7/2/2008 c3 19D.J. Adams
Very good! I didn't notice any spelling mistakes. Although since I'm a fast reader that isn't surprising. Punctuation was also very good.
Keep up the good work.
Destiny
Very good! I didn't notice any spelling mistakes. Although since I'm a fast reader that isn't surprising. Punctuation was also very good.
Keep up the good work.
Destiny
10/12/2005 c3 Jessica
you should finish this story.
you should finish this story.
1/27/2005 c3 Anon
It's a fun story but I'm a little puzzled - in the last chapter, Steve had blood dripping down his arm. In this one he has two good arms and is driving just fine.
It's a fun story but I'm a little puzzled - in the last chapter, Steve had blood dripping down his arm. In this one he has two good arms and is driving just fine.
12/18/2004 c1 20kas7
Excellent cross over with MacGyver! Excellent story! can't WAIT to read what happens!
Please write LOADS more!
Excellent cross over with MacGyver! Excellent story! can't WAIT to read what happens!
Please write LOADS more!
12/15/2004 c1 91A-blackwinged-bird
Diagnosis Murder and MacGyver? This should be interestng! Can't wait for the rest!
Diagnosis Murder and MacGyver? This should be interestng! Can't wait for the rest!
12/15/2004 c1 nash
interesting start, please continue. loved the stapler line *g*
interesting start, please continue. loved the stapler line *g*