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7/12/2009 c1 9ms.fredweasley
That was a great song choice. It was like leading up to her seclusion.

This was a great start! I'm eager to know how such a bubbly girl becomes a lonely mutant!

^_^
5/6/2006 c7 mcgurrin
i like it but where is the rest
7/4/2005 c7 2elfiehead
Hey!

Sorry that I can't leave a very constructive review, as I am so unfamiliar with the workings of X-Men. The only thing I know about it is that Magneto = Gandalf, and Hugh Jackman is gorgeous. But from what I've read, you're a very good writer, with an interesting plot.

To answer your question in the review you left for MTSS: I just randomly found the name 'Idril' on a name generator, as I was typing in random stuff to find an Elvish name that sounded right. Literally, though, 'Idril' means 'sparkling brilliance', which I found out when reading The Silmarillion.

Hope that helps! Thank you for reading and reviewing MTSS, and congratulations on a very good story!

-laura.
6/19/2005 c7 7LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead
Yup! I like this story! And i want to read more! Keep writing!
6/19/2005 c6 LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead
Awesome!
6/19/2005 c5 LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead
Awesome!
6/19/2005 c3 LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead
hm...
6/19/2005 c2 LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead
Aw!
6/19/2005 c1 LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead
sounds good...
3/24/2005 c7 Lissy
Hey great story

Ok for Ell's nickname

Umm... maybe she could just stay Ell since she's kinda an elemental.

For the virtual cookie i think both Bobby and John will like her. Though Jubilee might get jealous because of John. But Ell has to decide fire or ice...
3/13/2005 c7 3EbonyFirePhoenix
I like your story and I think she should be called Element, because she can control more that one element and it also includes he name (kinda. I really hope you update soon.
3/13/2005 c1 mom5
I like the story line sounds like some sisters I know . You need to bring the body together, paragraphs etc. Not bad for a rough draft. Can't wait to see more
3/13/2005 c7 lovemehatemejustdon'tfearme
Nice. I hope you keep Bobby with Rouge and let Pyro go after Ell. I just like Bobby/Rouge alot. ;-P This was a good chappie. Um Ell could be Elemental then you have the 'El' in her codename as well. SHe could be, okay I know lame, but Opp. As in opposites and oppose. Update soon!

~lovemehatemejustdon'tfearme (aka UK All The Way)
2/24/2005 c6 13UK All The Way
Nice chappie. You had a few malfunctions with past and present tense but nothing major. This chapter was fairly long, YAY. Um, what else? Oh, I like how yyou executed Ell's first experiences at the institute and stuff. Very well done. Update soon!

~Eclipse
2/13/2005 c5 1libra88
YAY! You decided to continue! (this is psycho88 btw!) Just a teency tiny thing, it may be due to your comp, but the last bit is all in one block and it's a bit hard to determine who's speaking, when. This is not being mean, cause I LOVE your story! This is just a little constructive criticism, I hope it doesn't make you sad! UPDATE SOON! ;)
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