for Redemption of the Fallen4/26 c1 anonymous
Almost... you almost had me thinking this was the best fic i've read, I'm sorry but i can't tolerate Sasuke's death, I agree, he's a total teme, but with him dying throws the entire flipping universe out of whack, as long as an Ashura reincarnation exists, there must be an Inra too, you may not have watched that far but hey, that's what Google's for.
Almost... you almost had me thinking this was the best fic i've read, I'm sorry but i can't tolerate Sasuke's death, I agree, he's a total teme, but with him dying throws the entire flipping universe out of whack, as long as an Ashura reincarnation exists, there must be an Inra too, you may not have watched that far but hey, that's what Google's for.
6/19/2022 c10 WTF
I’m so glad I usually read the ending before even starting the story. PSA to anyone interested. This is NOT a complete fiction. Idk why ppl mark stories as complete knowing it’s not complete.
Don’t waste your time.
I’m so glad I usually read the ending before even starting the story. PSA to anyone interested. This is NOT a complete fiction. Idk why ppl mark stories as complete knowing it’s not complete.
Don’t waste your time.
47/17/2020 c9 Bluewarrior3
Your story is kinda all over the place. First there use to be foxes? Now there banished because of what the kyubbi did. Theres a random wolf demon showing up out of no where.. And some random girl who is half wolf or something just attacks kiba because thats her mate? At first i liked your story but now im not really understanding it. Im not bashing on your story, i hope it doesnt seem like it. There are alot of others who like it, its just not for me. Goodluck and keep writing
Your story is kinda all over the place. First there use to be foxes? Now there banished because of what the kyubbi did. Theres a random wolf demon showing up out of no where.. And some random girl who is half wolf or something just attacks kiba because thats her mate? At first i liked your story but now im not really understanding it. Im not bashing on your story, i hope it doesnt seem like it. There are alot of others who like it, its just not for me. Goodluck and keep writing
10/7/2013 c1 favian.rojas.33
okay this might be one of the best intro chapters that i have read if anything it is the best chapter ive ever read and ive read alot so i hope its a good story
okay this might be one of the best intro chapters that i have read if anything it is the best chapter ive ever read and ive read alot so i hope its a good story
12/13/2012 c10 ranbo neal
Cool chapter...I wish the story had been concluded. Excellent writing and a fun read:)
Cool chapter...I wish the story had been concluded. Excellent writing and a fun read:)
12/13/2012 c9 ranbo neal
It is a little tough to follow here...I guess you lost me...I will try reading this chapter again.
It is a little tough to follow here...I guess you lost me...I will try reading this chapter again.
12/13/2012 c8 ranbo neal
This is some superb writing...you are a wonderful writer of fanfics. In this chapter you even delve into Tolkin and his work to lay the background for the festival...really well done. Also, the last part here with Naruto and Hinata is fantastic and romantic...your style just makes their conversation seem so natural. Great and shocking cliffhanger at the end.
This is some superb writing...you are a wonderful writer of fanfics. In this chapter you even delve into Tolkin and his work to lay the background for the festival...really well done. Also, the last part here with Naruto and Hinata is fantastic and romantic...your style just makes their conversation seem so natural. Great and shocking cliffhanger at the end.
12/13/2012 c7 ranbo neal
I love this chapter...it has so much action with the sparring and matches first with Kiba and Naruto...and also Hinata/Naruto and Shino. I love the whole creative idea you have with the human form Naruto and the fox Naruto. Naruto now leads the pack...cool :) I still wonder how you will end this in three more chaps?
I love this chapter...it has so much action with the sparring and matches first with Kiba and Naruto...and also Hinata/Naruto and Shino. I love the whole creative idea you have with the human form Naruto and the fox Naruto. Naruto now leads the pack...cool :) I still wonder how you will end this in three more chaps?
12/13/2012 c6 ranbo neal
To this guy, this is a cool and funny story, at the same time...Naruto can go from a fox to a grown up Naruto when he wants to:) When he is the fox he stays with the beautiful Hinata...when he is grown up Naruto he gets to go out with her...COOL!
To this guy, this is a cool and funny story, at the same time...Naruto can go from a fox to a grown up Naruto when he wants to:) When he is the fox he stays with the beautiful Hinata...when he is grown up Naruto he gets to go out with her...COOL!
12/13/2012 c5 ranbo neal
I love your writing style here...it makes this funny chapter enjoyable to read. There are some character growth moments here also...between Hinata and her father...good chap.
I love your writing style here...it makes this funny chapter enjoyable to read. There are some character growth moments here also...between Hinata and her father...good chap.
12/13/2012 c4 ranbo neal
That was a super great chapter...it is cool the way your plot puts Naruto in Hinata's care and even the things that are revealed already about her feelings for him are soooo fun to read.
The way the chapter started out with Hinata being turned away from visiting Naruto...to her trying to help him out at the park...it was just a great chap.
The Hiashi in your story seems to be a good one and seems to really help out Naruto and love Hinata...good touch:)
That was a super great chapter...it is cool the way your plot puts Naruto in Hinata's care and even the things that are revealed already about her feelings for him are soooo fun to read.
The way the chapter started out with Hinata being turned away from visiting Naruto...to her trying to help him out at the park...it was just a great chap.
The Hiashi in your story seems to be a good one and seems to really help out Naruto and love Hinata...good touch:)
12/12/2012 c3 ranbo neal
Pretty funny actually...Naruto has a real big problem. Now what? Way to bring Sakura and Hinata into the story. Good writing
Pretty funny actually...Naruto has a real big problem. Now what? Way to bring Sakura and Hinata into the story. Good writing