
9/4/2023 c8 kawaiihinahime08
awww so cute and beutiful. Naruto was stupidly clever here especially his comebacks and Hinata too, shy and to bold to enunciate a kissed to Naruto! the people at the pub was so supportive at Naruto and Hinata's relationship so sweeet.
I love the scene when Hinata was running in the rain and Naruto chased her (a romantic and cute movie scenes lol), when they are in the weapons warehouse and they kissed aaahhhhh I'm dead lol
But what I loved the most was the fact that Naruto realized that Hinata was the one for him, the one he needed all along this time was right under his nose and he's so so stupid to noticed, Im glad that Hinata slap him because of his stupidity lol, go girl!
awww so cute and beutiful. Naruto was stupidly clever here especially his comebacks and Hinata too, shy and to bold to enunciate a kissed to Naruto! the people at the pub was so supportive at Naruto and Hinata's relationship so sweeet.
I love the scene when Hinata was running in the rain and Naruto chased her (a romantic and cute movie scenes lol), when they are in the weapons warehouse and they kissed aaahhhhh I'm dead lol
But what I loved the most was the fact that Naruto realized that Hinata was the one for him, the one he needed all along this time was right under his nose and he's so so stupid to noticed, Im glad that Hinata slap him because of his stupidity lol, go girl!
1/2/2022 c8
3Kaladin77
After a string of really bad breakups, its story like these that make me feel there still hopes yet.

After a string of really bad breakups, its story like these that make me feel there still hopes yet.
4/7/2019 c8 MathewPL
My God what an amazing story. There should be more stories like that one! Good work!
My God what an amazing story. There should be more stories like that one! Good work!
8/4/2017 c8 jtscores
This is definitely one of my favorite fics. Will be patiently anticipating the next update.
This is definitely one of my favorite fics. Will be patiently anticipating the next update.
12/4/2016 c8 guest
Hinata must be an elephant then...
Hinata must be an elephant then...
10/5/2015 c10 Guest
Hello old friend, glad to see you kept at this story. I'm done with fanfiction, been done for years, but it's nice to dip back in memory lane as an adult nowadays.
Hello old friend, glad to see you kept at this story. I'm done with fanfiction, been done for years, but it's nice to dip back in memory lane as an adult nowadays.
3/7/2015 c4 Guest
I am a naruhina fan but the characterization that most fics that I have read have hinata with the backbone of an amoeba,and angsting about "Naruto kun only sees sakura" or "I am not good enough for him" or "Why doesnt he notice me" and not even talking to him then some more angsting about it and its making me want to guys gonna say that her childhood messed her up or her fathers shitty attitude thumped down her self esteem into the sewers and I call bullshit,Ive known some guy whose self confidence issue is such that he cant even walk inside a church to attend service and instead stand outside in a blindspot near a window so he can listen to the preacher and hes shown more guts than hinata did in most fics.
yeah just ranting,needed to blow some steam off after watching something called ran-sem,damned things got me in the emotional dump,anybody else fell that being emphatic w/a fictional character is being to much emphatic?
I am a naruhina fan but the characterization that most fics that I have read have hinata with the backbone of an amoeba,and angsting about "Naruto kun only sees sakura" or "I am not good enough for him" or "Why doesnt he notice me" and not even talking to him then some more angsting about it and its making me want to guys gonna say that her childhood messed her up or her fathers shitty attitude thumped down her self esteem into the sewers and I call bullshit,Ive known some guy whose self confidence issue is such that he cant even walk inside a church to attend service and instead stand outside in a blindspot near a window so he can listen to the preacher and hes shown more guts than hinata did in most fics.
yeah just ranting,needed to blow some steam off after watching something called ran-sem,damned things got me in the emotional dump,anybody else fell that being emphatic w/a fictional character is being to much emphatic?
12/19/2014 c8
6EagleJarl
Awwww. That was sweet. I was surprised that Tsunade gave the five minutes - that's a heck of a long time to leave two teenagers alone!
Also, there's something really funny about summoning the Boss Toad to help you break into the girls dorm so that you can get a goodnight kiss and do a panty raid.

Awwww. That was sweet. I was surprised that Tsunade gave the five minutes - that's a heck of a long time to leave two teenagers alone!
Also, there's something really funny about summoning the Boss Toad to help you break into the girls dorm so that you can get a goodnight kiss and do a panty raid.
12/19/2014 c7 EagleJarl
The scene in the dorm was great - very believable humor, good pacing, well handled. It was nice to hear Sakura get a little put down; she definitely deserves it. Tsunade's "let's take this outside" trick was classic. First time I ever saw that was in a Garfield strip, ages ago. It never stops being funny, though.
The scene in the dorm was great - very believable humor, good pacing, well handled. It was nice to hear Sakura get a little put down; she definitely deserves it. Tsunade's "let's take this outside" trick was classic. First time I ever saw that was in a Garfield strip, ages ago. It never stops being funny, though.
12/19/2014 c6 EagleJarl
Awwww, watching Naruto show Hinata off was just ridiculously sweet. It's nice to see it coming together and to see Naruto thinking a bit before he speaks. At the same time, I'm glad things aren't just perfect - he still makes her nervous, or goes a little across the lines of her limits. Feels pretty realistic, although I'm not clear on how old they are supposed to be now - mid teens?
The distraction of the guard was cute. That woman is terribly at her job - a kid should not be able to lure you off post that easily!
Awwww, watching Naruto show Hinata off was just ridiculously sweet. It's nice to see it coming together and to see Naruto thinking a bit before he speaks. At the same time, I'm glad things aren't just perfect - he still makes her nervous, or goes a little across the lines of her limits. Feels pretty realistic, although I'm not clear on how old they are supposed to be now - mid teens?
The distraction of the guard was cute. That woman is terribly at her job - a kid should not be able to lure you off post that easily!