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6/25/2010 c1 10Haku1013
Good so far. But when Sasuke feels naruto's chakra and says it's like when he battled neji, it seems you forgot that sasuke wasn't there to witness it.
5/30/2010 c7 9Herooftimes
Veryy nice , Naruto the pack leader! But the whole 'switchign back and forth' thing never works forever.. hasnt Hinata even once invited Ten to see Naruto?
5/30/2010 c6 Herooftimes
Not sure what's happening with Sasuke, but it was a very good cliffhanger. Hope to see Sakura angered even more soon
5/30/2010 c2 Herooftimes
Definitely wish the chapters were longer, but also wondering how Jiraiya at least wouldnt have put two and two together..
5/30/2010 c1 Herooftimes
Nice idea, but it seems rushed. How did Naruto suddenly know the words necessary for the fusing. I do feel that Naruto accepted the offer a bit too quickly too.. but I'm definitely interested in seeing the next chapter
3/17/2010 c11 creativesm75
nice
2/13/2010 c1 Daiski
How the hell can a being of pure chakra suddenly get a body? Oh let's just toss in that little absurdly idea of Naruto being forced into Kyuubi's mindscape as well. I guess you must have ate some funny mushrooms when you wrote this disaster. Top it off with snaking names and such from other people's stories equals a failed fic. Your grammar and spelling didn't help either.
12/24/2009 c11 31avatarjk137
Pity I was never part of this when it was in full swing. Over a year after faving and alerting this, your writing still holds up quite well.

I'll keep an eye out for the rewrite.
12/22/2009 c11 necroneox3d
That was, abrupt lol. I've been waitin on this story for a minute, so long i forgot about it and had to reread it lol, hopefully chapters will be coming a lil bit faster now?

John
12/20/2009 c11 3Booze The Klax Knight
damn...I almost forgot about this fic...I hope I won't have to wait another 5 years for the conclusion of the rewrite...
12/20/2009 c11 101VFSNAKE
YAY! Its been awhile for you hasn't it. When will Naruto and Hinata really get together? And are you going to have Sakura be a bitch and still try to kill Naruto?
12/19/2009 c4 5Rose Tiger
Cute, but you spelled "Hiashi" wrong.
12/19/2009 c1 7SilentSinger948
Nice start.
12/10/2009 c10 DragonOfApocalypse
great story! :D

continue it please! :D :3
11/12/2009 c10 6Erora
Cool! I can't wait for the next chapter. I really think what you've done with the story is rather interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep up the great work!
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