for Redemption of the Fallen2/13/2010 c1 Daiski
How the hell can a being of pure chakra suddenly get a body? Oh let's just toss in that little absurdly idea of Naruto being forced into Kyuubi's mindscape as well. I guess you must have ate some funny mushrooms when you wrote this disaster. Top it off with snaking names and such from other people's stories equals a failed fic. Your grammar and spelling didn't help either.
How the hell can a being of pure chakra suddenly get a body? Oh let's just toss in that little absurdly idea of Naruto being forced into Kyuubi's mindscape as well. I guess you must have ate some funny mushrooms when you wrote this disaster. Top it off with snaking names and such from other people's stories equals a failed fic. Your grammar and spelling didn't help either.
12/24/2009 c11 
31avatarjk137
Pity I was never part of this when it was in full swing. Over a year after faving and alerting this, your writing still holds up quite well.
I'll keep an eye out for the rewrite.
31avatarjk137Pity I was never part of this when it was in full swing. Over a year after faving and alerting this, your writing still holds up quite well.
I'll keep an eye out for the rewrite.
12/22/2009 c11 necroneox3d
That was, abrupt lol. I've been waitin on this story for a minute, so long i forgot about it and had to reread it lol, hopefully chapters will be coming a lil bit faster now?
John
That was, abrupt lol. I've been waitin on this story for a minute, so long i forgot about it and had to reread it lol, hopefully chapters will be coming a lil bit faster now?
John
12/20/2009 c11 3Booze The Klax Knight
damn...I almost forgot about this fic...I hope I won't have to wait another 5 years for the conclusion of the rewrite...
3Booze The Klax Knightdamn...I almost forgot about this fic...I hope I won't have to wait another 5 years for the conclusion of the rewrite...
12/20/2009 c11 101VFSNAKE
YAY! Its been awhile for you hasn't it. When will Naruto and Hinata really get together? And are you going to have Sakura be a bitch and still try to kill Naruto?
101VFSNAKEYAY! Its been awhile for you hasn't it. When will Naruto and Hinata really get together? And are you going to have Sakura be a bitch and still try to kill Naruto?
11/12/2009 c10 6Erora
Cool! I can't wait for the next chapter. I really think what you've done with the story is rather interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep up the great work!
6EroraCool! I can't wait for the next chapter. I really think what you've done with the story is rather interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep up the great work!
9/21/2009 c10 deloreanmyster
hey will naruto/tenkichi ever tell hinata his secret and will the real sasuke ever be found
gr8 story
hey will naruto/tenkichi ever tell hinata his secret and will the real sasuke ever be found
gr8 story
9/20/2009 c10 robert117
hurry and finish
hurry and finish