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3/17/2010 c11 creativesm75
2/13/2010 c1 Daiski
How the hell can a being of pure chakra suddenly get a body? Oh let's just toss in that little absurdly idea of Naruto being forced into Kyuubi's mindscape as well. I guess you must have ate some funny mushrooms when you wrote this disaster. Top it off with snaking names and such from other people's stories equals a failed fic. Your grammar and spelling didn't help either.
12/24/2009 c11 31avatarjk137
Pity I was never part of this when it was in full swing. Over a year after faving and alerting this, your writing still holds up quite well.

I'll keep an eye out for the rewrite.
12/22/2009 c11 necroneox3d
That was, abrupt lol. I've been waitin on this story for a minute, so long i forgot about it and had to reread it lol, hopefully chapters will be coming a lil bit faster now?

12/20/2009 c11 3Booze The Klax Knight
damn...I almost forgot about this fic...I hope I won't have to wait another 5 years for the conclusion of the rewrite...
12/20/2009 c11 101VFSNAKE
YAY! Its been awhile for you hasn't it. When will Naruto and Hinata really get together? And are you going to have Sakura be a bitch and still try to kill Naruto?
12/19/2009 c4 5Rose Tiger
Cute, but you spelled "Hiashi" wrong.
12/19/2009 c1 7SilentSinger948
Nice start.
12/10/2009 c10 DragonOfApocalypse
great story! :D

continue it please! :D :3
11/12/2009 c10 6Erora
Cool! I can't wait for the next chapter. I really think what you've done with the story is rather interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep up the great work!
11/12/2009 c4 Erora
11/3/2009 c1 30Fenix Uzumaki
9/21/2009 c10 deloreanmyster
hey will naruto/tenkichi ever tell hinata his secret and will the real sasuke ever be found

gr8 story
9/20/2009 c10 robert117
hurry and finish
5/18/2009 c3 nonjames
like it heheheheh
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