11/23/2008 c1 21twistyguru
very sweet and nice. I'd much rather that this been the Epilogue (not that thing that JKR gave us).

3/20/2005 c1 16Entmoot
Not too bad when I ignore the grammical errors and typos.

Except for them, it is pretty good.

Try to work on it though. May I suggest a beta-reader, or just simply edition your own work several times with the help of spell checker.

Otherwise pretty dern good. Congrats! I -do- like it!

12/21/2004 c1 7Silverone3
It worked hip hip hurray!