for The Lost4/27/2018 c7 Guest
What did you do to me I was crying the whole time though this review is a bit late though. Thanks anyway.
What did you do to me I was crying the whole time though this review is a bit late though. Thanks anyway.
1/17/2018 c16 Toolazytologin
Lol I can’t believe people would just email you instead checking your fics
Lol I can’t believe people would just email you instead checking your fics
7/28/2017 c5 Guest
Can't believe you killed Naruto off you cunt! Sasgay is WORSE than Itachi ever was! And how typical of suckura to still be a fangirl. She deserves death!
Can't believe you killed Naruto off you cunt! Sasgay is WORSE than Itachi ever was! And how typical of suckura to still be a fangirl. She deserves death!
2/22/2014 c8 x
good but there was -neechan because is female -nichan is male
good but there was -neechan because is female -nichan is male
6/9/2012 c14 someone
WARNING SOME PARTS OF THIS IS A SPOILER love the plot don't like it when it says a bet kyuubi doesn't do that naruto won't do that either but i like it when it says that kyuubi takes over naruto at night but you might be forgetting that in the manga stop reading this is a spoiler for some well in the manga naruto rips off the seal and lets the nine tails help him in the fight against madara uchia
WARNING SOME PARTS OF THIS IS A SPOILER love the plot don't like it when it says a bet kyuubi doesn't do that naruto won't do that either but i like it when it says that kyuubi takes over naruto at night but you might be forgetting that in the manga stop reading this is a spoiler for some well in the manga naruto rips off the seal and lets the nine tails help him in the fight against madara uchia
8/25/2011 c10 Dark0592
btw teh 'ramen man'... his name is Teuchi... Naruto calls him Teuchi-san.. his Daughter is Ayame if you didn't know that as well... come to me for names and spellings bcuz if I don't know em(Which i normally do) I has the power of fast internet and google!
btw teh 'ramen man'... his name is Teuchi... Naruto calls him Teuchi-san.. his Daughter is Ayame if you didn't know that as well... come to me for names and spellings bcuz if I don't know em(Which i normally do) I has the power of fast internet and google!
8/25/2011 c9 Dark0592
wait you said 5 pages... wtf? my chapters are 3-5 and they are 4-5 times longer then this... you must be using something different or some huge ass font...
wait you said 5 pages... wtf? my chapters are 3-5 and they are 4-5 times longer then this... you must be using something different or some huge ass font...
12/21/2009 c1 
8OnGuard
did you even bother to read the story guidelines so you would know what are, and are not allowed to do? this first chapter can get your story deleted.
8OnGuarddid you even bother to read the story guidelines so you would know what are, and are not allowed to do? this first chapter can get your story deleted.
8/18/2008 c11 The Guy Who Writes
OMFG IN CANt STAND IT!, ITS TEMARI! FOR GODS SAKE! i just cant stand hen ppl mispsell things it drives me nuts! . srry to burst but its torture! plz dont hate me! T.T
OMFG IN CANt STAND IT!, ITS TEMARI! FOR GODS SAKE! i just cant stand hen ppl mispsell things it drives me nuts! . srry to burst but its torture! plz dont hate me! T.T
3/10/2008 c13 Rowie94
yeah... normally id yell(figuratively speaking) at u for messing up obito's death, but someone's alredy done it
yeah... normally id yell(figuratively speaking) at u for messing up obito's death, but someone's alredy done it
3/10/2008 c12 Rowie94
ur response to Hisoka316... temari's a former member of SUNA, its sand in japanese, not sauna ( hi im temari i come from a hot room! lol no)
ur response to Hisoka316... temari's a former member of SUNA, its sand in japanese, not sauna ( hi im temari i come from a hot room! lol no)