for A New Beginning3/16/2008 c16 Great-Wolf
Really nice story, though the chapters are a little short in my oppinion.
I think though it takes a little more time you could sometimes describe a little more the person speaking like in those last sentences you could have written, that Kyuubi seems shocked, though this being a entirely new concept to Naruto an Jun.
By the way it's good you stuck with the names though now they are known. ^^
Keep up the good work and provide us with more.
Really nice story, though the chapters are a little short in my oppinion.
I think though it takes a little more time you could sometimes describe a little more the person speaking like in those last sentences you could have written, that Kyuubi seems shocked, though this being a entirely new concept to Naruto an Jun.
By the way it's good you stuck with the names though now they are known. ^^
Keep up the good work and provide us with more.
2/12/2008 c16 jesseternal
coolness. i can understand all the baby probs. i have a girl that just turned 2 last Dec. anywho cant wai for the next chapter plz update soon
coolness. i can understand all the baby probs. i have a girl that just turned 2 last Dec. anywho cant wai for the next chapter plz update soon
2/11/2008 c16 
2PyxisCetus
Cool story ^_^. It's very interesting! And babies are cool; my little brother is so cute!
2PyxisCetusCool story ^_^. It's very interesting! And babies are cool; my little brother is so cute!
2/10/2008 c2 rallybabe89
so i'm guessing that you wrote this before everyone found out that his name was minato. o well ur story. what happens in ur story is all that matters. nicely written. poor hinata not knowing about kyuubi and still wondering.
so i'm guessing that you wrote this before everyone found out that his name was minato. o well ur story. what happens in ur story is all that matters. nicely written. poor hinata not knowing about kyuubi and still wondering.
2/9/2008 c16 7Tomato-Vampire-Countess
*Cooes* How sweet, babies! (I'm lucky being the youngest...He-he-he...I didn't have to put up with three babies like my older sister, though now I'm like an older sister to my 2 younger cousins...)
I love it!
7Tomato-Vampire-Countess*Cooes* How sweet, babies! (I'm lucky being the youngest...He-he-he...I didn't have to put up with three babies like my older sister, though now I'm like an older sister to my 2 younger cousins...)
I love it!
2/9/2008 c16 9Dragon Man 180
Why am I not surprised that Jiraiya has been caught peeping in other villages? I hope Hana keeps trying to bash the pervertedness out of him!
9Dragon Man 180Why am I not surprised that Jiraiya has been caught peeping in other villages? I hope Hana keeps trying to bash the pervertedness out of him!
2/4/2008 c3 22Shadow of the Abyss
when i first read that hana was his mom i thought you meant kiba's sister hana that would be hilarious i mean kiba being naruto's uncle and tsume being his grandmother he would go insane i mena going from naruto uzumaki to naruto inuzuka and calling someone his own age uncle
22Shadow of the Abysswhen i first read that hana was his mom i thought you meant kiba's sister hana that would be hilarious i mean kiba being naruto's uncle and tsume being his grandmother he would go insane i mena going from naruto uzumaki to naruto inuzuka and calling someone his own age uncle
12/28/2007 c1 leafking31
these stories are amazing i think you could write for the real anime each story good and i can't wait for the next
these stories are amazing i think you could write for the real anime each story good and i can't wait for the next
6/17/2007 c15 462635377
mna, this was just getting good and I ran out of chapters to read.
Good job though, it's kept me interested for the hour it took me to read them all.
462635377mna, this was just getting good and I ran out of chapters to read.
Good job though, it's kept me interested for the hour it took me to read them all.
4/11/2007 c15 8RasenganFin
heheheheheheheheNice please update and I will send you my beta for the wedding chapter.
8RasenganFinheheheheheheheheNice please update and I will send you my beta for the wedding chapter.
4/11/2007 c14 RasenganFin
I believe I know who the dragon is. Sasuke, he sprouts wings in CSlv2 and has mastered fire jutsu, and is an Uchiha.
I believe I know who the dragon is. Sasuke, he sprouts wings in CSlv2 and has mastered fire jutsu, and is an Uchiha.