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12/5/2011 c2 1RisingMist
Even more interesting.

Thanks for sharing.
12/5/2011 c1 RisingMist
This looks like it'll be a fun ride. :)
12/4/2011 c11 Godschildtweety
Really good
2/19/2011 c3 4Mana Tatsumiya
Welp I thought it was gonna be interesting until you completely destroyed Sakura's character. She may be cruel to Naruto to a point and have a fangirl crush on Sasuke but no way would she ever actively plot against Naruto like this. You're just bashing for the sake of bashing and making her wildly OOC in the process. Sorry, not my kind of fic. Passing on this one.
2/6/2011 c1 D1CKD1CK6
Great chapter but saruka is still a total bitch lol still nice chapter
10/14/2010 c11 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin truble
:( I think that you should have continued writeing this...
10/13/2010 c3 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin truble
10/11/2010 c1 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin truble
:( Oh No! You KILLED off Sasuke! ! !
8/1/2010 c11 hhhhhhhhhhhhhh
6/29/2010 c11 1LunarCatNinja
I LOVE it, and I hope you update it soon! ≡∩W∩≡
6/25/2010 c1 10Haku1013
Good so far. But when Sasuke feels naruto's chakra and says it's like when he battled neji, it seems you forgot that sasuke wasn't there to witness it.
5/30/2010 c7 9Herooftimes
Veryy nice , Naruto the pack leader! But the whole 'switchign back and forth' thing never works forever.. hasnt Hinata even once invited Ten to see Naruto?
5/30/2010 c6 Herooftimes
Not sure what's happening with Sasuke, but it was a very good cliffhanger. Hope to see Sakura angered even more soon
5/30/2010 c2 Herooftimes
Definitely wish the chapters were longer, but also wondering how Jiraiya at least wouldnt have put two and two together..
5/30/2010 c1 Herooftimes
Nice idea, but it seems rushed. How did Naruto suddenly know the words necessary for the fusing. I do feel that Naruto accepted the offer a bit too quickly too.. but I'm definitely interested in seeing the next chapter
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