for Stealing an Angel11/27/2005 c1 unearthlyangel89
Please Please update this story. I really want to see where it will lead. I'll give you a cookie...please. can't wait
Please Please update this story. I really want to see where it will lead. I'll give you a cookie...please. can't wait
7/9/2005 c2 
2Fairy Princess Usagi
I don't normally read vampire stories cause it's just not me, but this is pretty good. I do though want to say that you seem to have the same problem that I do in your writing. I get so caught up in trying to finish the chapter that I skip over things and I don't write them when I think that I did. Do you do that too? It seems like it. But anyway, a way to help that is to proofread. I noticed a lot of spelling errors, probably due to typing too fast (which I have caught myself also doing). Writing can be such a hard thing to do, especially when you know what you want to do, but can't find the way there. (argo what is happening to me right now for my story, the one with the reviews anyway...lol) Well, can't wait for the next chapter ...
-Fairy Princess Usagi
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2Fairy Princess UsagiI don't normally read vampire stories cause it's just not me, but this is pretty good. I do though want to say that you seem to have the same problem that I do in your writing. I get so caught up in trying to finish the chapter that I skip over things and I don't write them when I think that I did. Do you do that too? It seems like it. But anyway, a way to help that is to proofread. I noticed a lot of spelling errors, probably due to typing too fast (which I have caught myself also doing). Writing can be such a hard thing to do, especially when you know what you want to do, but can't find the way there. (argo what is happening to me right now for my story, the one with the reviews anyway...lol) Well, can't wait for the next chapter ...
-Fairy Princess Usagi
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5/21/2005 c2 unearthlyangel89
It's so been more than two weeks since this was updated (HEHE). The story is interesting. And Youer quite good at writing. Can't wait to see what happens!
It's so been more than two weeks since this was updated (HEHE). The story is interesting. And Youer quite good at writing. Can't wait to see what happens!
2/7/2005 c2 Angel of Serenity88
OMG! This was great!I just love vampire stories. PLease email me when you update, PLEASE.
OMG! This was great!I just love vampire stories. PLease email me when you update, PLEASE.
1/12/2005 c2 2cjrogue
I love it! I love it! I love it! PEASE UPDATE as soon as you can! You have an awsome story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
-cjrogue
2cjrogueI love it! I love it! I love it! PEASE UPDATE as soon as you can! You have an awsome story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
-cjrogue
1/11/2005 c2 Howard101
Wow, i really like this story. Its really good and you only have out two chapters! i can't wait to see what it will be like when you put out your next!
Wow, i really like this story. Its really good and you only have out two chapters! i can't wait to see what it will be like when you put out your next!
1/11/2005 c2 serena79
loved this chapter.. send in the next chapter soon! i really want to read the next chapter!
loved this chapter.. send in the next chapter soon! i really want to read the next chapter!