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6/23/2010 c7 Michael Garcia
ok good stuff D there are a bit of errors not to many, That wave took more out of me then I though. should be thought no? and there was another but i could not find it again. re read out loud so you can hear what it sounds like LB
6/22/2010 c1 2AnEmptySoul
Awesome! please update4 I'll read the chapters later.
9/24/2006 c6 3Glasshearted Amy
hey its not a bad story, i like teen titans and this story reminds me of the good old days. you might wanna space some speech. Or at least make them longer :)
9/22/2006 c6 shadow91
i think this story is cool for real but i whant more u leave me all in to it and then u stop its like giving candy to a baby and then taking it away das sad,hope ur next store comes out soon whant to read what happens to shadow and what happens to ravin and the teen titens!
8/30/2006 c5 2Elly1212
Good chapter! It seems intersting but I still want to know who Shadow is... Is it Gohan or Goten? Send me a message or someway of telling me

-Lady Raven
8/30/2006 c2 Elly1212
I like this story, its seems promising. As for the whole Shadow business I think he's rather Gohan or Goten (When he's older) I really hope its Goten though I'm not used to reading anything but G/V and Im not sure that I will like anything but G/V but I will continue reading to find out

-Lady Raven
8/30/2006 c1 Elly1212
VERY INTERESTING... IM STARTING TO LIKE THIS STORY

-LADY RAVEN
8/17/2006 c5 3Glasshearted Amy
its pretty good, even though i never knew Raven knew how to have fun :D anyways kep updating, it's getting interesting and i used to like teen titans so much! brings back good memories! update! now!
8/7/2005 c5 Rosa Myaa
what can i say. as usual i luved it. a few parts were a bit dragging but not terribly long. very good as usual from myaa
8/2/2005 c4 ultimsaiyan
nice nice...how soon kan we expect the next one ey ?
8/1/2005 c4 a guy
nice suprising how every body went balistik quick but oh well kinda understandable good job cant wait for the next one.
7/30/2005 c4 rosa myaa
i liked very much. i couldn't stop reading until the end and we must have more. keep updating shadow it is awesome
7/26/2005 c4 saiyan cody
lol. GothicGohanagain. not saiyan cody. lol. But thank you anyway. I just hope to get all of my reviewers back. Nice chapter by the way. Looks like Raven can really trust in this fic. Thats hard to accomplish without it being out of character
7/26/2005 c1 shadow628
hey brother, i think you whent all out on this one, it was quite intresting because u made it seemed as if raven had died!when really she wasent! i think that this is one of the best storys i have ever read in my life i hope u bring out the next chapter soon i cant wait!will be fun monkey haha lol! and dont be so up evil monkey lol
6/23/2005 c1 Rosa Myaa
i read all of what was posted but i just put up my reveiw on the first chapter. but please contine it more
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