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12/17/2004 c2 2VentMonster
interesting story

oh great another im sakura supposed to be with sasuke and naruto failed so he dies fic...sigh

just have her get killed off be a real help to story :)
12/17/2004 c2 9Dragon Man 180
If Naruto were to grovel before Tsunade they might figure out that he isn't going to attack the village. Heck, if he were to scratch out the word 'ramen' with a paw they would know it was Naruto. Very interesting developments in regards to the merging. I love the idea of a silence jutsu being used on Sakura, she deserved it!
12/17/2004 c2 2Little Fox Kit
hi its me. i like your story. please continue even if not many ppl review :( its always nice to get reveiws isn't it? so thats why i'm here. i'm here to encourage you. i cant wait to find out whaty kyuubi means by 'fused and seperate' or what tsunade and jiraiya think when they find out that 'it' is naruto. this should be good^^
12/17/2004 c2 xcom1a
nice. like the idea of being fused and sperate. nice. wonder how you plan on doing it. i've thought about doing sucha story, but not a writer. very interesting. so naruto stil has contorl right?
12/16/2004 c1 4ToniMan
Good chapter man, you gave yourself alot of room to be creative, hope to se more soon bye, by the wat with who did you co-wrute this?
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