
12/24/2004 c3
27dragon shadows
when i reviewed the last chapter i didn't see the arrow to the next chapter
i thank you greatly for this most generous gift
two chapters!
this one was very cute
the idea of ryou jumping up and down had me giggling
once again, merry christmas
shadows

when i reviewed the last chapter i didn't see the arrow to the next chapter
i thank you greatly for this most generous gift
two chapters!
this one was very cute
the idea of ryou jumping up and down had me giggling
once again, merry christmas
shadows
12/24/2004 c2 dragon shadows
i love this chapter even more than i did the last one
yami better hurry to get yugi a present
christmas is in an hour and a half
merry christmas
shadows
i love this chapter even more than i did the last one
yami better hurry to get yugi a present
christmas is in an hour and a half
merry christmas
shadows
12/22/2004 c2 yaoihime
Hi Yaoishoujo!
I really like this chapter. It has good grammer and a great ending. It's one of those endings where your always kept in suspence. Even I'm in suspence because this is the only story I've read that I haven't read alwready in your rough drafts. Keep up the good work and that good grammer.I think that if you can keep up the good grammer then you'll probablly be recognised for it because it's very rare to find fics with good grammer. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! ^_^
Hi Yaoishoujo!
I really like this chapter. It has good grammer and a great ending. It's one of those endings where your always kept in suspence. Even I'm in suspence because this is the only story I've read that I haven't read alwready in your rough drafts. Keep up the good work and that good grammer.I think that if you can keep up the good grammer then you'll probablly be recognised for it because it's very rare to find fics with good grammer. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! ^_^
12/20/2004 c2 Shy
Pretty please write more. I shyly can't wait to find out what happends^_^
Pretty please write more. I shyly can't wait to find out what happends^_^
12/20/2004 c2
17Obscured Illusions
Aw! How sad! u.u Besides the fact I hate Yami... but who cares? xD
You... reviewed one of my worser fics. At the time, I thought everything should be in paragraph format, like an essay. ^^; But my new work's better! *cough* Hopefully. I plan on reformatting it soon, (and updating!) but... I haven't yet. Anyways.
You mentioned you're in Cali! W00t! Go Cali! ... or not. Nope, haven't seen the Japanese version. Read the manga (up to 5...) though! Own em, too! xD
I read your review of Hitomi's Kizuna fic, and I wanted to thank you for your support. ^^ Feel free to AIM/MSN/Yahoo me at any time, I think my info's in my profile, and if it's not... then AIM: Seto x Jonouchi, msn= xxkatiekatzxx at aol dot com, yahoo is DIZSTILLEDh2o. ^^ Ja!
~Kate

Aw! How sad! u.u Besides the fact I hate Yami... but who cares? xD
You... reviewed one of my worser fics. At the time, I thought everything should be in paragraph format, like an essay. ^^; But my new work's better! *cough* Hopefully. I plan on reformatting it soon, (and updating!) but... I haven't yet. Anyways.
You mentioned you're in Cali! W00t! Go Cali! ... or not. Nope, haven't seen the Japanese version. Read the manga (up to 5...) though! Own em, too! xD
I read your review of Hitomi's Kizuna fic, and I wanted to thank you for your support. ^^ Feel free to AIM/MSN/Yahoo me at any time, I think my info's in my profile, and if it's not... then AIM: Seto x Jonouchi, msn= xxkatiekatzxx at aol dot com, yahoo is DIZSTILLEDh2o. ^^ Ja!
~Kate
12/20/2004 c2 Sami
Oh no, poor Yugi! He must feel so heartbroken! If only he'd given Yami the chance to explain! How could he ever doubt that the pharaoh cares about him, because he always cares about Yugi!
I love this story, and can not wait for the next chapter!
Love Animechik.
Oh no, poor Yugi! He must feel so heartbroken! If only he'd given Yami the chance to explain! How could he ever doubt that the pharaoh cares about him, because he always cares about Yugi!
I love this story, and can not wait for the next chapter!
Love Animechik.
12/19/2004 c1 Lizzy
wow heather that was excellent! it was well cool...although it kinda gave me the impression that Yugi was a bit selfish. although it was kawaii in many ways! dude you have to update and soon cause im dying to know what happens! literally its killing me! lol. anyway ttyl hopefully.
Ja-ne
liz
wow heather that was excellent! it was well cool...although it kinda gave me the impression that Yugi was a bit selfish. although it was kawaii in many ways! dude you have to update and soon cause im dying to know what happens! literally its killing me! lol. anyway ttyl hopefully.
Ja-ne
liz
12/18/2004 c2
142The Fellow Marauder
OF COURSE YOU ARE GOING TO KEEP AT THIS, PHARAOH-CHAN! you are because your hikari said you are! *bites on pharaoh's head playfully*
oh, Ra! *glomps smitty* you are the best ever! yami is kinda mean, but not as mean as i make him out to be. so it's okay, ne? *nudge, nudge*
AISHITERU MO, MY PHARAOH-CHAN! I can not get over at how great you are! Sugoi-sugoi-sugoi! *glomps again in excitement* This fic is AWESOME! you HAVE to continue! And I am in the process of writing one for you... so just keep looking for it, kay? *hugs* ARIGATOU! I LOVE YOU! *hugs and kisses*
Aishiteru mo,
Daisuki,
Hitomi-chan AKA SKS
ps. it made me laugh to think of jou so nice. i know he can be, but i always make him to be a selfish kusogaki. haha. It's not bad he is nice, just funny. ~_~

OF COURSE YOU ARE GOING TO KEEP AT THIS, PHARAOH-CHAN! you are because your hikari said you are! *bites on pharaoh's head playfully*
oh, Ra! *glomps smitty* you are the best ever! yami is kinda mean, but not as mean as i make him out to be. so it's okay, ne? *nudge, nudge*
AISHITERU MO, MY PHARAOH-CHAN! I can not get over at how great you are! Sugoi-sugoi-sugoi! *glomps again in excitement* This fic is AWESOME! you HAVE to continue! And I am in the process of writing one for you... so just keep looking for it, kay? *hugs* ARIGATOU! I LOVE YOU! *hugs and kisses*
Aishiteru mo,
Daisuki,
Hitomi-chan AKA SKS
ps. it made me laugh to think of jou so nice. i know he can be, but i always make him to be a selfish kusogaki. haha. It's not bad he is nice, just funny. ~_~
12/18/2004 c1 yaoihime
It's a great start! I hope that a reason for why Yami didn't get Yugi a gift will be revealed in the next chapter...and it better be a REALLY good reason too. Annway, I hope Yugi will be okay... the poor thing. Well, I've got the feeling that this will be another masterpiece when it's finished! ^_^ Keep it up! ^_^
It's a great start! I hope that a reason for why Yami didn't get Yugi a gift will be revealed in the next chapter...and it better be a REALLY good reason too. Annway, I hope Yugi will be okay... the poor thing. Well, I've got the feeling that this will be another masterpiece when it's finished! ^_^ Keep it up! ^_^
12/18/2004 c1
36Leoanda Taylor
Hey! This prologue is NOT too short! And it is soo sweet, yet sad! It's great! I think that Yami should show Yugi what HE thinks of love as a gift! Anywaz, late!

Hey! This prologue is NOT too short! And it is soo sweet, yet sad! It's great! I think that Yami should show Yugi what HE thinks of love as a gift! Anywaz, late!
12/18/2004 c1
9Si Jhanu Mar
yami! you stupid B&%@$%D! you had to say "Every one except you"! *throws a random gift at Yami* take it to the poor kid! before ya get yourself KILLED!
me likey ^^

yami! you stupid B&%@$%D! you had to say "Every one except you"! *throws a random gift at Yami* take it to the poor kid! before ya get yourself KILLED!
me likey ^^
12/18/2004 c1
27dragon shadows
concept? is great
prologue? is short
will you give as all a present and update soon?
shadows

concept? is great
prologue? is short
will you give as all a present and update soon?
shadows
12/17/2004 c1
4Prince Toki
Hey Kagome-sensei! Kool you made another fanfic! And so far its coming out good! You need to write more soon! Onegai, Kagone-sensei? *puppy eyes*

Hey Kagome-sensei! Kool you made another fanfic! And so far its coming out good! You need to write more soon! Onegai, Kagone-sensei? *puppy eyes*