charecter in Teen Titans that is why I Like her Even Though she is Half Demon But she is also Half Human She Does Have A Good Heart Even Though her mind is not Pure she is Good so please update soon
Please Update soon Raven is The Coolest Charecter in Teen Titans that is why I Like her Even Though she is Half Demon But she is also Half Human She Does Have A Good Heart Even Though her mind is not Pure she is Good so please update soon
1/26/2005 c5 3EsperSY
Yay! It's OUT, its finally OUT! Woo-ho! I like this chapter VERY much! And is Terra as nice as that Lucy? (I don't knoe Terra yet) And can you give me those hot chocolates you stuffed in your mouth? ^^
3EsperSYYay! It's OUT, its finally OUT! Woo-ho! I like this chapter VERY much! And is Terra as nice as that Lucy? (I don't knoe Terra yet) And can you give me those hot chocolates you stuffed in your mouth? ^^
1/24/2005 c5 10Slayergirl1362
^.^ lovely! just like the other chapters and story! this just gets more and more interesting, and now you've got be craving hot chocolate. *whines*
update soon!
10Slayergirl1362^.^ lovely! just like the other chapters and story! this just gets more and more interesting, and now you've got be craving hot chocolate. *whines*
update soon!
1/24/2005 c5 Travis Hicks
Thanks for Updateing please Bring up Chapter 6 soon The story is Good so far Even know I Hade not watched The Polar Express But I Will when it Comes out on Video and DVD I Do watch Teen Titans so please update soon
Thanks for Updateing please Bring up Chapter 6 soon The story is Good so far Even know I Hade not watched The Polar Express But I Will when it Comes out on Video and DVD I Do watch Teen Titans so please update soon
1/14/2005 c3 Travis Hicks
Please Bring Up Chapter 5 It is Good so Far Raven is My Faveriot Charecter in Teen Titans I Want you To make Raven have The Christmas Spirit and Apolgize to her Friends so please update soon
Please Bring Up Chapter 5 It is Good so Far Raven is My Faveriot Charecter in Teen Titans I Want you To make Raven have The Christmas Spirit and Apolgize to her Friends so please update soon
1/11/2005 c4 Travis Hicks
What is Raven in The Polar Express Story of yours is Good Please update soon please
What is Raven in The Polar Express Story of yours is Good Please update soon please