
12/5/2011 c7
1RisingMist
Very nice! You need to have this edited right for it to be at its very best though.
Thanks for sharing.

Very nice! You need to have this edited right for it to be at its very best though.
Thanks for sharing.
2/19/2011 c3
4Mana Tatsumiya
Welp I thought it was gonna be interesting until you completely destroyed Sakura's character. She may be cruel to Naruto to a point and have a fangirl crush on Sasuke but no way would she ever actively plot against Naruto like this. You're just bashing for the sake of bashing and making her wildly OOC in the process. Sorry, not my kind of fic. Passing on this one.

Welp I thought it was gonna be interesting until you completely destroyed Sakura's character. She may be cruel to Naruto to a point and have a fangirl crush on Sasuke but no way would she ever actively plot against Naruto like this. You're just bashing for the sake of bashing and making her wildly OOC in the process. Sorry, not my kind of fic. Passing on this one.
10/14/2010 c11 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin truble
:( I think that you should have continued writeing this...
:( I think that you should have continued writeing this...
10/13/2010 c3 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin truble
O_O
O_O
10/11/2010 c1 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin truble
:( Oh No! You KILLED off Sasuke! ! !
:( Oh No! You KILLED off Sasuke! ! !
8/1/2010 c11 hhhhhhhhhhhhhh
naruhinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
naruhinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa