for Shadow Shift11/19/2013 c4 Firewarrior123X
I'm lovin this, though... I feel like they're all taking advantage of her, except robin of course but still. Can't wait 4 the next chapter! It's kind of ironic how she thinks humans r superior yet she could nock every human on their face if she wanted to.
I'm lovin this, though... I feel like they're all taking advantage of her, except robin of course but still. Can't wait 4 the next chapter! It's kind of ironic how she thinks humans r superior yet she could nock every human on their face if she wanted to.
12/28/2004 c3 
8Razvanor
Wonderful, another intelletually and entertaining chapter. A bit trite, though. I have to ask, do you subscribe to Popular Science or do you just research the stuff? Very imaginative. Not only do you give us fantastic technologies and theories, but you back them up with a simple explanation. Once again, I await the following chapter with the utmost anticipation.
8RazvanorWonderful, another intelletually and entertaining chapter. A bit trite, though. I have to ask, do you subscribe to Popular Science or do you just research the stuff? Very imaginative. Not only do you give us fantastic technologies and theories, but you back them up with a simple explanation. Once again, I await the following chapter with the utmost anticipation.
12/20/2004 c2 8Razvanor
Well, I must say that this is a very intricate OC, to say the least. You implemented a well realized world into a fanfiction. I, quite frankly, am impressed. I was reading your author's notes, however, and it seems that to have a single piece naginata of roughly six feet you would have to pay a considerable sum just for the platinum. This is, of course, because I'm thinking of the prices on Earth and have no idea whether Aldas is rich with the resource. By all means, please continue. You, my friend, have piqued my curiousity.
8RazvanorWell, I must say that this is a very intricate OC, to say the least. You implemented a well realized world into a fanfiction. I, quite frankly, am impressed. I was reading your author's notes, however, and it seems that to have a single piece naginata of roughly six feet you would have to pay a considerable sum just for the platinum. This is, of course, because I'm thinking of the prices on Earth and have no idea whether Aldas is rich with the resource. By all means, please continue. You, my friend, have piqued my curiousity.