for Redemption of the Fallen9/21/2009 c10 deloreanmyster
hey will naruto/tenkichi ever tell hinata his secret and will the real sasuke ever be found
gr8 story
hey will naruto/tenkichi ever tell hinata his secret and will the real sasuke ever be found
gr8 story
9/20/2009 c10 robert117
hurry and finish
hurry and finish
2/2/2009 c10 
2BYoshi1993
WOW! I love this story. It's really good. The last two chapters were really confusing though with the changing in point of view and all that. Please update again soon.
-Michael
2BYoshi1993WOW! I love this story. It's really good. The last two chapters were really confusing though with the changing in point of view and all that. Please update again soon.
-Michael
8/10/2008 c10 Culdnt figure a name XD
over all good just feel it could go further
over all good just feel it could go further
7/14/2008 c10 shadowstorm13
i love this story plz continue can't wait for an update
sry i'm to tired to write a proper review sry :]
i love this story plz continue can't wait for an update
sry i'm to tired to write a proper review sry :]
7/5/2008 c10 Beast-Master-Mel
I love this story! But I noticed you havent updated in a while. Are you still wrighting it?
I love this story! But I noticed you havent updated in a while. Are you still wrighting it?
1/29/2008 c10 17RaiderXV
Very good story. I like the twists you have added. Naruto in a "nice" position to find the girl he likes and not in a way. Can he actually get this one right and can he save the others from the titans battle? Keep it up you are a good author, I am not sure where you are going with this spin but you have my interest. :D
17RaiderXVVery good story. I like the twists you have added. Naruto in a "nice" position to find the girl he likes and not in a way. Can he actually get this one right and can he save the others from the titans battle? Keep it up you are a good author, I am not sure where you are going with this spin but you have my interest. :D