for Redemption of the Fallen12/22/2004 c3 
9Dragon Man 180
Is it possible that Naruto could cuddle with Hinata in his kitsune form at some point? I love the idea of fox Naruto being used as a stuffed animal by Hinata as he keeps her warm with his tails.
9Dragon Man 180Is it possible that Naruto could cuddle with Hinata in his kitsune form at some point? I love the idea of fox Naruto being used as a stuffed animal by Hinata as he keeps her warm with his tails.
12/22/2004 c3 57drunkdragon
Well, so far, it's off to a good start. Try to make it longer. There's some grammatical errors, but they're simple ones.
Altogether... pretty good.
57drunkdragonWell, so far, it's off to a good start. Try to make it longer. There's some grammatical errors, but they're simple ones.
Altogether... pretty good.
12/17/2004 c2 Gopu
Good chapter
Good chapter
12/17/2004 c2 4ToniMan
there fused?...cool write more longer chap.(I know this is hard to do...i should know but the readers this time me have to say it!)'by the way if you thought my last chapter was evil wait to you read my next couple of chaps'
4ToniManthere fused?...cool write more longer chap.(I know this is hard to do...i should know but the readers this time me have to say it!)'by the way if you thought my last chapter was evil wait to you read my next couple of chaps'
12/17/2004 c1 lordlans
O_O
auhauuahuahuhauha! more! :)
O_O
auhauuahuahuhauha! more! :)
12/17/2004 c2 2VentMonster
interesting story
oh great another im sakura supposed to be with sasuke and naruto failed so he dies fic...sigh
just have her get killed off be a real help to story :)
2VentMonsterinteresting story
oh great another im sakura supposed to be with sasuke and naruto failed so he dies fic...sigh
just have her get killed off be a real help to story :)
12/17/2004 c2 9Dragon Man 180
If Naruto were to grovel before Tsunade they might figure out that he isn't going to attack the village. Heck, if he were to scratch out the word 'ramen' with a paw they would know it was Naruto. Very interesting developments in regards to the merging. I love the idea of a silence jutsu being used on Sakura, she deserved it!
9Dragon Man 180If Naruto were to grovel before Tsunade they might figure out that he isn't going to attack the village. Heck, if he were to scratch out the word 'ramen' with a paw they would know it was Naruto. Very interesting developments in regards to the merging. I love the idea of a silence jutsu being used on Sakura, she deserved it!
12/17/2004 c2 2Little Fox Kit
hi its me. i like your story. please continue even if not many ppl review :( its always nice to get reveiws isn't it? so thats why i'm here. i'm here to encourage you. i cant wait to find out whaty kyuubi means by 'fused and seperate' or what tsunade and jiraiya think when they find out that 'it' is naruto. this should be good^^
2Little Fox Kithi its me. i like your story. please continue even if not many ppl review :( its always nice to get reveiws isn't it? so thats why i'm here. i'm here to encourage you. i cant wait to find out whaty kyuubi means by 'fused and seperate' or what tsunade and jiraiya think when they find out that 'it' is naruto. this should be good^^
12/17/2004 c2 xcom1a
nice. like the idea of being fused and sperate. nice. wonder how you plan on doing it. i've thought about doing sucha story, but not a writer. very interesting. so naruto stil has contorl right?
nice. like the idea of being fused and sperate. nice. wonder how you plan on doing it. i've thought about doing sucha story, but not a writer. very interesting. so naruto stil has contorl right?