for Redemption of the Fallen5/29/2006 c9 anime girl987
YATTA YOU FINALLY UPDATE! THIS STORY ROCKS! YOU MUST UPDATE SOONER NEXT TIME!
YATTA YOU FINALLY UPDATE! THIS STORY ROCKS! YOU MUST UPDATE SOONER NEXT TIME!
5/29/2006 c9 
101VFSNAKE
Kick Ass! Abouttime you updated. Just don;t you EVER drop this story...or else! In any case it was good. Now we just have to wait and see what is going to happen between these three demon vessels that are Lords. I would havwe thought Kyuubi would have been able to pull rank since he is the most powerful of the demon lords. Oh well. I take it the Akasuki are going to make another appearence soon? Also I take that the realtionship between Naruto and Hinata and it coming to ahead will happen soon as well? Write more ASAP!
101VFSNAKEKick Ass! Abouttime you updated. Just don;t you EVER drop this story...or else! In any case it was good. Now we just have to wait and see what is going to happen between these three demon vessels that are Lords. I would havwe thought Kyuubi would have been able to pull rank since he is the most powerful of the demon lords. Oh well. I take it the Akasuki are going to make another appearence soon? Also I take that the realtionship between Naruto and Hinata and it coming to ahead will happen soon as well? Write more ASAP!
5/29/2006 c9 Tsubasa Hane
The reunion scene was very confusing, as one point I thought Naruto was using a Henge to look like his old self, and that's how Rin recognized him, but the next you have Hinata refering to him as "Ten" again...but then how would Rin have recognbized him? Might wanna clear that up a bit. Otherwise...amazing story so far. I look forward to more!
The reunion scene was very confusing, as one point I thought Naruto was using a Henge to look like his old self, and that's how Rin recognized him, but the next you have Hinata refering to him as "Ten" again...but then how would Rin have recognbized him? Might wanna clear that up a bit. Otherwise...amazing story so far. I look forward to more!
5/29/2006 c9 3VASHD1
good chapter , i been waiting long time but-keep upthe good work p.s. i still hate u lol
3VASHD1good chapter , i been waiting long time but-keep upthe good work p.s. i still hate u lol
5/29/2006 c9 warprince2000
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
5/29/2006 c9 Suzerain
*doing a jig*
YATTA! You updated this quicker than I thought! Hell, now I'm confused at this, but at the same time so intruiged, my head may actually fall off.
Anyhow, loved this update (smaller than normal though it is), and I look forward greatly to the next one. My thanks to you esteemed author's for writing this brilliance, for you see, I always feel we readers are lucky to be able to read what others write.
~Suzerain~
*doing a jig*
YATTA! You updated this quicker than I thought! Hell, now I'm confused at this, but at the same time so intruiged, my head may actually fall off.
Anyhow, loved this update (smaller than normal though it is), and I look forward greatly to the next one. My thanks to you esteemed author's for writing this brilliance, for you see, I always feel we readers are lucky to be able to read what others write.
~Suzerain~
5/29/2006 c9 TimeShifter
Oh man, I'm confused! Great chapter, but now I'm lost. Hopefully the next one will clear up some things.
Oh man, I'm confused! Great chapter, but now I'm lost. Hopefully the next one will clear up some things.
5/21/2006 c8 9Chuni Luni
cliff hanger huh? *shakes head* oh well...*spots naruto in fox form* so cute! *huggles* i love this story so far! *naruto in fox form dissapears* Aw...*ahem* i like how you have him hooking up with hinata *spots naruto in his new human form* eh...anyways please update when you can! *glomps naruto in new human form* so smexy! *cough* well now i'll leave you be...naru-kun and i have some things to...take care of. *bows out of room while dragging naruto*
*sigh* eh heh...sorry about the above. -.-' i get a lil...weirder than usual when i'm tiered...all in all though great work!
9Chuni Lunicliff hanger huh? *shakes head* oh well...*spots naruto in fox form* so cute! *huggles* i love this story so far! *naruto in fox form dissapears* Aw...*ahem* i like how you have him hooking up with hinata *spots naruto in his new human form* eh...anyways please update when you can! *glomps naruto in new human form* so smexy! *cough* well now i'll leave you be...naru-kun and i have some things to...take care of. *bows out of room while dragging naruto*
*sigh* eh heh...sorry about the above. -.-' i get a lil...weirder than usual when i'm tiered...all in all though great work!
5/19/2006 c8 2Kitsune6
You misspelled Kisame as Kisume and shinobi as shinobe. The modern references, the Lord of the Rings especially, are jarring when read. They don't fit into the story well, and instead of being clever just distract from immersion in the story.
I liked the plot a lot, especially the NaruHina and Kyuubi dialog parts. Very cute and humorous.
I'm adding this to my alert list. Keep up the great work.
2Kitsune6You misspelled Kisame as Kisume and shinobi as shinobe. The modern references, the Lord of the Rings especially, are jarring when read. They don't fit into the story well, and instead of being clever just distract from immersion in the story.
I liked the plot a lot, especially the NaruHina and Kyuubi dialog parts. Very cute and humorous.
I'm adding this to my alert list. Keep up the great work.
5/14/2006 c7 4Daisy's Blog
Um note to 'fox of sweet and awesome powers', Redemption of the Fallen was published a YEAR EARLIER than Foxhound. And I'm not saying Foxhound by Kraken's Ghost copied Manatheron either. The resembleance could also have been a coincidence too. Oh, and one more thing foxxie, don't jump too conclusions. It makes you look stupid in the end if you're wrong. ^_^ Chao
Ps. Please update soon Manatheron. This is a nice fanfic. ^_^
4Daisy's BlogUm note to 'fox of sweet and awesome powers', Redemption of the Fallen was published a YEAR EARLIER than Foxhound. And I'm not saying Foxhound by Kraken's Ghost copied Manatheron either. The resembleance could also have been a coincidence too. Oh, and one more thing foxxie, don't jump too conclusions. It makes you look stupid in the end if you're wrong. ^_^ Chao
Ps. Please update soon Manatheron. This is a nice fanfic. ^_^